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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
 

Next day on both of them start going to the office and at lunchtime they meet at he old house of Dk. Disha brings all his favorite dishes. Along with food they enjoy each other's company and discuss their plan of action. This routine carries on for 4 days. On the 5th day Dk call up Disha & says

Dk: Disha! Today I won't be able to come for lunch lets meet at about 5 o'clock. I hope u don't mind?

Disha: (sad tone) No, its ok.

Dk: what happened?

Disha: nothing I was thinking how will I pass 3 hrs without u?

Dk: (laughs) u've started missing me so much?

Disha: yes Dk! Now with every passing day I feel scared that will we ever be together again?

Dk: Don't worry Disha I'm sure we'll soon find a solution.

Disha: how Dk all our efforts till now hv gone futile. What kind of test is this Baapa?

Dk: u hv faith on ur Baapa, I'm sure he'll not let u down. Remember I love u. now give me that sweet dish smile.

Disha: (Smiles) can u see me smiling?

Dk: No but I can hear it in ur voice.

Disha: I love u & come soon I'll be waiting.

Dk: bye.

In the evening Disha reaches the house & sees Dk waiting for her.

Disha: Oh today u reached early, what a surprise!

Dk smiles & they enter the house & as customary they hug. Then they go ahead and make themselves comfortable. Dk starts telling her why he was late & othe things that happened during the day. Then Disha tells him abt her day & finally they start talking abt their plan.

Disha: I've started giving Aai hints of how much I love u. but u know the good news is that Azuba knows that I cannot live without u & he has given his full support. He has also promised to talk to Aai abt this.

Dk: Even I tried to explain Ma, but she doesn't want to hear anything abt u. So, what I with the help of Ved am trying to show what Poori is to Ma. Hopefully she'll understand.

While they are having this discussion the weather outside becomes stormy and suddenly the lights go off.

Disha: I knew this would happen I'll just get the candles Dk.

Dk just then decides to go to his mother's room to see if his old snaps r still lying there. He finds them in the drawer of aside board with the help of a lighter/ match sticks. As he is standingand looking at those snaps the room fills with light and Disha enters

Disha: u r here & I got scared where did u vanish? What r u looking at?

Dk: (without looking at her) my old snaps. Come have a look.

Disha comes closer with a candle in her hand & puts it in from of the mirror hanging above the side board. Starts looking at the picture. Dk tells her abt each one of them. In the middle of the  conversation he looks up at Disha & sees how beautiful she is looking in the dim light of the candle. Her radiant face is glowing so much as he's never seen. He gets totally mesmerized by her stunning appearance. His eyes suddenly fill with passion & desire. Unable to control him self he slowly moves behind Disha who is engrossed in seeing the pictures and moves her hair to her left shoulder and slowly kisses her back. Then moves his hand slowly on to her waist. Disha realizes what is going on.

Disha: Dk what r u doing? Please stop.

Dk: Do u really want me to stop or r u just scared?

Disha: (in an uncertain tone) i…..i ….want……u……….to stop.

Dk: (breathing heavily & still caressing her back) why?

Disha: because ………….i don't know?

Dk: Disha look in the mirror.

She looks up.

Dk: what do u see?

Disha : I see myself & u

Dk: no Disha look at urself. Hv u every seen anyone more beautiful? You tell me how can a man like me control himself when he is with such a pretty woman and that too his wife?

Dk has a grip on her by now.

Disha : (almost melting like wax) but DK…….

Dk: Shhhhhhhhhhhh Disha no more buts now its abt time. Don't think now only go with the flow. Trust me we r not doing anything wrong. I love u and will not do anything that is wrong.

Disha surrenders turns around and sinks into his strong arms. The two figures vanish into the dark.

Then what happens cannot be put into words, just close ur eyes & imagine the beautiful journey of love they both travel together for the first time.

To this only thing can be said is:

Bahon ke darmiyan do pyaar mil rahee hain,

Jane kya bole man dole sum ke badan,

Dhadakan bani zuban.

 

I hope I'm not writing anything offensive. Please comment should I continue?

Rang

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 1:08pm | IP Logged

nice story rang, please continue.

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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
wow this is cool plz do keep on writing
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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 1:40pm | IP Logged

woowww rang lollll ............Wink lady d and hottie getting very romantic there heyyyyy lol hehehee...........what can i say its really good please dooooo continue

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 1:41pm | IP Logged

hey rang

great job once again

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

love KP

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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
oh man this is really good.. next ! just dont stop and i will be a happy person!!Big smile
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Posted: 13 May 2005 at 3:56pm | IP Logged

hey

rang cool stroy keep it going...

samyBig smile

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NO ITS GREAT WRITTING

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