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gadhadada
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, although we all knew the Writer and when this Writer any piece of work coming on our way, right now its Diffucult to give this Writer Work any Big Takker... 
, then that Demon Mew, then the Poem with MAKHAR and AYESHA, the Explination of AHK... the whole Stuff...
and to be Honest what a Classical portray of ACP Sir character
, the Trail, the Team efforts, ABHIJEET Sir confrontation with Gen to some extent
... DAYA Sir Calm tone... FREDDY Sir Harry Porter stuff
... I dunt know what to say as I really wanted to watch it on Screen... the Dialogues are remarkable... The car Chase and the Hijacker Conversation was fabulous... either the Lost Character bring back was Ok... but all an all, I really want Ur master piece on screen and U inthe Creative Team of any Classical Production House either its FW... , as I liked the Start, then the Investigation started, that NH8 stuff, the Hotel, the basement, the Daughter revealing, without any strong motive why ABHIJEET Sir Shak abt the Guy and the Girl is quite Weird
, but somehow Story gripped out as ABHIJEET Sir did so many small errors, the if He has some Shak on ACP Sir daughter, but the way He investigate about it was quite ODD
, the whole Smuggling case was there, the Pradyuman daughter Theme was sidelined
, who was the GHAR KA BHEDI was also not revealed till the End... ACP Sir confront to ABHIJEET Sir about the Daughter issue was Nice... the Best thing was just when ACP Sir always suggest ABHIJEET Sir for taking some Rest... Why...
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Shagnika
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My reviews !
Story 1 : Good story. Liked how Freddy sir got a lot of
importance throughout… And also how you avoided the rest of the team …! The
pahelis were nice….its always interesting to read such stories. Specially, ACP's
sms clues were very nice. The casual talks and jokes during the case could have
been avoided, because they knew their ACP was in danger and in such a situation
they wont be cracking jokes I believe.
Duo behaved very much like them, it was good to see that… The concept of bomb in wrist watch is a
bit weird… I mean you don't expect a very high intensity bomb as small as that, may be.
Overall, it was good and entertaining... Will expect more stories from you !
Story 4 : Its very much evident that AKD had a severe impact
on you ! lol… Nevertheless, Abhijeet's behaviour was not very unusual. We all know he does have a
habit of taking up things in his own hands. I liked how you described Daya's concern
for Abhijeet throughout. Yes the entry of media and DCP and all made it a
little OTT…but then could not have helped it I guess. But yeah, I didn't want
ACP to taunt Abhijeet about Roshni at the end… Chalo koi nahi..Mahabaleshwar
waali baat ne khush kar diya J
As always a sensible story from one of the best writers of IF…
Will add more when I read the other two...
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i faced lots of problems to understand the words 
i cant match this Abhijeet at all & i was thinking who is the writer kya yaar !!! the concept was so good but AKD ne kya kar diya The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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gadhadada
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... Very Nice One, the Riddles are Good and the Phone Clue was Excellent, FREDDIE Sir Inclusion was Awesome
, Somehow Story little Lengthy and the Theme was Sidlined as well, but I love to Read, the Watch Bomb was... chalo baccha chalay ga... Very Good Attempt...
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