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Ariya's FF: Mar k bhi dil say part 24 pg 35 d7-2 (Page 6)

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Lvly update
akhir ye simar chahati kya hai vo arjun se es taraha bat kyuin ker rahi jai
cant wait i wana to more about simar
poor arjun
plz conti soon
n thanks for pm
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Hey ...
That was amazing ...
Awww Arjun is hurt n he's apologizing riya for everything ...
Plzzz update soon :)
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Part 5

 

Next day morning in ETF.

Arjun reachs ETF very early He thought that at this time no one is in the office he want to spend this time alone with him and her merory, but he was wrong when he sees simar is already there.

Simar: Goog Morning sir,

Arjun: good morning.

She is thinking  that he is angry with her, but he answer her very softly.

Simar: Sir aap ki cutting chai'.

Arjun: thanks'''..

Simar: mujahy aap say kuch kehna hai.

Arjun: ab bhi kuch kehany ko baqi rah gaya hai kya, ya tumhain Riya ki phir koi khami nazar aa gai jot um mujhay batana chahti ho,

Simar: Sorry Sir, mujhay aap say istarha baat nahi karni chaheay thi par kya karun jab aap Riya ki favour mei kuh kejtay ho toh mujh bardast nahi hota. Please mujhay maaf kar dian mei nay buhat ghalat kya hai.

Arjun: its ok , par tum nay koi ghalti nahi ki bulkay tum nay toh mujhay meri ghalti ka ehsaas dilaya hai kash mei bhi us say isitarha maafi mang pata par ab dyr ho chuki hai.

Simar : ek baat aur poohni hai aap say.

Arjun: poocho.

Simar: roshini ki kya importance thi aap ki life mei.

Arjun: Roshini he smiles by taking her name Roshini hi toh mera sab kuch thi , mera dil meri jaan meri dhadkan sab kuch wo kya gai k meri zindagi say saray rishtay hi lay gai na mei kisi ka pati na na kisi ka dost aur na hi kisi ka beta har rishta wo lay gai apnay sath aur mei akela reh gaya.

He wants to brust with tears but he controlled She sees his tears and try to console him.

Arjun: nahi ab mei nay faisala kar liya hai ab mei aur aansoo  us ki yaaad mei nahi bahaun ga wo zinda rhay gi hamesha meri yaadon mei ek achi yaad ki tarha.

Simar smiles.

Rathode enters and seeing them that both are smiling.

Rathode: toh dosti ho gait um dono mei.

Arjun: ha saam, sorry Rathode.

Rathode smiles ( ab mujhay lagta hai k mera arjun wapis aa rha hai apni purani life mei)

Arjun: kya soh rhay ho.

Rathode: kuch nahi kuch purani batein aur kuch puranay loog''''''.

Arjun whispers in his ears:  kyaun yaadon mei mera bhi koi zikar hai.

Rathode: Ha chalo ab wapis aa jaen hum case ki taraf.

Arjun: phir case''.

Rathode: ha tum kab say cases say ghabranay lagay after all ye tumhari favourite hobby hai.

Shree and chotu enters in the rooms and chating with eah other.

Arjun: ye koi time hai aanay ka.

Shree sees his watch.

Shree: Sir hum time par hi aaey hai.

Simar interrupts: Shree arjun sir aaj jaldi aa gay hain toh unheen lagta hai k sab late hai kyun sir.

Arjun gives her angry look.

Arjun: Rathode case toh batao kya case hai.

Rathode: koi case nahi hai mei mazak kar rha tha

Arjun: what?

Rathode: mei kisi zarori kaam say bahir ja rha hunt um loog apnay apnay pending works omplete kar lo and he leaves.

Chotu: I have no pending work .

Shree: mei too.

Simar: aur mera koi work hi nahi hai jo pending hoga.

Trio smiles and Arjun silently sees them.

Shree: ek kaam kartay hai kyun na hum antakshri kehlen

Chotu: wo dekh Arjun sir ko maar dalen gay tujhay.

Shree: ye yahan kyun baithay hai koi kaam nahi hai phir ye yahan say jatay kyun nahi.

Chotu: tujhay pitna hai kya unsay

Shree: nahi.

Arjun: agar antakshri khelni hai toh tum sab kheel saktay ho par itni aawaz k meray kanoo tak na pohnhay samjhay ya samjhaun''''''..

Simarwhispers: in kay kaan toh buhat teez hain

Arjun: aur dimagh bhi''''

Shree: chup ho ja yaar .

Chotu: shru Karen.

Shree: par arjun sir.

Simar: unho nay ijazaat toh day di hai na.

Shree: ok.

Chotu: kis word say shru Karen.

