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Ariya's FF: Mar k bhi dil say part 24 pg 35 d7-2 (Page 21)

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
awesome..
loved it..
conti.soon

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
riya is dumb!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

she cant understand dat he loves her!!

update soon!!Wink Wink

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Heyyy what is this yr why u stoppp ,nooo i wana to read more ,simar ki etani tarf ker de arjun ne sidhe sidhe nahi kah sakta tha vo tum ho riya,
nononnnooo,
i wana to read more,
hamesha long update but today short why why why
u do this ,
this is not fare,
n whyyy u take so much time to update,
i cant wait ,
i wana to no what heppend next,ager samjhe nahi to mein samjhati huin update sooonnn,
ufff plzz update soon
lv to read riya caring arjun n arjun to

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Riya bhi na... cnt she understand this simple thing that Arjun loves her... his actions words r clearly indicating that... nice chapter... update soon...

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amazing update...!!!Smile
continue soon..!!!Embarrassed

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PART 14b


Arjun open his bedroom door,

Arjun: Riya where are you? Yahan bhi nahi hai itni subha subha kahan chali gai

He check the bathroom: Yahan bhi nahi hai kahin wo yahan s ay bhag toh nahi gai' nahi wo aaisa nahi kar sakti'''..

He searches her all the rooms  F'inally he find her in a room.

Arjun: yeh kya kar rhi ho Riya

She is standing on a ladder tools.

Riya : ghar ki safai kar rhi hun kya hal bana rakha hai ghar ka lagta hai barso say safai nahi hoi hai'.

Arjun: Riya ye kya kar rhe ho yeh chezain  kyun phaink rhi ho.

Riya : bekar cheezan hai is liay phaink rhi hun'

Riya ( POV): ab aaey ga maza , inhen zaroor gussa aaey ga, inki sweet sweet batein mujh say hazam nahi hotin'

Arjun: ok tumhain jo phaikna na phaink dayna par bad mei abhi nahi, abhi tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai' ab nechay utro'

 He offers her hand she take her hand in his hand, but Arjun pulls her hand and she falls on Arjun'. She is on the top of him and he totally lost in her beauty. She moves away from him and says sorry'

Riya: sorry Sir..

Arjun: it's ok,  ye kya kitni dust hai tumharay balloon mei jao ja k fresh ho'. Mei tumharay liay breakfast lay k aata hun

Riya: but Sir.

Arjun: waisay tumhain subha subha safai ka khayal kyun aaya..

Riya: mei nay socha tha k aap k liay breakfast tyar karun par Sir kitchen mei gait oh pata chala k wahan sirf chai ka saman hai''.

Arjun: ha toh aur kya mujhay khana banana nahi aata  islaiy mei khana bahir say khata hun'

Riya: par mujhay roz roz bahir ka khana pasand nahi.

Arjun: toh kya karyn madam aap k liay mei'

Riya: ap mujhay sara saman la k day dyn mei aaj say ghar par hi khana banaunge

Arjun: yani tum meray rules and regulation badalna chahti ho.

RIya: yes any problem'

Arun: no not at all, aap list bana k day dyn mei aaj hi sara saman lay aaun ga'

Riya: thanks Sir'

Arjun: welcome'.

When he leaves there Riya's thinks "kitna badal gay hain Arjun Sir mujhay nahi lagta tha k kabhi un say itni frankly baat karun gi, bus bhagwan say yahi dua hai k wo isi tarha muskuratay rhay, mujhay kash wo larki mil jaey jis nay unki ye muskan lotai hai mei usay thanks kehna chahti hun, kaun hogi wo'''''mei buhat buhat khush hun jo kam mei karna chahti thi wok am us nay kar dekhaya hai'

She rushes towards bathroom '

'''''''..****************''''''''''''''.************

Riya: ye file kya hai is file mei'.lonawala highway murder case , She reads th detail of files..

Arjun: Riya nasta ready hai aa jao..

Riya: ya sir ek minute mei aai..

Arjun: Riya ye  kya kar rhe ho tum'

Riya: Sir ye case..

