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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 12:18am | IP Logged
HI FRIEND YOU REMEMBER ME ITS angelic_cute ( Charu)
I AM HERE TO SHARE ANOTHER OS ON MAANEET 


CHARACTER SKETCH 
MAAN - HE IS FLIRTY, SMART,GIRLS GO CRAZY WITH HIS ONE LOOK 

GEET- SHE IS NAIVE, INNOCENT AND BOYS DONT LOOK AFTER HER FOR ONCE 

WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THESE TWO DIFFERENT PEOPLE COME FACE TO FACE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Other character will be added further as the stories goes!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 HIT THE LIKE BUTTON N COMMENT AS IT ENCOURAGE ME FOR WRITE MORE 

LUV
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So many of you have suggested the title but i have selected HOT VS COLD 

Please dont get sad as i will use other titles with same CS but different stories 

Please hit the like button n comment
thanks for your love and support

GUYS I HAVEN'T MENTION ANYWHERE THAT THIS TITLE WAS GIVEN BY BULBUL.A

THANKS FOR GIVING THE TITLE



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 AWESOME CONCEPT

AS THEIR IS NOT MUCH TO COMMENT SO MY COMMENT IS SHORT

TITLE

HOT VS COLD

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Originally posted by BULBUL.A

 AWESOME CONCEPT

AS THEIR IS NOT MUCH TO COMMENT SO MY COMMENT IS SHORT

TITLE

HOT VS COLD

 
thanks for the title 

with this short comment of yours it felt gr8

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PROLOGUE

Maan and Geet were totally different persons.  They have never met but

 when they come face to face it creates passion, love and above all trust

 which makes all wonder what has Geet and Maan.



Geet and Maan both are in same College. In same department of

 Architecture but they never meet as the group of Maan friend are very

 flirty but serious about future also but on the other hand Geet friend

 are very innocent and studious persons, the main motive for them is to

 become good Architect.


But when Maan sees Geet the time still, the world stops and unknown

 attraction pulls Maan towards Geet as a result Maan forgets

 everything  and wants Geet by hook or by crook



When innocent Geet and flirty Maan love each other, it going to be a

 passionate story which depicts LOVE.

What will happen when Hot met Cold, will Hot with its hotness burns the

 Cold????????


Or

What will happen when Cold met  Hot , will Cold with its coldness

 freezes the Hot?????????

 

Lets see what will comes out to be in this war of love???????????????

 

 

 Please hit the like button and comment 

 Right now i dont know whether it is OS or SS but with the response of all i will decide 

It will only encourage me to write more 

luv you all 

angelic_cute 



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Part 1

Now we are starring Geet, the new sensation.. GEET- she is the other name for life and with her innocent looks can make a man blows away ... on the other hand , there is Maan, the heartthrob.. MAAN- who can make our heart melt, and groove the girls on.

Geet study in one of the famous College of Delhi as she is a topper in her school so got the admission in XYZ College. On the other hand, Maan being a son of famous business tycoon so he get the admission in XYZ College as per the reference of his father.

It was a pleasant morning for geet as she was going to start a new phase of her life i.e. her College Life. As we say that College life is the second best phase in our life which has masti, thodi shararat, thoda sa magic and lots of fun.but itna hi nahi hai dosto, college life me kafi twists and turns bhi hote hai..

Geet was getting ready and was deciding what to wear for the first day of her College. Finally she decide to wear a simple white colored salwaar suit. After sometime she gets ready and come for breakfast.


Geet came downstairs and take the blessings of Maa.

Geet to her Maa : Maa please give me the breakfast I am getting late for the college.

Maa: Geet thoda wait kar itni jaldi kyon kar rahi hai jaane ki .

Geet: Maa main late nahi hona chahti  please jaldi breakfast dona

Maa: theek hai ruk lati hoon

Maa brings the breakfast and geet ate it. After eating the breakfast she goes to Maa's room n take blessing of her father's photo and goes with the determination that she has to fulfill the dream of her father.

Geet : Maa I am going take care and I will come at 4.

Maa: dhyan se jaana geet

Geet: haan Maa bye.

Geet goes to the neighbor n call Pinky her childhood friend

Pinky : Geet just a minute I am coming


Geet: ok come fast we are getting late

Both Geet and Pinky took the auto n goes to College. As they were early they decide to explore the College and see the notice board for the lectures and their classroom.

Pinky : Geet come I haven't eat anything since morning. We should eat something in canteen before the class starts.

Geet: ok come

Geet and Pinky goes to canteen. As Geet knows how much foodie is Pinky, she starts telling what she wants to eat like give me sandwiches, chips, burger, cold drink and aloo ka paratha. With so much menu geet was about to faint when pinky held her. With the shocked expression


Geet said : this much...oh God  you will eat alone Pinky are you mad and we will be late for our first lecture also. Please eat less so that we can go to our class.

 Pinky makes a sad face n says: oh Geet I will finish it in no time and by saying this she starts eating like no tomorrow.

Geet rolled her head in negative and says (st): Pinky ka kuch nahi ho sakta.

While waiting for Pinky to finish Geet  remembers his father's last words: Geet beta, please take care of Rano and fulfill my last wish i.e.  become a good architect.

Geet came back from the reverie when Pinky said: Geet come lets go I have finished.

With that both go to their classroom. Entering to the class Geet collides with a hard chest and close her eyes and about to fall when two hands protect her from falling and he was none other than Maan Singh Khurana.

precap: reaction of maan


So guys this is the part 1 

please hit the like button n do comment as it motivates me to write n give you all exciting updates 

N I WANT IT THANK CHOTI (MONI6262) FOR HELPING ME IN THE BANNER N THE LINK 




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INDEX


Part 2  page 29

Part 3  page 32

Part 4  page 36

PART 5 page 36

Part 6 page 41

Part 7 page 42

Part 8 page 50

Part 9 page 50

Part 10 page 50

Part 11 page 53

Part 12 page 56








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 AWESOME CONCEPT

AS THEIR IS NOT MUCH TO COMMENT SO MY COMMENT IS SHORT

TITLE

HOT VS COLD

 
thanks for the title 

with this short comment of yours it felt gr8

U R WELCOME CHARU

I UNDERSTAND UR FEELING 

AS WE ALL DO VERY HARD WORK TO WRITE 

AND IF WE GOT RESPONSE ALSO 

THEIR IS A UNKNOWN HAPPINESS 

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Originally posted by angelic_cute

Originally posted by BULBUL.A

 AWESOME CONCEPT

AS THEIR IS NOT MUCH TO COMMENT SO MY COMMENT IS SHORT

TITLE

HOT VS COLD

 
thanks for the title 

with this short comment of yours it felt gr8

U R WELCOME CHARU

I UNDERSTAND UR FEELING 

AS WE ALL DO VERY HARD WORK TO WRITE 

AND IF WE GOT RESPONSE ALSO 

THEIR IS A UNKNOWN HAPPINESS 

Truly said dear 
it gives unknown happiness 

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