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Mithvi SS: Un-named Chapter 1- pg2

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Hi all, I'm Shru here... Just introducing a New SS(Short Story on Junoon forum for Junoon fans) I absolutely love Mithvi so thought of penning down something so this clearly is my First Mithvi workLOL Open request to throw tamatars...ROFL
I'm sure I would get hit by a few to start withLOL Well jo bhi ho please give me honest feedback and bare the mistakes!!Smile I'm sorry in advance if you didnt like it but I honestly couldn't resist posting it over hereLOL Thanks for reading it.. please do at least glance over it and COMMENTEmbarrassed *FINGERS crossed**WinkBig smile
 
Help: Please suggest a title for this SS...Embarrassed I would be greatful
 
PROLOGUE
 

Hatred is completely old concept in this world; moreover it's a place where jealousy plays a huge role.

 

If hatred is spread around the world then why cant it happen between two individuals where they had no past yet their future together being friends could be in doubt forever.

 

Can they be friends? Or maybe be something more. No-one knew the answer.

 

Is it possible for feelings to develop or change especially 'Can you ask the hatred to go away?'

'Can you forgive the one who insulted and humiliated you in public?'

I don't think so said a girl who campaigned in college about Hatred, Jealousy and War

 

Girl: But revenge is not always the best solution Right?

Let's work to find peace world peace shall we? She roared on the microphone few clapped whereas few left the assembly hall making fun of the concept.

 

'Love can happen at any place, but it should be the right time to meet your love' (someone else wrote this in their diary)

Jealousy causes hatred maybe you're meant to be with one however you fail to understand about our true feelings she continued. It was Delhi girl writing for herself, as she heard the above campaign live by a girl from Mumbai.

 

What destiny had in store for them no one knew? Both the girls didn't know they would end up at the same place, at right time or wrong is yet to be decided?

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INDEX
 
Prologue - Pg 1
Chapter 1 - Pg 2
 


Edited by funkylicious - 12 December 2012 at 4:51am

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:59am | IP Logged
oh my god cant wait to read...Big smile
Prologue is superbb...u write really well...Thumbs Up
2 gals kaun hain Wink

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehapatro

oh my god cant wait to read...Big smile
Prologue is superbb...u write really well...Thumbs Up
2 gals kaun hain Wink
 
OMG 1st comment... m Crying I mean Khushi ke aansu aagyeLOL
thank you soo much for the feedbackHug
 
well 2 gals kaun hain? u would have to wait and read!!!Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
amazing concept
loved it
update soon
2 girls kaun hai???
thanx for the pm
tamatar update pe marongiLOL

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Awesome Start!!Big smile
Never read on Mithvi before...so this should be quite interestingWink

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Smile

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by funkylicious

Originally posted by snehapatro

oh my god cant wait to read...Big smile
Prologue is superbb...u write really well...Thumbs Up
2 gals kaun hain Wink
 
OMG 1st comment... m Crying I mean Khushi ke aansu aagyeLOL
thank you soo much for the feedbackHug
 
well 2 gals kaun hain? u would have to wait and read!!!Embarrassed
ROFL come up with next update..Big smile

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Excellent Post dear...shru..Star  Prologue is superb.. interesting...Clap
Thanks for the Pm... pls update soon..Big smile

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