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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Wao wao wao lvly update,
per ye riya kitni pagal hai,
ese etna bhi nahi pata ,
ki vo ladki koe or nahi ,
balki vo khud hai,
offf ab ye arjun kitna time lagayega ane mein,
plz update soon

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awsum...!!!Smile
continue soon...!!!!

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Awesome start. 

I love the emotion Arjun displayed for Riya. I wish in the show they showed same emotion toward Riya (I am missing her guys. I can't imagine the show without her. Its hard to watch the old moments cause she isn't here anymore). 

Only world to describe part 1 outstanding of emotion and Arjun's speech at the party. It truly shown his thoughts for Riya. 

Part 2a - Gosh Simran and her sharp answer to Arjun. Its very bold and I know Arjun as some doubts on her. Something is hidden. 


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PART 15

Riya to herself: kahan rah gay abhi tak unhen aa jana chaheay …

Arjun opens the door… Riya runs towards the door;

Riya: kahan reh gay thay aap kab say aap ka intezar kar rhe hun aur ye sab kya hai pora mall utha laen aap ….

Arjun: isay pakro toh kahen mei inhen shambhaltay sambhaltay gir na jaun…

Riya: laen mujhaydyn. Ab kahan chalen aap…

Arjun: baqi saman lanay…

Riya: aur bhi baqi hai kuch…

Arjun: itnay mei hi ghabra gai abhi toh poora saman baqi hai… chalo car say lanay mei meri help karo…

Riya: itna sab Sir, kya hai ye sab….

Arjun: tumharay liay dresses…

Riya: mei hamesha k liay thori rehnay aai hun yahan kuch dino mei chali jaun gi phir ye sab…

Arjun: ab tum kahin nahi jao gi Riya… Aacha ye dekho ye dress kaisi hai …

Riya: buhat aachi hai par ye dono dresses toh same hain na….

Arjun: ye dono nahi ye charo dresses same hain….

Riya: chaar chaar same dress, ye kiya karat hain aap…

Arjun: dekho Riya pehlay mei nay socha k ye colour lun par mujhay samjh nahi aaya k tum par ye colour suit karay gay a ye colour mujhay toh ye colour zayda pasand tha par mujhay laga k tumhain ye pink colour zayda aacha lagay ga isliay mei nay ye saray dresses alag alag colour mei lay aaya.

Riya: aur ye kya hai Sir,

Arjun: tumhain isi tarha k casual dresses pasand hain na toh alag alag style mei mei nay ye lay liay….

Riya: aur is mei kya hai….

Arjun: is mei salwar suit hai har tarha k light embriodary, heavy embroidary, different styles k different suit hain…. I don't know tumhain ye salwar suit pasand hai ya nahi par kal tum par wo salwar suit buhat aacha lag rha tha isliay mei nay lay lya….

Riya open a box: is mei kya hai….

Arjun: is mei sariyan hain…………..

Riya: sariyan mei aur sari nahi sir, aur itni heavy  kabhi nahi sir aap nay ye dialy wear k liay shopping ki hai ya kisi party warty k liay ….

Arjun: kyun kya burai hai is mei kitni haseen hai ye saari aur tum par buhat aachi lagay gi

He puts Sari on her shoulder : dekho kitni aachi lag rhi hai ye tum par… aur ye dekho ye sab saray dresses say matching bangles slippers aur purses. Kaisay lagen ye sab..

Riya: buhat aachay hain Sir, par really Sir mujhay in sab ki koi zarorat nahi hai, itnay saray dresses ki kya zarorat thi, mei yahan kuch din k liay hi aai hun Roshini ji k dresses hain unhen mei pehan layti itna sab kuch aap nay kyun kya….

Arjun: sshhh……….. mei nahi chahta k tum kisi ki uttran pehno, aur wo dress mei nay tumhain is laiy pehanay di k us dress ko Roshini nay kabhi nahi pehna tha…Samjhi…

Riya: par Sir…..

Arjun: no argument Riya…

Riya: really Sir ye sab kuch buhat zayda hai.

Arjun; kaha na no Argument …

Riya: par itni chezain mei rakun gi kahan .

Arjun: mei batata hun kahan rakhi jaen gi ye Chezain… jaldi say inhen bedroom mei shift karo..

Riya: abhi is waqt..

Arjun: ha kyun koi problem.

Riya: nahi…

Arjun: to chalo…

In the bedroom..

He opens his wadrobe….

Arjun: nahi yahan nahi aa sakti ye chezain ye mera portion hai .

He opens the next portion of his wadrobe….

