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  chap 1 nd 2 on page 1 nd 3rd on page 2                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Plot : Kapil Solanki  [Big Business Tykoon of the Lucknow]                                        Shyama Solanki[ Wife of Kapil solanki,hindustaani naari]                                      Ashutosh Kapil Solanki [ polite son of Kapil and shyama solanki]                         Anjalika Solanki  [ daughter of Kapil and shyama solanki]                               -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------  Kapil Solanki on the phone," kya? do crore? itne mamooli deal ke liye muze beech me mat lo,itna saara pagar deta hoo tumhe,kuchh kaam to karo.Jyada ki deal ho to bolna,warna jaane do."                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Kapil Solanki , the name of arrogent,proudy and cracked minded business man.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Shyama Solanki,a good and blessed mother,a best wife and a character with polite nature.She mostly love her son Ashutosh very much bec of his great and helping heart nature.                                                                                                                                                        Ashutosh Solanki: the name living with the ,"simple Living,High Thinking nature.ready always to help the needy people.Always inspired by the great Philosopher Swami Vivekanand,Gautam Budha.Very fresh bluish eyes,with simple dress up always.He wants to be a doctor but his father wanted him to be a business tykoon like him.                                                                                                                                                                                          Ashutosh typical ma ka laadla," ma,please baba kobolo,muze doctor banana hai,business nahi karna.                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Kapil Solanki ," yeh kya hai? Ashutosh ma aur baba,kitni baar bola hai ki muze dad bol,naak katwaega kya meri.Anaadi hai bilkul.Aur doctor banake kya karega?wahaa jitna paisaa kharcha karega,utna toh main ek din me kya ek ghante me kama leta hoo.Fir bhi teri marji,fir mat kehena ki maine samazaya nahi tuze?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Anjalika Solanki, the great arrogent as her father,but still soft hearted toward her  mother and brother.She loves Ashutosh more than the world.They both ashu and anji loves each other and that was the happiness for shyama aunty.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Subah 7 baje:                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Shyama," Ashu,tere collega ka pehela din hai,late hona hai kya? jaldi aa.Ashutosh was stepping towards her mother and tool blessing of her.Anji gave a hug to her brother and said,'Best of luck ,bhaiya."                                                                                                                                                                        Lucknow Medical College:                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Rangnath and Armaan are eagerly waiting for Ashutosh at the entrance of the college.He saw Ashutosh and his bike entering in  the college.                                                                                                                                                      Rangnath : Kya Ashutosh,aaj pehele din der se aaneka irada to nahi tha tumhara?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Ashutosh : to tu muze bulane kyon nahi aaya? muze pata hai mere ghar pe aana tuze kitna pasand hai. Rangnath sharama gaya.                                                                                                                                                                                Rangnath : are aana toh chahta hoo,lekin uncle ko dekhke meri sity pity gum ho jati hai,kuchh bol hi nahi pata hoo unke saamne.                                                                                                                                                                        Ashutosh: aage kya karega? Yeh loudspeaker aaj silent kyon hai[Armaan ko dekhkar]                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Armaan : main to apne fashion classes me ja raha tha socha tum dono ka medical college me pehela din hai to BOL kar doo,chalo shaaam ko milte hai.                                                                                                                                  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   Guys,do you liked this concept? i am making this story to some long in three or four parts,please do comments.                                                                Edited by alkaparmart - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey completely different hain jaldi jaldi continue... 😊
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Hi Alka
Nice to see a ff in a totally different concept
I like very much that you have chosen  Anji as the sister of Ashu it's very sweet .I can dream how Ashu will love her sister so sweet Alka Brilliant idea πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Part 2:                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Ashutosh and Rangnath is to enter in the First year class,and Ashutosh saw Nidhi.He shouted," Nidhi,this is our class,come on and join us.I was really waiting for you.Congrates you are with us."                                                                                                                                                                                                      Nidhi,the best friend of Ashutosh,or more than a well hearted girl.Orphan,but living with her uncle anty.Cruel hearted,only for her property,which her father was made for her.A big house,and the money for her eduction before he died.Nidhi,the smiling face always,couldn't hide her pain behind her wattery eyes.Only Ashutosh can understand her pain,her aloness.She stood first in the xii th standard in whole Lucknow.But still no one with her to celebrate,accept Ashutosh.He always stood with her.                                                                                                                                                                  