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ruby89

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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
ehe nice promo... break for the record of girlfriends.. Ouch . cant awit to read
july 17 i kno i kno LOL
nice job mauli Clap
-Ruby

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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 6:03pm | IP Logged

yeah the girlfriend part is Ouch but he'll change SOON enough!!!!!!LOL thanks and only 4 more days ruby didi!!!!

Originally posted by ruby89

ehe nice promo... break for the record of girlfriends.. Ouch . cant awit to read
july 17 i kno i kno LOL
nice job mauli Clap
-Ruby

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Posted: 14 July 2006 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
haha mauli cant wait for this fanfic to start too good yaar!

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Posted: 15 July 2006 at 2:49am | IP Logged
fab promo!!! LOL LOL LOL

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Posted: 15 July 2006 at 4:22am | IP Logged
awsome part!!!

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Posted: 15 July 2006 at 6:40am | IP Logged
great promo!!!

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Posted: 15 July 2006 at 7:10am | IP Logged
awesome promo
cont soon

mpatel97508

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Posted: 17 July 2006 at 10:14am | IP Logged

PaRt 1:

The sun rises. It's orange. You see a house and the camera goes inside it. You see a girl dressed in a green salwaar kameze, beautiful payals, pretty green bangals, earrings, and a nose ring. The camera zooms out and you see it is Kripa. She is setting the table. Then you see a guy coming down the stairs in blue torn jeans and a sleeveless red shirt. He sees Kripa setting the table and gets worried.

G (runs towards her)- Kripa!! Why do you do all this?? You know that we have servents!

K- Sorry Josh bhiya!

Then you see Josh's face. He smiles.

J- It's ok.. Now sit down..

Kripa sits down. They start to eat. While they are eating, Josh is explaining to Kripa to be careful at college.

J (fast)- Remember, don't talk to strangers. If you need my help ask! Don't let people make fun of you! After class, stay in your room so I can come get you! Don't go anywhere without me ok!

K (giggles)- Not even the bathroom??

J (laughs too)- No you can go there! (serious)- Oh.. and if I don't come, I will send Prithvi to get you!

K- Ok bhiya!! I get it!! Take care of myself!! I will!

J (hugs Kripa)- That's like my sweet sister!

K (hugs him back)- That's like my caring brother!

Both giggle and then apart.

J- We better get going!

K- Yeah! Let's go!

Kripa gets her stick thingy out and Josh watches her walk out the door.

J (thinking)- Why are you punishing my sweet sister?? What did she ever do to you?? (gets tears)

Kripa feels alone so she turns back.

K- Josh.. Come on? (waits) Why are you crying?

J (wipes his tears)- No I'm not! (changes the subject) Let's go!

K- Ok! But you first this time!

J- Ok!

Josh goes out the door and waits for Kripa to come. Then they go in Josh's car. It's a black BMW convertable - 645ci.

Soon they reach the college.

NeXt- AnGaD aNd KuMuD's EnTrY!!



Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 17 July 2006 at 10:15am

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