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#1~LOVE BEYOND LIMITS~ (Page 69)

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alisha.a.s

awesome...
i wish rey should go with kria...
thnx for pm...
thnx

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchitasaphire

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amazing update
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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Awesome update Smile
Hatin this taani Angry
Waiting for d next part Embarrassed

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged
@Riyaluvka2s: Nyc story!!!!Smile

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishu3003

Awesome update Smile
Hatin this taani Angry
Waiting for d next part Embarrassed
thnx
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by girlz-rule

<font size="4">@Riyaluvka2s:</font>
<font size="4">Nyc story!!!!Smile</font>
thnk u
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
hii..alll...hwz u?
sabse phle kuch logo ko confusion hai ki kriya ko ye pata hona chahiye ki tani ne rey ke papa ko maar diya bt kriya ka toh dancing department hai toh usse iske barein mei nhi pata n universe ji ne usse nhi bataya coz vo uske liye task thoda tough banaye ge uska test le rhe hai...LOL LOL
next day:
(early morning ani went to kriya's room...kriya was in her washroom...taking the chance she spill oil on the floor near the washroom...n then went out...rey who was
passing by outside saw her cuming frm kriya's room...so he entered to the room to know wht was tani doing there...as he entered the room he didn't find kriya...so
he start chcking every corner of the room to know wht tani had done now
as usse pata hai tani kitni badi chudail n shatirr hai...he move towards the wasroom n was
about to slip when kriya entered n saw him falling n hold his hand to help him but she too fall upon rey as the floor was slippery...)

in hall:
tani's pov:
ye abhi tak kriya chilayi kyu nhi...itni der tak washroom mei kya kar rhi hai...dekhna padega vo bahar nikli bi hai ya nhi...
(n he move up stairs n peep inside kriya's room n was shocked too see the scene...as our kriyaansh were still on floor sharing an l2h2...she went inside in anger
breaking their eyelock...n as they get up n before they can give any explanation...she slapped kriya...n was about to slap once more...but rey came in b/w n hold her
hand...)
tani(trying to free her hand): chodo rey...isse to mei..
rey; tum pagal ho...how dare u slap her...(at this tym kriya went inside wasromm crying)

inside the washroom:
kriya's thought:

chudail kuti...kamini...muje thapad mara isse toh mei chodungi nhi...meri kya galti thi n muje pata tha ye oil bhi isne hi giraya...bas mera mission shuru ho ke
khatam ho fir mei isse bataungi...n uffo ye humans vale tear bhi shi tym nikalte hai...thank u universe ji...

outside the room:
tani(shouted): pagal mei nhi aap ho rhe ho uske peeche...mei jab apko dekhti hu uske sath hi hote ho...vo apki gf nhi mei hu...n dare...i'l dare to slap her...agar
vo apko mujse cheenegi...(meanwhile dadi too came hearing tani shouting)
dadi: kya hua rey?tum log fir lad rhe ho...aur kriya ke kamre mei? vo kahan hai...
rey: kuch nhi dadi...
tani(pointing dadi): listen u old woman..tumhe isse koi farak nhi padhna chahiye ki hum kya kare ya na kare...
rey(angrily); tani...
tani(luking at rey): wht?(n she left the room angrily..dadi was luking down)
dadi: rey vo mei tumhe batane aayi thi ki aaj sham mei vashno devi ki yatra pe ja rhi hu...toh 1 hafte tak vapas aaungi...
rey: par akele...
dadi muje pata hai aap tani(cut by)
dadi: nhi ...mere sath kuch aur aurte bhi ja rhi hai hamare mohalle se...
rey: toh mei bhi chalta hu apke sath...
dadi: nhi...fir tani aur kriya yha akeli ho jayengi...tani toh manegi nhi aur ladkiya gha mei akele...na baba na...tum yhi rukoge...
rey: dadiii...
dadi: reyy..
rey: acha theek hai...mei apko bahut miss karunga(n he hug his dadi..meanwhile kriya came outside all dressed up...pretending to be sounding low)
dadi; kriya mei aaj vaishno devi ki yatra pe ja rhi hu ek hafte ke liye ...toh mere peeche se mere rey aur uski tanadi ka ache se dhyaan rakhna...
kriyaansh(together); dadi taani...(n the trio chuckled)
dadi: haan whi..acha mei neeche ja rhi hu n kriya dhyaan rkhna aur rey tum bhi...(n she left)
rey: kriya vo...vo.
kriya: rey aap tani ke sath hi party mei jayenge yhi kehna chahte the na...
rey(shockd): haan tumhe kaise pata.,,,
(arre bhudu angel logo ke brain mei chalne vali batein sun sakti hai)
kriya: bas pata chal gya...mei bhi aapse yhi kehne vali thi ki mei rehaan ke sath jau toh zyada acha rehega...
rey(trying not to be jealous): kriya vo sorry ...tani ne...
kriya: itz ok rey...aapki koi galti nhi thi...aur na hi uski...
rey: par usne(cut by)
kriya: i think apko jana chahiye agar tani ne dekh liya toh fir...(cut by)
rey:hmm...okk...bye..
kriya: bye...(n he left the room n kriya flopped on her bed..)
kriya(to herself): uff ye acting karna kina mushkil hai...bas aab kisi tarah mera mission shuru toh ho...kya karu...plz universe ji...uch toh idea do...(n the
thunder sound came n universe ji replied)
universe ji: ye tumhara kaam hai angel...
kriya: oopsie..haan mei karlungi ...mei toh bhool hi gyi thi the great universe ji kitne akadu hai...(aftr that at evening rey told tani he is going with him...n she
becum happy...while rey luk at kriya n mouthened sorry to whch she smiled..n rey too smiled...n they bid bye to dadi...n rey went to drop dadi till bus stop..now tni
n kriya were alone in the house...)
tani: toh kriya dekh liya na rey sirf mere sath jayega...coz nobody can be away frm tani...
kriya(chuckled): ya rite no body can be away frm u ye badbu bhi...eww...kitni din se nahi nhi ho...
tani(angrily): jst shut u'r mouth...
kriya: u shut u'r mouth...
tani: get that straight rey is only mine...no one can take him away frm me(n she left frm there towards her room)
kriya: whatever...(n she too left towards her room)(at nite...kriya left before rey n tani with rehaan...to sharon's party wen rey came ou he start luking here n there n towards her room so that if he can have a glance of kriya..but 
one of there servant ramu kaka told him...that she already left...meanwhile tani came outside n they too went towards tani's frnds party...)



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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 26 June 2013 at 1:10am

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
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ohkkk...toh me firstt!!!WinkBig smile
 
hmm...yaar update ekdum mast tha...but thoda short hogya!!
 
kab khatm hua pta hi nhi chala...!!
 
mujhe party wale scenes bhi abhi chahiye the...also dresses agr tz possibleLOL
 
naani toh...ugghh..!! aisa kaise kr sakti hai...chudail! dayan kahiki!
 
rey...achank taani ke saath jayega! haan jaoo jaoo...phir mat jalna by seeing rehaan wid kria!
 
waitingg eagerly 4 nxt prt...jaldi update dena...!!
 
lovingg it... rey aur kria n naani akele ghar pr...wow!
 
cont soon


Edited by hotdiva_dmg - 02 February 2013 at 11:16pm

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