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wonderful  start  dear!  continue  soon!!!!!ClapClap

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nice update soon

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awesome start..

continue soon..Smile

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Part 2B:


Rathode: Rawate ek naya case aaya hai.

Arjun: kaun sa case.

Rathode: Tiwari Group Of Industries kay malik Mr. Vivek Tiwari ka murder, Reason over dosage of sleeping medicine, result death of Mr. Tiwari . Yun toh ye case ek suicide case hai jab kay unki wife Mrs. Reena Tiwari ka kehna hai kay un ka murder huwa hai.

Arjun : Let's go to the murder spot.

Rathode: Yes let's go team.

On the murder Site.

Simar: death body ko dekh k lagta hai ka ye suicide case hai.

Arjun:  Rathode Postmortem reports kya  kehtin hain.

Rathode: Over dosage of sleeping peels . According to this reports inhen sleeping peels laynay ki aadat thi, us raat bhi unhon nay 4 to 5 peels li then..but…

Arjun: but what Rathode.

Rathode: Rawate pehlay inhon nay sleeping medicine toh li magar phir khanay k sath dobara kafi wafi meqdar mei li atleast 10- 15 peels, result over dosage ki wajah say central artery blocked and he died….

Arjun: What agar unho nay pehlay hi sleeping peels lay li then toh dobara kya zarorat thi laynay ki. Kuch toh choot rha hai Rathode

Rathode: laynay ki nahi dobara unhen peels di gai hain.

Shree interrupts between them.

Shree: sir , agar unhon nay pehlay hi sleeping peels lay li then toh iska matlab wo sonay ja rhay thay, magar phir khana khana kuch ajeeb lag rha hai….

Arjun: par unhon nay dobara khana khaya hi kyun…

Rathode: yahi toh problem hai Rawate, mujhay lagta hai yeh suicide case nahi murder hai, Agar ye suicide hota toh Mr. Tiwari ko sari peels ek sath hi khani chaheay then na k alag alag..

Arjun: par wagha kya ho sakti hai…Shree is room ka kona kona dhondo kuch toh zaroor milay ga

Shree: yes Sir.

Arjun: Rathode let's go to meet Mrs. Tiwari.

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Arjun: Mrs. Tiwari kya ap kay pati ki kisi say koi dushmani thi.

Mrs. Tiwari: Nahi sir, wo toh buhat achay insaan thay unki kisi say ka dushmani hogi. Wo toh hare k ki dil khool k madad kartay thay un k employees bhi un say buhat khush hai, mujhay nahi lagta k kisi say unki dushmani hogi…

Rathode: Mrs. Tiwari aap humain ye bataen k aap kay pati yahi Mr. Tiwari kab say sleeping peels use kartay thay.

Mrs. Tiwari: kafi arsay say , actually unheen is k baghair neend hi nahi aati thi…

Rathode: wo ek baar mei kitni peels laytay thay.

Mrs. Tiwari: shru mei toh ek ya do liya kartay thay par aaj kal unhen neend nahi aati thi tab wo 3 say 4 peels lay liya kartay thay…..

Arjun: wo aaj kal kisi baat say pareshan toh nahi thay.

Mrs. Tiwari: nahi sir wo bilkul normal thay infact kal raat ko hi meri un say baat hui thi, mujhay nahi lagta k wo suicide kar saktay hain.

Arjun: ok madam ab hum chaltay hain zarorat pari toh aap ko phir takleef daynay hazir hungay.

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Outside the Tiwari mansion.

Rathode: toh tumhain kya lagta hai Rawate.

Arjun: humain Mr. tiwari k office jana chaheay ho sakta hai k humain  wahan say kuch pata chalay….

Rathode: o.k Rawate.

Arjun: aur shree ko kehna k Mr. Tiwari k phone calls k records bhi magwa lay.

Rathode: Tumhain aaisa kyun lagta hai k un k call records humari kuch madad Karen gay.

Arjun: Shaid tum nay observe nahi kya rathode, Mr. Tiwari k Death body k pass unka cell phone gira tha jis ka back cover open tha. Agar Mr. tiwari suicide karaty  toh unka cell phone ahi halat mei hota, mujhay lagta hai khoni ka maqsad un ki cell phone say kuch information layna tha magar kya ye pata karna hoga.

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Whole Team is in the Tiwari Group Of Industries.

Arjun: Hello Ms. Shewta I am ACP Arjun Rawate from ETF, investigating Mr. Tiwari murder case.

Swetal: Sir  ka murder kab kaisay, ye nahi ho sakta.

Arjun: relax aaisa huwa hai Ms Shewta. Aap humain ye bataen k aap Mr. Tiwari ki PA hain na.

Shewta: yes Sir.

Arjun: Aaj kal wo kisi baat ko lay k pareshan toh nahi thay.

Shewta: nahi Sir.

Arjun: aap logon k sath unka behavior kaisa tha.

Shewta: He is very nice man, aur apnay staff ka wo buhat khayal rakhtay thay.

Shree  enters in the room.

Rathode: ha shree kyat um nay saray employees say baat kar li hai kya kaha un logo nay.

Shree: yes sir un sab ka kehna hai k Mr. Tiwari nahayat hi aachay insaan thay, koi unka murder kyun karay ga, jab k unki kisi say dushmani bhi nahi thi.

  This is all part ko I try to update as soon as possible thanks for liking

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Hey ...
Read both the updates in 1 go ...
N just loved it ... :)
The case is really interesting ...

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Part 3.

Rathode: aur unka cellphone records .

Shree: yes sir yeh raha.

