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Posted: 16 January 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Beautifully penned os!!Clap

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Posted: 17 January 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Roshhh!!
You wrote an OS!!
Lol Why we will throw jute chappal at you..such a cute and beautiful OS you have written mahn!
Cute because of swayam's plan and antics..what he did was awww...to woo sharon!
And beautiful because of the Peacock!! :-)
The way you described the feathers flattering..the voice and everything!
I have seen it so i was excited to read it throughout!
And the ending was awesome...rains and swaron dancing in between...Heavenly!
Beautifull roshh!!
Write more..
and thanx to manasie for the dhamki!
pratik54000 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Rosh i am sorry for being too much late yar but you know i am a big time lazy bums and now that i am having this fever mumma is just making my life like prisoner anyways i read it finally its better late than never what do you say...

Hey if you don't like writing and you can write such beautiful story then i should defiantly bow down to you and say mate apke charan ki dhul muje de do... Seriously Rosh you should not keep that thing in your mind that this was any way bad because this was awesome and it made me viusalise everything just the way you explained everything i was able to see what the scene would be like at that time. and fortunatly i have a farm house and its raining now days in my place so i guess i can enjoy what you have written personally today only...

SwaRon are always adorable whatever situation you fit them in. But this ruthna manana business is just so amazing on them. They look their supreme cute when they are shown in this state. 

It was fantastic work and indeed one of my most pleasant reads IF till date. Thanks mansi for making her write you have actually done a big thing its as huge as making peace talk with pakistan hahahah... but seriously to make Rosh write something is really big deal...

Way to go Rosh... do write something more if you find time in your busy schedule.

Thanks for the PM.

Pratik
shaani2209 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tanzz15

Wow bud...it was just wonderful... :)
a crystal clear OS with romance everywhere...loved it from deep inside..:)..
u should write more often friend...
thanks for the pm Roshni...

love Tania...:)
thanks for such a lovely commentSmile
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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nature2

its a beautiful osClapClap
thank youSmile
shaani2209 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Neeti96

This was a really nice OS. Pls do write more and PM me when u doSmile
thank you NeetiSmile
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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjuhiswaron007

Beautifully penned os!!Clap

thank youSmile
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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by surbhimathur

Roshhh!!
You wrote an OS!!
Lol Why we will throw jute chappal at you..such a cute and beautiful OS you have written mahn!
Cute because of swayam's plan and antics..what he did was awww...to woo sharon!
And beautiful because of the Peacock!! :-)
The way you described the feathers flattering..the voice and everything!
I have seen it so i was excited to read it throughout!
And the ending was awesome...rains and swaron dancing in between...Heavenly!
Beautifull roshh!!
Write more..
and thanx to manasie for the dhamki!
Glad u liked SurbhiHug thank u for such a lovely commentSmile

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