||Arhi OS|| Love,BreakUp,Zindagi 1/4/2013 - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
So Aarav a carbon copy of Arnav…

Awww…

A very naughty Arnav…

I really loved the poem…

And when you know the reason..

Yippee…

Happy ending!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
But fact and fiction doesnot go hand in hand….

Yes love and religion is still two separate identities even now…


and after reading the poem...the rest of the story blurred out!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

But fact and fiction doesnot go hand in hand'.

Yes love and religion is still two separate identities even now'


and after reading the poem...the rest of the story blurred out!!!


it does at times u know... but the love needs to be strong enuf to overcome the barriers caused by religion...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful OS... 👏
I was in tears by the end of it...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just now found this thread..! Read the first OS 'Power of Fear'..! Loved it sooo much yaar..! Oh god! It was soo emotional..! And thank god it was just a dream of Arnav, main Khushi ko marte huwe nahi dekh sakti..! :)
will read the rest of them soon, and will comment also... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello... here i am Lord Voldemort!!!😊
i just loved the OS which i just read... 
OS no  6.Poodle Doodle & Pervy Raizada
hahahahha name is so funny and so was the OS.

i'll name you Mr. Doodle. (dont mind that!)

your this line made me smile on the very first line which happens to be the first line of you OS too!!

Khushi was M-A-D mad.😆😆

my newly found best friend calls me same! even my brother!!

but that was really sweet of you to write, ha ha ha...😳

"Huffy puffy sniffly biffly poodle doodle"🤣

"Doodle Poodle Coodle Noodle"😆😆

seriously from where you got these cutest lines ever? I was all giggling mad reading them!🤣

hahhaha and at last... "I am sorry Poodle. Maaf kardey."

aww, so sweet of arnav! feeling to pull his cheeks! 

hatts of to you! Love you writing alot!!!👏



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Posted: 10 years ago
hello doodle!!!
each and every OS was amazing! but most of all The Right to Punish, made me touched, it was wonderful...

i have no words to say more!

thats all doodle...your really really a great writer!! 

Tanvija!