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hello everyone...

thnk u very much for the luvly comments n likes...n for sum who r arsking me abt is it related to movie thoda pyar thoda meajic(amar style's meajic likha hai aadad padh gyi hai...) Winkor will kriya help in dance ban...so my ans is...itz not related to d3 n i hadn't watch thoda pyar thoda meajic.LOL.so can't say ...itz related to dat movie or not ...but i hope u'll like this...muje sabne itna yaad dilaya ki kal sat hai n tuje update krna hai...lagta hai sabko meri short tym memory loss ka pata chal gya hai...LOLLOLso here's the update...as promised on saturday..


kriya was siiting in her office with two or three members n was dicussing about there work...
wen a girl ghost entered...
girl: angel...angel...he..
kriya: kya hua/ tum itna tensed kyu ho? cum n sit...
girl: nhi...baithne ka tym nhi hai...woh ladka...kuch sunta hi nhi hai...mei pareshaan ho
chuki hu...1 mahine se usse manane mei lagi hui hu...n voh hai..ki react hi nhi krta...bas
expression less rehta hai n uss room mei rota rehta hai..
kriya; uff ohh... ye ladke hote hi aise hai..ziddi kahin ke...itna attitude dete hai ki...(cut by girl)
girl: plz aab tum mat shuru ho jana... aage hi mei bahut pareshaan hu...plz tum kuch karo...
kriya; don't worry rima...tum yahan baith ke sabko unki duties do...aur rhi baat iss ziddi ladke
ki...mei universe ji se baat krti hu n khud isse milungi...
girl; THNK U... ANGEL...tum bahut achi hu n mei tumhare client ke pass jaungi n tum uss ziddi
ladke ke pass...n all the best...(kriya just smiled n waved bye to everyone...n move towards
universe ji's office...
in universe ji's office:
(kriya knocked at universe ji's office door a few tyms but not response ...so she entered the 
office too see whtz hapening n seeing the view in front of her she hit her head)
kriya(loudly): hey universe jii...(she saw universe ji sleeping n murmuring sumhing in his dream)
(on hearing the sudden voice,universe ji wake up with a jerk)
Universe ji: hhh...kya hua?
kriya: kya hua? ye aap mujse puch rhe...ye toh muje aapse puchna chahiye tha ki kya kya hua...abhi tak
...aapne kaha tha ki aap iss baar good humans ki wishes sunkar unki good wishes puri karenge n yaha aap
abhi tak so rhe hai...
universe ji: uff...tum kab kisi duty pe japgi...n mera bhooj halka karogi...
kriya: mei aap pe bhi bhoj hu...theek hai mei aapko aab kbhi pareshaan krne nhi aaungi(kriya becum sad n lo
after hearing this n universe ji saw this)
universe ji: arre nhi...mei toh bas...plz...tum udass mat ho...tum udass hoti ho toh pura swarag udass ho jata hai...
voh toh bas glti se meine bol diya...
kriya: koi baat nhi...mujhe aapse...(n before she can say there was a knock at the door)
universe ji: aab kaun pareshaan krne aa gaya ...firse...(kriya luked at universe ji as if phle kya voh unhe pareshaan kar rhi thi)
universe ji: mera matlab mujhe aur angel ko...(luking at the door)aandhar aa jao...( a group of 4_5 ghosts came inside)
ghost 1: hame maaf kijiye universe ji...hum aapko pareshaan nhi krna chahte the...
ghost 2: pareshaani ki hi baat hai...
univrse ji: kya pareshaani hai tumhe?
ghost 3: voh hum log tang aa gye hai in manushyo se...ye hamse bahut hi namakool jawab puchte hai...