Rathode took the paperz from shree.

Shree: more than 90% case mei katil ka koi na koi maqsaad hota hai par is case mei katal ka koi motive samajh mei nahi aa rha hai.

Simar: Oh come on Shree Tum bhi us looser riya ki tarha batein karnay lagay ho , wo Riya aur ki bekaar ki analyses humari kabhi peecha nahi choren gi.

Arjun: Shut up simar, Shree bilul theek kah rha hai hai, by the way tumhain koi haq nahi banta humaray team members ki istarha insult karnay ka.

Simar: Aap bhi jantay hain na usay kitni irresponsible thi hameha koi na koi problem create karti thi ,waisay aap bhi toh roz roz uski insult kya kartay thay aaj mei nay kit oh kya ghalat kya, after all hum junior apnay seniors say hi toh seekhtay hain . Am I right sir.

Arjun clenched his hand and want to hit her but Rathode seeing the Arjun's reaction. He put his hand on his shoulder

Rathode: relax Rawate , and simar  you have no right to say bad word against our team members.

Simar: yes sir.

But Arjun heart really hurt by hearing the truth about his past behavior with Riya.

Arjun POV "Did I really hurt her, but when, kya usay bhi aaisi hi takleef hui hogi jaisay aaj mujhay ho rhe hai, kyun wo itni door chali gai k ab mei us say mafi bhi nahi mang sakta, kash tum ek baar wapis aa jao ta k mei tum say mafi mang sakun, mei umar bhar is guilt k sath kaisay jeeun ga"

They all left there except Arjun.

In a room during investigation:

Rathode to Simar: Why you insult him?

Simar: Kya mei nay kuch ghalat kya Sir?

Rathode: Tum aachi tarha janti ho Arjun ko phir bhi…………

Simar: ha janti hun unhen aachi tarha janti hun k ACP Arjun Rawate sirf apnay baray mei sochta hai, kisi k emotion ya feeling ki usay koi qadar nahi hai, Wo aur uski wife Roshini bus yahi uski dunya hai aur bhi log hain dunya mei magar usay kisi ki kya fikar, wo nahi janta k kisi aur ko bhi uski zarorat hai, par wo apnay gham ko bhulay toh janay na……….Waisay bhi sir mujahy un kay sath kam karnay ka koi shoq nahi hai.

In ETF Office:

Chout: Sir, Mr Tiwari ka phone call k records k mutabiq inho nay is number par kai baar call ki hai, Infact last caller name bhi isi shaks ka hai.

Rathode: Toh pata karo ye number kis ka hai.

Chotu: Sir, ye number Chetanya ka hai.

Arjun: Chetanya…..

Rathode: kahen ye wohi Chetanya toh nahi hai jo kafi saray scandle mei involve hai, ye wohi toh nahi hai jis ka blue flims ka business hai aur kafi larkiyun ko blackmail karta hai.

Chotu: yes Sir yeh wohi hai.

Arjun: toh Mr. Tiwari ko is say kya matlab?

Rathode: yahi toh mei soch raha hun rawate, pata karna paray ga par kaisay.

Arjun: Is ka jawab sirf chetanya hi day sakta hai , Shree uska number trace karo.

Shree: yeh kam already mei nay kar liya hai Sir, Chetanya Is waqt Juhu k kareeb ek bear baar mei hai.

Arjun: Good job shree.

Shree: thanks Sir.

Rathode: Juhu mei chupa betha hai ye Let,s go team.

Arjun: ek minute simar tum kahan jar hi ho, tum yahi raho gi.

Simar: but why sir?

Arjun : kyun k tum humari team ka hissa nahi ho. Behtar hoga k tum jahan say aai ho wahan wapis chali jao.

Simar: mei nay buhat mehnat ki hai yahan tak pohnachnay k liay is tarha mei wapis nahi ja sakti.

Rathode: Why Rawate?  Tum is tarha behave kyun kar rhay ho

Arjun: tum sab kuch jantay ho phir bhi pooch rhay ho.

Rathode: rawate ye iska first case hai please Rawate is bhi solve karnay do case.

Arjun: ok

In the Bear baar, Chetanya sir near a chair having wine on his hand.

Shree: Sir wo rha chetanya………………..

Arjun: pakar lo isay ye bach k janay na paey.

Chetanya runs by seeing them But Simar caught him.

Simar: ja kahan rhay ho bach k .

Rathode slapped him.

Rathode: batao kya baat hui hai Mr. Tiwari say , kyun itni calls ki hai tum nay unheen , kahin unhen bhi toh blackmail nahi kar rhay thay.

Chetanya: nahi sir mei kyun unheen blackmail karun ga, after all wo meray boss hain, yeh blackmailing toh mei unhi k kehnay par karta hun.

Rathode: kya bakwaas kar rhay ho tum ye kaisay ho sakta hai. Wo buhat hi shareef insane thay.

Chetanya:  Sir ye bakwaas nahi hai wohi mujhay videos daytay thay aur mei ……………….

Arjun: Kya sach keh rhay ho tum.

Chetanya: yes sir…………

Rathode: Rawate ye case toh uljhta hi ja rha hai ab katil ka kaisay pta chalay ga.

Arjun: par mujhay lagta hai k hum katil k behad nazdeek hai. Chalo rathode

Rathode: kahan Rawate.

Arjun: murder spot par.

Rathode: ok

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Mujhe aise kyun laag raha hai jaise 'kuch Chut Raha Hai'? Aisa feelings ho raha hai jaise Riya wapas aayegi. Jaise Simar has come to make realize Arjun the importance of Riya in his Life...

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