She just entered in the class,and girls started," behenji aa gai.dress to dekho.Salvaar kameez,aur ek bhi ornaments nahi,yaak! Nidhi became sad.                                                                                                                                                                                                    Ashutosh," Nidhi,why you worried? just ignore them.woh ameer baap ki bigadi hui shehjaadi hai,kyohn unke baat ka bura maanti ho? chalo,ab pure 5 saal padhai karke tumhe aur muze doctor banana hai,baki sub bhool jao.Arjun ki najaro ki tarah hume bhi sirf padhai me dhyan dena hai.                                                                                                                                                    Nidhi tried hard to give him smile.From that day Ashutosh and Nidhi decided to work hard to be doctor.He always help nidhi that she didn't get time to make notes bec of his household works,which he uncle and anty commited to her.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            They always sit in the college garden,where Ashutosh help her to complete her notes,solve her difficuty.Always give her books,which she couldn't buy.                                                                                                                                       He paid her fees too.Nidhi told Ashutosh,Ashutosh,yeh sab muzpar tumhaara udhar hai,main sab chuka doongi.Ek baar main achhi doctor ban jaoo,apne pairo pe khadi ho jaoo.                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Ashutosh stopped her," yeh kya Nidhi? pehele apni padhai puri karo.Mere baba ke business se thode paise kam ho gaya toh koi farak nahi padega unhe! ulta Vidhyadan ka punya milega unhe.And he make her smile.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Ashutosh loved her but not confessed,but he knew that he love her.but he was waitng for the right time.                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Nidhi secured 10 th rank and Ashutosh secured 14 th rank in MBBS.Ashutosh was more happy for Nidhi and Rangnath secure 50 th rank.So Ashutosh,Nidhi and Rangnath decided to join as interns and complete the intership under Mr Aakash Vadhera,the Neurosergeon. So they joined there.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Dr Vadhera kind hearted person and strict doctor.He only know the language of  strictness and discipline.But still he loves his each and every intern as his own child.He knew Nidhi and her backgroud,so he paid more attention to her.He became the Dronacharya for Nidhi..                                                                                                                                                                          And that was the last day of their intership.They will become the full fledge doctors.So Rangnath decided to celebrate the day.And he arranged the party at his apartment.                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Ashutosh and Nidhi didn't like parties but for Anji Ashutosh decided to come bec he knew affair or Rangnath and Anji very well.Nidhi came there and some other interns joined there.                                                                                                                                                                                                           Nidhi was standing in the balcony of the apartment looking at the stars.Ashutosh putted his hand on her shoulder," Nidhi,kya hua? maa aur baba ki yaad aa rahi hai?"Nidhi nodded her head in yes. and started crying," haan! woh hote toh bahoot khush hote na? bus muze iss jahaa me akela chhod jaaneki kya jaroorat thi unhe?muze bhi le jaate saath me? and Ashutosh couldn't control himself and he gave her tight hug.," Nidhi,yah kya keh rahi ho tum? main hoo na? kyon fikar karti ho? main tumhara khayal rakhoonga."                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Nidhi : Ashutosh,main samaj rahi hoo tum kya keh rahe ho,lekin humare beech jo khai hai na woh kabhi nahi bhar sakti samze,tumhare baba?                                                                                                                                                     Ashutosh," Nidhi,yeh sab baad ki bate hai. Main London jana chahta hoo,further studies ke liye.Sirf do saalo ki baat hai. kyon ki humare India me Modern equipments aur treatments  ki kami hai toh main wohi sikhne jana chahta hoo.Taki main unkja humare desh me use kar sakoo."                                                                                                                                                       Nidhi uske vichar dekhke bahoot khush hui,aaj peheli baar uske dil ne aawaj di thi,lekin fir bhi woh khamosh thi. Dr Vadhera ne Nidhi ko apne hi hospital me juniar doctor ki hesiyat se rakh liya.                                                                                                                                                                                        Ashutosh aaj London ke liye janewala tha.Woh Nidhi se milne aaya.Ashutosh," Nidhi,main janata hoo ki tumhe mere jaane ka dukh hai,tumhari aankhe woh sab kehti hai,jo tum mehsoos karti ho par batana nahi chahti ho.But i will wait.Ab tum ladki nahi ho,doctor ho.so just brave.ok.Duniya pe haavi ho.Duniya ko apne aap pe haavi mat hone dena. Chalata hoo,phone karte rahoonga ur tum apna khayal rakhana.                                                                                                                                                                 And he left India.Next chap: the love phone conversation of this two and the journey of their love and love in progress,please do comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh this is so sweet OS alka ji , I liked this concept very much ...Continue plesae 😊
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guys will be back with next chap,in a half an hour,wait for me and for my chap
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love the way he is taking care of her...no trace of Dr. Hard stone...but will Nidhi fall in love with dr.Vadhera???
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Again a new concept. U r too good alkaji. Both the chapters were really good. Looking forward to the nxt update.
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Superb Alka
What a brilliant chap πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
I like the way you describe the Bond between Ashu and Nidhi
The way you build up the Story line of the  concept  in each para was superb πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Jaldi Jaldi continue please...