universe ji: tum kehna kya chahte ho ...ki hum unki ichaye puri n a kare...
ghost 4: nhi nhi...hum toh aapko ye batana chahte hai ki ye ouija boards ke deewanse hamse bina matlab vale prashn puchte hai...
ghost 5: koi puchta hai ki mera talak kab hoga...
ghost 1: toh puchta hai meeri saas kab bhagwaan ko pyari hogi...n kuch aurte toh unke pati ke chakar ke barein mei janna chahti hai
jab ki woh pati shareef hai...
universe ji: in sabko toh rokna hi padega...
ghost 2: isliye hum logo ne milke ye socha hai ki hum log manushyo ki madad nhi karenge jab tak woh ouija boards use karna bandh nhi krte...
universe ji: nhi aisa nhi ho sakta...
kriya: haan...har manushya isa nhi hota...hamei iska koi upai sochna chahiye...
ghost 3(after thinking): ek upai hai..
all: kya?
ghost 3: hum manushya ki madad krne ke baad usse ye vardaan mangenge ki jis tarah humne uski madad ki woh bhi humari madad kare...
universe ji: manushya hamari madad kaise karenge unke ke pass toh koi jadui shakti nhi hai,,,(meajuical shakti..lol)
kriya: inke kehne ka matlab hai ki jab hum unki madad kar unhe unke kaam mei safal kar denge toh hum unse ye condition rkhenge ki voh apne
dosto aur rishtedaro ko ouija board istemaal krne se roke...
ghost 3: ji universe ji...angel bilkul sahi keh rhi hai...
universe ji: theek hai tum log jao hum ispe vichar karenge...
ghost 4: dhanyavaad universi jii(n all the ghosts leeft exept kriya)
universe ji: angel tum kuch baat krne aayi thi...
kriya: haan./...voh mei iss ladke ki baat krne aayi thi(showing the guy on magical screen)ye hai reyaansh singhania...bahut ziddi hai...
samar aur nisha singhania ji ke beta...jo ki do din phle...
universe ji: oh samar aur nisha ka beta...fir toh ziddi hoga hi...iski maa bhi itni hi ziddi hai...
kriya; aap inke maa baap se mil chuke hai..
universe ji : haan 1 mahine phle accident mei inki mott ho gyi thi...aur tab ye heaven mei hi aaye the...
iski maa bahut ziddi hai...bichara samar yaha bhi usse manata rhta hai...toh maa ke gun bete mei jayenge hi...par aapne bete ko bahut yaad krte hai...
kriya; aur voh bhi unhe bahut yaad krta hai...isliye usne uss din se dance krna chod diya hai...rhi baat uske dil ki toh voh apni girlfriend se ko
like toh krta hai but voh ladki uske sath uske ghar mei sirf uske maa baap ki di hui dollat ki wajah se rhti hai...
universe ji: toh tum logo ne kisi ko iski madad krne ke liye bheja nhi..
kriya: bheja tha...par ye ladka bahut ziddi hai...n upar se voh iski chipko girl friend kisi ladki ko ghar mei gusne tak nhi deti...
universe ji: aur reyaansh ki dadi ji...
kriya: voh bichari har waqt reyaansh ke sath rhti hai...
universe ji: toh aab tum logo ne aage ke liye kya socha>?
kriya: aab mei iss ziddi ladke ko iska dance vapas dilaungi..
universe ji: ziddi ko ziddi manane ja rhi hai...bahut acha...
kriya: APNE MUJE ZIDDI KAHA (WID A CUTE POUT)
universe ji: acha aab tum jaldi prithvi ke liye niklo n haan tum vahan manushyo ki tarah rahogi kisi ke samne apni powers use nhi karogi...
kyunki tumhe sab dekh sakte honge vahan n vo ouija board vali condition bhi tum hi rakhogi iss reyaansh ke samne...
kriya: ji universe ji...mei chalti hu...(n she moves from dere on her way through clouds towards earth)
universe ji: pata nhi un logo ka kya haal hoga jinke sath hamari ye nathkhat angel rehegi...