Shree: simar tumhara favourite song kaun sa hai.

Simar: mera favourite song, nahi nahi bataun gi tum hansoo gay.

Shree: nahi yaar batao na.

Simar:  ek sad song hai zara old hai.

Chotu: kaun sa.

Simar:" tujha say naraz nahi zindagi heeran hun mei"

Shree: aaisay nahi gaa k sunao

Simar: ok and she starts singing.

" tujh say naraz nahi zindagi heeran hun O Hairaan Huun Main
Tere Masum Sawaalon Se Pareshaan Hoon Main
O Pareshaan Hoon Main

Jeene Ke Liye Sochaa Hi Nahi
Dard Sambhaalane Honge

Jeene Ke Liye Sochaa Hi Nahi
Dard Sambhaalane Honge

Muskuraaye To, Muskuraane Ke Karz Utarne Honge
Muskuraauun Kabhii To Lagataa Hai
Jaise Honthon Pe Karz Rakhaa Hai

Ho Tujhse Naaraaz Nahiin Zindagi
Hairaan Hoon Main
O Hairaan Huun Main

[Zindagii Tere Gam Ne Hamein
Rishte Naye Samajhaaye ]

He recalls Riya's memories.

Mile Jo Hamein Dhoop Mein Mile
Chaanv Ke Thande SaayeHo Tujhse Naaraaz Nahin Zindagi
Hairaan Hoon Main
O Hairaan Huun Main

Aaj Agar Bhar Aai Hain
Boondein Baras Jaayengi
Kal Kyaa Pataa Inke Liye
Aankhein Taras Jaayengi
Jaane Kab Gum Kahaan Khoyaa
Ek Ansuun Chhupaake Rakhaa Thaa

Ho Tujhse Naaraaz Nahin Zindagi
Hairaan Hoon Main
O Hairaan Huun Main

Tere Masum Sawaalon Se Pareshaan Hoon Main
O Pareshaan Hoon Main

All the times Riya's face revealing infront of his eyes.

Flashback***********

Shree: tujhay wo song sunana ho ga jot u abhi gunguna rhi thi.

Riya: no shree no.

Shree: please yaar u song say arjun sir k liay tera pyaar saaf zahir hota hai''.

Riya: no way,

Shree: tujhay teri kasam.

Riya: tum nahi mano gay mei nay kaha na no.

Shree: tujhay teray arjun sir ki kasam.

Riya: Shreee

Shree: ab toh sunana hi paray ga.

RiYa: ok

They forget that Arjun was present there.

Riya: Meray pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam

Teray naam say shru teray naam par khatam

Teri khushi say hai khushi teray gham say hai gham,

Teray naam say shru Teray naam par khatam

Bina teray ek paal bhi mujh say raha nahi jaey

Bina teray ek paal bhi mujh say raha nahi jaey

Ye door door rehna, She sees arjun and She lost in his eyes,

Ye door door rehna ab saha nahi jaey,

She sings and lost in his deep eyes.

Teri pyaar bhari banhoon mei hi niklay ga daam"

Flashback end*********

Arjun scared while recalling the death scene of Riya and her song's last line ( teri pyar bhari bahoo mei hi niklay ga dam), how she takes her last breath in his arms''..At this moment he forget Roshini who was she what was her importane in his life He forget each and everything he only remember Riya.

He shouts: Riyaaa'''

He spread his both hand like this that she is in his arms,and sees  his empty arms he cries

Arjun: nahi ye nahi ho sakta wo nahi ja sakta mei nahi janay dunga usay kahin nahi janay dunga wo mujhay choor kar nahi ja sakti

Shree, Simar and chotu stands by hearing this and seeing eachother blank face, Sameer rathode enters at that moment he runs towards him.

Rathode: what happened Arjun?

Arjun: saam wo chali gai mujhay choor k inhi bahoon mei us nay daam tora hai, us nay kaha tha wo meri bahoon mei marna chahti hai, hai na kaha tha na shree, tum thay na us waqt , saam par ye sach nahi hai na wo nahi gai hai na wo yahi hai na wo yahi hai'''.

Rathode: arjun roshini maar chuki hai ha ye sach hai us nay teray bahoon mei dam tora par yeh bhi sach hai k wo wapis nahi aaey gi ''''.

Arjun: Roshni nahi aaey gi par       '''''.

Rathode: mujahy lagta hai tujhay aaram ki zarorat hai mei tujhay ghar hor dayta hun.

Arjun: nahi saam '''.




Edited by sumbulqaiser - 11 December 2012 at 10:19am

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Oh no... i feeling so bad for Arjun... plz bring Riya back... nice part update soon...
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wow... lovely update...
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nice...!!!! this simar is an interesting case

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