Arjun: ye theek hai…

Riya: par Sir ye toh Roshini ji ka portion hai mei yahan ye chezain kaisay rakh saktin hun…

Arjun: oh tum in chezoon ko dekh k pareshan ho rhi ho lo abhi hata dayta hun inhen…

He collects all the accessories from Roshini's wadrobe and put them in a suitcase and locked them…

Riya: ye kya kar rhay hai aap…

Arjun: lao sari dresses do mujhay mei set karta hun…

Riya: Sir…

Arjun: mei tumhara boss nahi hun yahan jo har waqt mujhay Sir sir bulati ho… next time no Sir ok.

Riya: ok Sir…

Arjun: phir..

Riya: sorry sir.

Arjun: tum nahi sudhro gi Riya… 

They both smiles…

After 2 hours.

Arjun: ye lo tumhara portion set ho gaya .

Riya: thanks …

Arjun sees in the clock: oh shit raat k teen baj gay, subha jana bhi hai… ok bye Riya Good nioght

Riya: good night Sir…

Arjun: Sir nahi arjun….

Riya: ok.

Arjun: good night…

She wakes up early in the morning, She makes her way towards her new wadrobe, which is decorated by her Arjun previous night, She opens the door and try to select some dresses…

Riya: kaun si dress pehnun ye wali nahi nahi iska colour aacha nahi hai,ye ha ye theek hai par yeolour unhen pasand nahi hai, toh ab kaun si pehnun Arjun aap nay bhi mujhay confusion mei dal diya hai, design ek aur colour aneek…..par unhon nay meray liay itna sab kuch kyun kya… kya wo mujh say…. Nahi nahi Riya tu pagal ho gai hai kya kuch bhi soch leti hai, tujhay yaad nahi hai kya kaha tha unhon nay k teray janay k bad kisi nay unhen pyaar ka ehsaas dilaya phir tu kaisay ho sakti hai Riya… aur ha yaad kar unhon nay ye bhi toh kaha tha k wp larki bhi un say buhat pyaar karti hai, toh phir wo larki tu kaisay ho sakti hai…… mei bhi toh un say pyaar karti hun na…..pagal tu nay ye baat aaj tak kisi say nahi kahi toh unheen kaisay pata chalay ga….nahi  wo larki tu ho hi nahi sakti tu khud ko dekh aur Arjun Sir ko dekh…. Par wo hai kaun…

She finally picks a dress ….

After 20 minutes She dries her hair and start combing..

Riya talking herself; ek baat bata Riya arjun sir nay apni Roshini ki jagha tujhay kaisay di ye baat kuch hazam nahi ho rhi zaroor kahin kuch choot raha hai lekin kya…… bus Riya band kar sohna jo dekh raha hai wohi sach hai samjhi ya samjhayoon…ye kya Riya tu kuch din un k sath kya reh li unhi k boli bolnay lagi tu agar aur kch din un k sath rahay gi toh unhi ki tarha kharoos ho jaey gi,,, par wo ab kharoos  rhay na akru kitna badal gay hai wo…. Par wo hai kahan lagta hai abhi tak nahi uthay.

She opens his rooms door He is still sleeping by hugging his pillow…

Riya: sir uth jaen subha k 8 baj rhen hai.

Arjun: sonay do na Riya….

Riya: itni raat tak jagen gay toh yahi hoga na aur ap nay toh kaha tha subha jaldi jana hai ab utth jaen na…

Arjun: riya plz 2 min…

She waita till 2 minutes….

Riya: 2 minute ho gay ab uthh jaen . She puts her hand on his shoulder an electricity passes on his body he sits and make a puppy face..

Arjun:kya problem hai Riya sonay do na.

He lay down again he pulls hers on the bed and says: " kya riya itni subha subha utth gayi tum bhi so jao aur mujhay bhi sonay do" He puts his hand on her waist, she slowly removes his hand keep his hand on bed. " so jaen aap mei jar hi hun dyar hogi toh mujhay nahi kaheay ga k mei nay uthhaya nahi".

Arjun: naraz kyun hoti ho bus uthh raha hun 5 min…

Riya: 5 min means 5 minutes..

Arjun: ok…

She is waiting him on the dinning table she calls him" Arjun….. She paused Sir kahan reh gay aap  jaldi aaen"

Arjun: aa rha hun…

His phone starts ring He pick up the call.

Arjun: hello maa

Riya Smiles and mumered : shalini anti… She runs toward him and say… " arjun mujhay dyn na mujhay bhi shalini anti say baat karni hai plz"

Arjun: wait riya pehlay mei baat kar lun phir tum karti rehna..

