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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged



well, i tried my hands on writing shayari... nd wished 2 share dese wid you guyz...!
most of you won't b intrested in Shayaris i believe, bt i'll still suggest 2 have a look on dem!
nd i hope u guyz remember my rule "don't hesitate in critisizing, n no thanks fr pms" plyz remember dem..!


well, here it goes den...


"Zindagi ki raah me kon kiska hota ha?
Parchayi bhi sath nahi deti jab andhera hota ha...!"





"Har Nazar me ikraar nahi hota,
Har bat me izhaar nahi hota,
yun toh hazaron nahren miltin hain..
magar,
Har nazar ka matlab pyaar nahi hota!!"



"Har deewana aashiq nhi hota..
Har mohobbat Pyar nhi hota..
Pyar toh hua na kisika Pura..
Arrey! Pyar ka pehla shabd (word) hi hota ha adhura...!" 






"Zindagi ki rahon me fisal rahe the ham,
Zindagi ki rahon me fisal rahe the ham,
Jab achanak (suddenly) maut (death) aayi aur dhoka kar gayi..!!"






"Log uss waqt hamari kadra kyun nahi karte?
jab ham akele hoten hain jab ham akele hon...
aur log uss waqt hamari kadra kyun kartein hain?
Jab vo akele hon?? Javab (answer) hai? " 





"hame ye ehsas (realize) karne me itni der kyun lagti ha?
ki kisi ki nazdikiyan pehle aadat,
fir zarurat,
aur fir zindagi ban jati hai..."





"Ye reet bhagwan ne kyun banai hogi?
kehtein hain aaj nhi toh kal tu parayi hogi...!
Deke janam, pal poskar jisne hame bada kiya..
Aur waqt aaya toh unhi hathon ne vida kiya!..
Tut ke bikhar jati ha hamari zindagi vahin..
aur uss bandhan me pyar mile zaruri toh nahi..!!
Kyun rishta hamara itna ajeeb hota ha...?
kya yahi ham betiyon ka naseeb hota ha?"


 
****




"In my lyf i learned how ...
2 care, 2 hate..
2 smile, 2 b happy..
2 work hard, 2 b strong..
even 2 get hurt!
but forgive me... i never learned how to stop loving yew!"


"Wen sum1 luvs u..
u dont realize it..
wen u realize it, itz too late..
u alwayz luv d one, who leaves you...
n u never luvs d one who loves you!"


"1st love is important...
but,
Last love is vrry important...
cuz,
1st love changes nature..
n,
last love Changes lyf!"

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hope u guyz lyked it?
please leave ur precios reviews!
will b waiting..
n dont hesitate in Critisizing..
n mind you, NO THANX FOR PM!!!!

-Rashi Wink


Edited by Rashi_d3 - 24 April 2013 at 2:11am

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
This was such an amazing work Rishu Big smile...
Very well done , mujhe nai pata tha tumhe 'Shayari' bhi ati hai LOL...
But likha toh kya likha , really awesome Big smile...
Jo last wala tha na 'Beeti' wala , i personally liked it...
It really was so true Smile...
Loved it Rishu Heart...
Keep it up Wink...



Edited by Roxxy47 - 05 December 2012 at 10:51am

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
amazing lines 

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
res update soon... loved the shayaris a lot...

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
tu shayari v likhti hai Shocked
aur kya kya kar sakti hai Stern Smile
good work rash Clap

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Ohh woww. . . .
They r realy awsome. .
Bt,i just wanna say tat,
hum jab kriyaansh ki imagine kerte hai,
toh we see their true love,intensd chemistry,
love,
care,
affecting 4 each othr. . .
So,woh sad vali shayari's r not at all 4 them. . .
Tat my p.o.v. . .
M realy sorry if u felt bad. . . . . .
Bt,all the shayaris r just super awsome. .

Edited by Madhukumari - 05 December 2012 at 11:07am

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
omggg dey r sooo amazinggg... Loved them all... Really really amazinggg... Hats off to u dear... :D

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