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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
As much as I loved the execution of today's opening section where everyone is reciting the poetry, I was not happy that they had reworded my favorite poetry from ZNMD. I am sure you all figured out that the poetry was paraphrased from Javed Akhtar's poetry for ZNMD "toh zinda ho tum"...and if you didn't then here is the original one:

I had no problem with them using this but the rewording of this poem (they made it passive) killed the effect and depth for me...I don't know but I feel had they kept the original one, the impact of the moments would have been so much better.

Anyone felt the same way?

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
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