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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

Initially I thought swayam became obne jasoos and appointed sharon as his assistant LOL
 
I loved the peacock scene !!!! sharon enjoying looking @ peacock on the other hand swayam enjoying looking @ his Girlfriend sharon Embarrassed
 
Finally they did a rain dance Embarrassed
LOL dont worry i wont make him one everLOL
thanks for liking it souwmya :)
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrash

Clap
thank you :)
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

Rosh it was Amazing
U r not getting any chappals soo chillLOL
Concept was really good
Sharon enjoying peacock dance was really cute n then last swaron dance.Perfect ending of this cute os
Loved it
Keep writting such stuffs
thank you sadiya for liking it :)
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meevee

Beautiful OS Rosh...u so adeptly described the spectacle of the ultimate romance when a peacock spreads its feathers in
Joy at the arrival of the rain and calls for its mate to join and u paralleled it with Swaron love...the bittersweet jhagda and Swayam's ingenious way of brightening her up, so much so that wonder of wonders she herself apologizedto him...and the end was magical with them and their own rain dance, becuming one with nature...

Actually since u've been so humble in admitting it i guess much of the thanx for this OS shuld definitely go to Mannu...and the brickbats to u for even thinking that this was not worthy of being posted...
meera how do i thank you for this comment?..you have actually caught what i wanted to portray :) thank you so much for SUCH a lovely comment :) m glad you liked...

and yes credit goes to manu for sure :) n m sorry for thinking it was not worthy of being postedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tanharockks

thank you manasie
yea thanks to manu for sure :) thanks for commenting...
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by creepy_classic

awesome one di...

thanks for liking...
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deep_Tanha

OMG...OMG...OMG...

that was just AMAZING roshani...and u were not going to post it...all thanx to manasie..she forced u...it was so beautiful...i was grinning like an idiot through out...the peacock dance...the sorry session...the rain dance...awww...i can't say which is my favorite moment...

the whole OS was AMAZING...SO BEAUTIFUL...this was my fav...

"Huh??? First you shout at me, then for the whole day I don't get a single chance to talk to you'then for some reason you don't even receive my calls'and now your jus saying Sorry????"he said in a, that's-not-acceptable tone'"unhuh not happening'you'll have to compensate for making me feel bad" he continued with a naughty smile'.Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

she raised her brows giving him a confused innocent look'. He held his hand out asking oh-so-sweetly  "Can I have a Rain Dance with my beautiful Girlfriend??"
Blushing

awww...so beautiful...plz plz do write more...and pm yaar ...i didn't get a pm for this one
thank you so much for liking deep..and thanks for SUCH a beautiful comment :) it means a lot..
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ABBY92

That was a really sweet OS with Swayam fulfilling Sharon's wish of seeing the peacock and in the end, having his own wishes fulfilled when he gets to dance with Sharon in the rain !! Absolutely beautiful !!
thank you so much for liking it abby :)

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