Riya: nahi mujhay abhi baat karni hai….

Arjun: Riya……. He shout, ok tum breakfast serve karo phir mei tumhari baat karwata hun…

Riya: ok She leaves…

Arjun: ha maa ap kaisai hai……

Sh: mei theek hun beta tum sunao tum kaisay ho aur riya wo theek toh hai na…tu nay usay baat karnay kyun nahi di…

Arjun: aap maa meri ho aur baa two karay….

Sh: tu shaid bhool raha hai yaad dila dun tujhay k tu mera damad hai aur wo meri beti hai samjh gaya ya thapar mar k samjhun…

Arjun: aap kid ant hi kafi hai samjhnay k liay.

Sh: Riya ka khayal toh tu rakh rha hai na…

Arjun: ha maa, uska khayal nahi rakhun gat oh kis ka rakhun ga kho k usay paya hai ab dobara usay kho nahi sakta, thanks maa ap nay meri Riya ka itnay dino tak itni aachi tarha khayal rakha…

 

Sh: Roshini ko toh kho chuki hun beta ek wo hi hai jis nay is maa k mamta ko rahat di hai uska khayal rakhna mera farz tha beta ek maa hi apnay bachay ka khayal nahi rakhay gi toh kaun rakhay ga…. Ab jaldi say usay phone day mujhy us say baat karnni hai..

 She grabs phone from him

Arjun: ye kya Riya mei baat kar rha hun na…

Riya: ap ja k nasta  Karen warna aap ko dyr ho jaey gi aur Rathode sir gussa Karen gay..

Arjun: tumhain toh mei bad mei batata hun…

Riya: abhi jaen bad ki bad mei dekhen gay…

Riya: Hello shalini anti kaisi hai aap I miss you so much…. Waisay toh mei nay ap k sath kuch din hi guzaray hai par aap ne mera jitna khayal rakha wo karz mei zindagi mei kabhi nahi utar sakti..nay ko toh mei coma mei thi par ap ki batein sun sakti thi ap nay mera jitna khayal rakha shaid meri maa hoti toh wo bhi mera isi tarha khayal rakhti…thanks anti.

Sh: anti nahi maa kaho… aur thanks ki kya zarorat ek maa apnay bachay k liay jo karti hai apni khushi say karti hai jis tarha meray liay meri Roshini thi waisay hi tum ho Riya… aj say tum meri beti aur mei tumhari maa..

Riya: par anti.

Sh:  maa.

Riya: ok aaj say ap meri maa hain…

Sh: ok beta mei phone rakhti hunt um apna khayal rakhna aur Arjun ka bhi.

Riya: ji maa ok maa bye…

Arjun hears the conversation between them:

Arjun interuts: wow Riya  aatay hi tum nay mujh say meri maa ko dour kar dya great Riya… mei kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha k tum mujh say meri maa bhi cheen lo gi..

Riya: nahi sir aaisi baat nahi hai/

Arjun: toh kya Riya

Riya: sorry sir I am really sorry.

He doesn't control his laugh and brust.

Arjun: relax riiya mei mazak kar rha hun… shakal dekhi hai apni lagta hai abhi ro do gi…

Riya: to ye mazak tha…….

Arjun: ha…

Riya: ab dyr nahi ho rhi aap ko jaldi say dress change Karen warna Rathode sir aap ko ETF say nikal dyn gay..

Arjun: wo mujhay nikal k karay ga kya ek case toh meray bina solve hi nahi kar sakta agar nikal  bhi dya toh aacha hai na sara din mei tumharay sath yahen rahun ga no tension aur ha humain sara din larnay ka moqa bhi toh milay ga…. sara din larnay mei time pass ho jaey ga that's not bad idea…

Riya: lagta hai aaj ap larai k full mood mei ho that's good, ap aaj off kyun nahi lay letay bhi dil bhar k larai kar lena…

Arjun: yes mei tumhari ye wish zaroor pori karun ga par aaj nahi jaan kisi aur din aaj mujhay office jana zarori hai……..

Riya: dar gay aap.

Arjun: ACP Arjun kisi say nahi darta….

Riya: ap man lo ap mujh say dar gay ho..

Arjun: no…

Riya: looser…

Arjun: aaj nahi kisi aur din barabar ki takar ho gi…

Riya: aray  kahan chalen kapray toh badal lyn… ye dress pehnein mei nay press kar k rakhi hai..

Arjun: nahi mujhay ye colour pasand nahi.

Riya: par mujhay toh ye colour pasand hai..

Arjun: theek hai jo tumhari pasand wo meri pasand..


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Great update..
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