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HPHolic-3

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Rosh it was Amazing
U r not getting any chappals soo chillLOL
Concept was really good
Sharon enjoying peacock dance was really cute n then last swaron dance.Perfect ending of this cute os
Loved it
Keep writting such stuffs

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS Rosh...u so adeptly described the spectacle of the ultimate romance when a peacock spreads its feathers in
Joy at the arrival of the rain and calls for its mate to join and u paralleled it with Swaron love...the bittersweet jhagda and Swayam's ingenious way of brightening her up, so much so that wonder of wonders she herself apologizedto him...and the end was magical with them and their own rain dance, becuming one with nature...

Actually since u've been so humble in admitting it i guess much of the thanx for this OS shuld definitely go to Mannu...and the brickbats to u for even thinking that this was not worthy of being posted...

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
thank you manasie

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
awesome one di...

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Bloody hell...:0
yes, I'll welcome you with joota-chappals.. Not because this OS is crap.. Bt because itne din kyu nai likha kuch???-_^
It's awesome di... I'm speechless coz of my huge smile...:P I knew you'll write such romantic stuff very well... Jara us dare denewale ka naam batana... Muze jara usse setting karni hai...:P ;)
P.S. While reading it, I couldn't stop bt imagine Tanha here as usual..:P n that cute cute Tannu...*sigh*

Edited by Swayamonly - 07 December 2012 at 9:36am

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swayamonly

Bloody hell...:0
yes, I'll welcome you with joota-chappals.. Not because this OS is crap.. Bt because itne din kyu nai likha kuch???-_^
It's awesome di... I'm speechless coz of my huge smile...:P I knew you'll write such romantic stuff very well... Jara us dare denewale ka naam batana... Muze jara usse setting karni hai...:P ;)
P.S. While reading it, I couldn't stop bt imagine Tanha here as usual..:P n that cute cute Tannu...*sigh*
tula setting karayla devun mala mhazi arthi uthvaaychi nahi...:P

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
OMG...OMG...OMG...

that was just AMAZING roshani...and u were not going to post it...all thanx to manasie..she forced u...it was so beautiful...i was grinning like an idiot through out...the peacock dance...the sorry session...the rain dance...awww...i can't say which is my favorite moment...

the whole OS was AMAZING...SO BEAUTIFUL...this was my fav...

"Huh??? First you shout at me, then for the whole day I don't get a single chance to talk to you…then for some reason you don't even receive my calls…and now your jus saying Sorry????"he said in a, that's-not-acceptable tone…"unhuh not happening…you'll have to compensate for making me feel bad" he continued with a naughty smile….Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

she raised her brows giving him a confused innocent look…. He held his hand out asking oh-so-sweetly  "Can I have a Rain Dance with my beautiful Girlfriend??"
BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

awww...so beautiful...plz plz do write more...and pm yaar ...i didn't get a pm for this one

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