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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 6:23am | IP Logged
plz continue soon

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
its getting more n more interesting
continue soon...you write very well
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
It's interesting no doubt, but u r creating suspense mire than to give a story, try to be a little clear in ur ideas, I don't want to hurt u but thus us what I feel actually and stop being tensed,u r writing is gud and its going great, continue ASAP

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jineejiggs

It's interesting no doubt, but u r creating suspense mire than to give a story, try to be a little clear in ur ideas, I don't want to hurt u but thus us what I feel actually and stop being tensed,u r writing is gud and its going great, continue ASAP


Thankyou..
I will untangle things soon.. Thanks for telling me.. I build on the story and character now.. :-)

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Continued..

In RAYA room:
Ram wakes up holding his head.. His vision is blur.. He is about to get up when he suddenly feels dizzy..
Nutz: Screams Bhai!
Nd runs to make him settle down on the bed.
Ram: mumbling.. Priya.. Yeh.. Mera sir.. Choti Priya kaha hai..
Nutz: Tears flowing continuosly down her cheeks.. Bhai.. Aap pehele baitiye toh..
Ram:Hugs Natasha and cries his heart out and sobs.. Mein bohot bura hu na.. Choti kya mujhe maaf nahi karsakthi tu.. Sobbing.. Mein usse bohot pyar kartha hu..
Nutz: Hugging Ram tightly.. Bhai mein AAPKI choti hu.. Par aapko aise.. Patting his back.. Priya ko waqt dijiye bhai..
Vik: Enters the room.. His anger dissappears looking at Ram's state.. Ram.. Tum aaraam karo.. But he is unable to forgive Ram.. He is about to leave..
Ram: Vikram meine jaanbujkar kuc nahi.. Sobbing..
Vik: closing his eyes.. He says.. Nutz woh mujhe kuch kaam hai.. Mein office jarahahu..
Nutz nods in affirmation..
Ram: Choti mujhe abhi Priya se baat karni hai..
Nutz: Lekin bhai.. Abhi..?
Ram: Haan.. Abhi..
Nutz calls Priya..
Priya: Kaun?
Nutz: Priya.. Woh..
Priya: Haan bolo natasha sab tik hai na? Woh mujhe kuch ajeeb lagraha tha.. Sab..
Nutz: Understanding that Priya was worried about Ram says.. Priya woh baat karna chahthe hai..
Priya's mind refuses but her heart is thirsty to listen to hia voice.. Her broken heart knows that it cannot be mended by any other.. Than the person who broke it..
Priya: Unable to refuse mabage a hmm..
Nutz gives the phone to Ram and leaves the room..
Ram: Feels her presence on the other side.. Hi heart beat slows down.. He is calm..
Priya: She knows hes sorry but sh is unable to forgive him..

Bg music

Hum tum kitne paas hai kitne door hai chaand sitaare..
Sach poocho toh.. Khaamoshi bhi karte hai tumse baatein..
Bade acch lagthe hai..
Yeh dharthi, yeh nadiya yeh raina aur tum..

Ram: Knowing that words would not heal any of the scars and thinking.. Choti tik keherahi thi.. Wakt dena chahiye.. Priya ko bhi apne aap ko bhi..
He says..
Ab tik hu..
Priya: Tears fillin her eyes.. Hmm.. Rakhthi hu..

And the phone is cut..
Ram lies down feeling a lot better..

Priya on the other hand is hurt.. She closes her eyes an drifts off to sleep..

The entire day goes dry.. There are no more tears to shed.. The pain has hardened Priya.. Ram starts behaving numb a he knows there is no forgiveness.. Rajat is emotionally drained and has turned to be silent..

Scene shifts to NYC airport where Karthik is waiting for Priya..

In NY:

Karthik: Di.. Waves his hand and smiles.
Priya gives an empty smile and walks over to the cab..
Priya: Karthik tum wakil saab ko inform kardo.. Mujhe unse aaj hi baath karni hai..
Karthik: Ji di..

They check in.. And freshen up.. Karthij says hes tired and goes back to his room crashing on his bed to catch up on some sleep..

Priya sitting with her papers..
Thinking yeh kaisi bechaini hai.. She remembers her talk with Rajat..
Just then..
Lawyer: Mrs. Kapoor kya mein andar aasaktha hu?
Priya: ji.. Kya saar papers tayaar hai?
Lawyer: Ji.. Lekin Mrs. Kapoor are you sure ki..
Before he can continue..
Priya: ji wakilsaab.. Ab meri baari hai..
She goes theough the papers and signs them..
Priya: When do we meet next..
Lawyer: 2 days.. Saari formalities hojaayegi.. Ab mein chaltha hu..
Priya: Ji.. Thankyou..

Precap:
Part 4:

Ram leaves KM for a holiday leaving a letter to Nutz..

How is this? I hope you liked it.. Plz let me know if you want the story to go in a certainway.. Thankyou!

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
it was nice reveal the suspense yaar

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
waiting for the mystery to unravelTongue

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Hi everyone!
Im going to take this FF to a new level.. I promise that tomorrow will have my best update!

Many want the mystery revealed.. Well i will bring out a few things tomorrow.. I promise to make it nice..

I will bring in some romance! Whats say?

Waiting to hear to what you all would like to read!

Thanking you as always,

Love,
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