Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
The premise of this story is Karan's life.. the rest of the characters revolve around him and its narrated by a boy who gets a chance to look into ther lives closely... and is a big big Karnika fan...
Aftr one week of this show.. i think Karan-Kritz brk up story is unnecessarily stretched! the premise is weak as the reason behind thr brk up is not revealed.. and karan's side of story... anger or longing or seriousness abt his rship with kritz didnt convince me mainly bcoz the other end of his story or Kritz angle was missing! and with no solid reason given for thr brkup.. it was stretched and only revealed till this monday tht it was karan's decision to brk up.. the crucial part of story.."y" and "wat went wrong", to convince us, is still missing.. nor did the story teller convey it clearly if karan really still has feelings for Kritz or it was jst a situational overreaction to tht article.. so without kritz stance on this story.. the story feels incomplete..with only one side of a story..
k. this is strictly from a story POV.. i m do not want any details of Kritz-karan brkup.. i jst want VG to put Karan's story nicely.. its very very confusing the weakest link of The Serial..
soumya-chabra story is intersting and convincing..
Raj-Pihu story is good and realistic too..
Rohan's character is very close to normal person's character. his friends.. his family r all normal ppl..
All the other actors play thr character well and convincingly.. especially i luv the way sara has shaped up her character. .she is bitchy bt she is so soft spoken.. bt wat is she doing in this group is a mystery.. how she entered.. y she is involved is a big big mystery.. if no body cares her words, thn y is she called into this meeting in the first place! unless its storyteller's idea to spice things up.. coz her character is really really intrsting..
obviously it luks from the things tht she wants to get close to karan.. and his friends r pushing him for Kittu.. wer as kittu is jst a ghost here.. sara's accusation on kittu arent justified.. bcoz again thr was no convincing backstory of karan-kritz told here.. nobody except the characters knows wat really transpired and the reason of this furore over karan-kritz high-profile brkup! May b bcoz.. kritz is not ready and is not on board.. watever.. i feel this important link is missing in this storytelling of The Serial.. may b it will pick up pace once this angle is done and over with and some new intrsting drama enfolds in these character's lives..
I luv abigail.. she is good!
I even liked Vikrant Massey's character.. i wish to see more abt him..
k.. last bt not least i was here for Kritz.. bt looks like her story is done and told.. so i wont b back till kritz is in here..
so c u guys..
i applaud VG for such hatke idea.. bt wished it didnt revolve around a poor story and wud've liked to see lives of other characters too..
bt all the Best to VG.. may u achieve lot of success with ur new venture..
Edited by achiever - 04 December 2012 at 7:00am