on earth;

in singhania mansion:

a party was going on in the hall whereas upstairs in a room a boy was crying laying in his granny's lap caressing a pic in his hands...yea it was
reyaansh singhania n his granny taking the pic of his parents
dadi: reyaansh...bas beta...aab rona band karo...socho tumhare maa papa ko kitna bura lag rha hoga...tumhe rote hue dekh kar...
reyaansh(still crying): bura lagta hota toh chod ke jate kya?
dadi: voh apni marzi se thodi naa gaye hai...aab yamraj ko kaun rok sakta hai...
reyaansh:dadi plz...
dadi: reyaansh plz...(a girl was shouting from the downstairs)
girl: reyaansh...baby...cum down...everyone is asking for u...
reyaansh: taani...plz...mera mood nhi hai...(yes voh chudail tani nani hi hai ...jo niche party kar rhi hai apne frnds ke sath...aur jiska ghar hai voh upar betha hua hai...)
tani: plz...rey...jaan ...plz...
reyaansh(in anger): tani..i'm saying naa u enjoy...
tani: oh toh woh budi dadi tumhe niche nhi aane de rhi...(this was the limit...he can't hear anything against his dadi...so he went down in anger n was about
to slap tani...wen his dadi shout coming out of the room...as she was old enough.so she walked slowly)
dadi: reyansh...plz...leave her n cum upstairs...
tani: u were going to slap me just coz of her...r u out of u'r mind...
rey: tani...just stop all this crap(n luking at everyone present dere)n plz...this party is over...u all can go back to u'r home plz...
tani: wht?
guest: itz okk...tani...we'r going ...bye...(n they hurriedly move out)
tani: rey u can't do this...
rey; i can...this is my house...
tani: wht? so now this is only u'r house...fy9...go to hell wid u'r dadi n u'r house...i'm leaving...(she move topwards the room )
rey: u go to hell...n itz over...(n he sit on the sofa present there in the hall...meanwhile dadi came)
dadi: rey...ye kya tha...koi kisi ladki se aise baat krta hai..
rey: n jo usne kiya...aapke barein mei jo bola...
dadi: toh usne galat kya bola...mei budhi hi toh hu...n kya pata kab chali jau..tumhe
rey: dadi...aap kahin nhi jayengi...
dadi: woh toh bhagwaan ...
rey(crying n in angry tone): dadi maine kaha naa...
dadi: aab muje dara rha hai...jaa mei bhi jaa rhi hu ghar chod kar...(n she moves but rey hold her hand)
rey(crying): dadi plz...maa papa ke baad aap bhi chodkar chali jaugi...mei itna bura hu...
dadi: arre mera beta...kisne kaha tum bure ho...par tum bahut bade pagal ho...(wiping his tears n kissing his forehead)
rey: pagal?
dadi: tumne abhi uss tanadi ko kya kya nhi bola?
rey(laughing)" dadi uska naam tanadi nhi tani hai..
dadi: haan whi...agar tum muje khush dekhna chahte ho toh jao usse jake roko...(m,eanwhile tani came outside wid her lugage n was about to go out wen rey call her)
rey: tanii...(tani stop in her way but didn't luk back or say anything )
rey: sorry..tani...voh maine gusse mei...
tani: rey ...datz the limit...tumne mere guests ko...(rey went towaRDS HER N MAKE HER FACE TO FACE WID HIM)
REY:tani...i'm really sorry...mei aisa bilkul nhi krna chahta tha...but jab tumne dadi ko budhi kaha toh muje gussa aa gaya...plz soorry tani...aage se aise nhi hoga...
dadi: haan...tanadi...maaf karde isse plz...(rey laughs)
rey: sorry...dadi taani...hai yeh...
dadi: haan wahi...
tani: dekha tum abhi mujpe hass rhe the...
Rey(wid a pout):acha...sorry plz...plz...sorry..
tani: aab aise shakal mat banao...cum(n open her hands to hug him...)
dadi: ahem...ahem...muje jane toh do...
rey: dadi...(n she moves from dere n tani hugs rey n was about to peck him on his cheeks wen dere was a knock at he door)
tani: arghh...one min. baby mei dekh ke aati hu...kaun hame disturb kar rha hai (n she went to open the door)


now u'r turn to comment n like...n thnx tozona malik for suggesting me titles...i luv the both...so plz... tell me in dono mei se kaun sa title rakhe...

  "love beyond limits
or
"my angel,my love
"LOL

muje dono hi pasand hai...

nxt update on cuming saturday...Wink


for pm's buddy me  n jin jin ko buddy request bheji hai...plz acept it...

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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 26 June 2013 at 12:28am

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
wow its superb
wowww
no words
kriya angel
nd this taani argh
hate her
hpir sey a gyi
but superb chapter
update soon m waiting

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
the shady plot ROFL

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by abhiyakreya

the shady plot ROFL

u too in 1oth... i yold earler i got the story frm my literatureLOL

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aromakriyaansh

wow its superb
wowww
no words
kriya angel
nd this taani argh
hate her
hpir sey a gyi
but superb chapter
update soon m waiting

 

thnk u...but credit goes to my english literature bookLOL

n tani naniAngry

nxt update on cuming sat...Smile



Edited by d3riya - 07 December 2012 at 11:23pm

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
awesome update 
iss taani ka kuch kar 
dadi is very sweet
thanks for pm
update soon

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchitasaphire

awesome update 
iss taani ka kuch kar 
dadi is very sweet
thanks for pm
update soon

tani naniAngry ka toh kriya hi kuch karegiLOL

thnk uWink

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
awesome...

but plz clear one thing...

yahan kriyansh ka breakup hua tha ya nhi...

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