Arjun: ye case, ye humari new case hai Riya, mei nay Shree say kaha hai k Victims ki background k baray mei pata karay'

Riya: Sir par aap victims ki background kyun janah chahtay hai'. Victims k background k bajaey ap is jagha ki Background ki details collect Karen, humain ye nahi janah hai k in k murder kyun hoey humain ye jananahy mei dilchaspi layni chaheay k ye saray murders yahan isi jagha par kyun hoey'

 Arjun: that's good point Riya'mei nay ye socha hi nahi thanks Riya ab ye case buhat aasan ho gaya hai' mei abhi shree ko is jagha k details collect karnay kehta hun' ok bye Riya'

Riya: kahan chalen aap nasta toh kartay jaen..

Arjun: oh sorry Riya mei toh bhool gaya'.

In evening.

Someone is on the door.

Riya: lagta hai Arjun Sir aa gay hain'She opens the door.

Riya: Rathide Sir aap, ye sab kya hai' Simar itna sara saman lao mujhay do mei tumhari help karti hun.. par ye sab kya hai'

Sameer: ye sab  tumharay Arjun nay bheja hai..

Riya: par wo khud kahan hai..

Simar: pata nahi wo kahan hai unhoon nay bus mujh say ye kaha k ye saman unk ghar pohncha dun aurisay set karnay mei tumhari help karun'

In the kitchen.

Riya: had hoti hai simar. Itna saman unhen ye kyun nahi bataya k hum sirf do log hain dus nahi'

Simar: Shaid unhen ye bhi kam lag rha tha phir mei nay aur rathode sir nay unhen mana kya'

Riya: pagal hai wo, pata nahi aaj kal kya ho gaya hai unhen..

Simar: tum say unhoon nahy abhi tak kuch nahi kaha ..

Riya: nahi' kyun koi baat hai kya.

Simar: unhen pyaar  ho gaya hai Riya.

Riya: janti hun kal kaha unhon nay..

Simar: kya kahan unhon nay..

Riya: yahi k unhen pyaar ho gaya hai

Simar: kaun hai ye bataya .

Riya: nahi tum janti ho wo kaun hai..

Simar: no answer..

Riya: tum chup kyun ho  jawab do kaun hai wo..

Simar: ye  baat tum unhen say pocho toh behtar hai..

Riya: kahin wo tum toh nahi.

Simar: no Shutup Riya'.

Riya: ok baba sorry' mei mazak kar rhe thi par job hi hai wo buhat lucky hai k usay Arjun Sir milay hain'

Simar straight to her eyes: waqai buhat lucky hai wo'

Riya:oh finally ye kitchen toh sey ho gaya hai..

Simar: ya

 They all in the launch'

Sameer: ye Arjun kahan rah gaya'

Riya: Sir aap un say pochen  K kahan hain wo.

Simar: don't worry riya wo aa jaen gay'

Sameer calls Arjun.

Sameer: kahan hai tu Arjun, Riya kitni pareshan ho rhi hain' humain tu khanay par bula k khud ghaib hai'

Arjun: Sam  tum sab khana kha lo mujhay  aanay mei thori dyar lagay gi'

Sameer: par hai kahan tu'

Arjun:  rastay mei hun'. Traffic jam hai buhat tu log khana kha lo, waisay bhi buhat raat ho gai hai aur humain subha jaldi ETF pohchna hai'

Sameer; ok '

Riya: kya huwa Sir, kahan hai wo'

Sameer: wo keh rha hai k wo kisi traffic jam mei phans gaya hai, hum khana shru kartay hain'

Simar: yes sir waisay bhi raat k 11 baj rhay hain aur humain ghar bhi jana hai'

Sameer: ya Simar'

After the dinner.

Sameer: buhat aacha khana tha Riya mei toh roz roz aaunga aaisa khana khanay.

Riya: thanks Sir and most welcome'

Simar: Ok Riya ab humain chalna chaheay'Bye

Sameer: simar mujhay lagta hai k humain kuch dyar Arjun ka wait kar layna chaheay, itni raat ko isay akelnay chorna'

Riya cuts in between:  nahi Sir mei apna khayal rakh sakti hun, waisay bhi Sir aatay hi hun gay'

Sameer: are you sure Riya'

Riya: yes Sir'

Sameer: ok bye'.take care.

Simar: bye Riya'

Riya : bye sir. Bye simar and they both hug'

Riya sees in the clock it's 11: 55pm.

Riya to herself: kahan rah gay abhi tak unhen aa jana chaheay '



Edited by sumbulqaiser - 06 January 2013 at 4:54am

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lovely update
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