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hey rang thanks lots...
ur story is awesome... waiting eagerly for next one
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the story is so great and excellent. plz continue. thanks
Ms. IF 420(Comic Dialogue)
Joined: 27 February 2005
Once they are over with their first kiss Dk loosened his grip over Disha still holding her gently, while Disha still remains unmoved with closed eyes. Dk touches her face & says:
Dk: Disha open ur eyes!
Disha opens her eyes slowly and hugs him immediately.
Disha: Dk is this right?
Dk: Of course sweet heart, after all we r married.
Disha: Then why doesn't it feel right?
Dk: Only because Ma has not accepted u as her bahu. Don't worry she will one day.
Disha comes of his arms: Dk what should we do now? Aai is also very upset with whatever happened.i don't know what to do.
Dk: First of all promise me Disha u won't cry. Ur such a strong person and I need u to be strong. OK!
Disha nods her head in affirmation and smiles.
Dk: Now listen to me care fully u handle Aai & I'll make sure that some how Poori is thrown out of Kanaka house.
Then they discuss the plan. As they are able to figure out what has to be done, their faces begin to glow. And in the end
Dk puts his hand forward: So this is done.
Disha J done (shakes his hand)
Dk who never looses a chance to romance pulls her and she land on his chest. This time our Disha also flirts with him. She plants a kiss on his chest and then shies away.
Disha: Dk I know none of us want to leave, but its getting late shall we go.
They both getup and move towards the door. Before opening it DK & Disha turn towards each other and embrace.
Dk smooches Disha : I love this girl do take care of her.
Disha: And I m crazy for this man don't let him stray away for Poori.
Both laugh and decide to meet for lunch the next day at same place. With a heavy heart they bid each other good-bye.
Pls do comment for encouraging me.
Joined: 03 March 2005
rang go on why do u stop....it is great..
Joined: 19 April 2005
its really awesome but could do type the next pair a little earlier. I m anixous 2 kno wat happens next!!
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