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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepak148

I'm sorry if i hurt u but so far i'm not liking this ff. It is nowhere to the level of Madhubala diaries. You should had continue that.

1) this is not a short story/ OS/FF. There is no storyline.
2) I understand where you are coming from. However, this more of a conversation/ analysis post not a story. There is always room for improvement so let me know where I am lacking.

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepak148

i loved 2nd part and you hadn't posted wht happnd at filmfare awards

again, please refer to my last comment.

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Here is the deal. I need your opinion (and leave good reasoning) on if I should post continuous notes. That is, one note leading up to the next OR just random notes of what may happen in their daily life, given their current relationship dynamic. 


Please note, I do not wish to write an SS so the length of the posts will remain as such until I move on to another project.


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Sincerely call for your advise. Fire away!

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepak148

i will never give my advise again, if it hurts u and i want one note followup to the past one. just a simple opinion.

Don't be too hard on yourself. It is an internet forum for crying out loud. It takes much more to hurt a personLOL Your opinion matters, mine just happens to be different. I might be biased seeing as it is my creation. Therefore, I have asked others to share their thoughts. Lets go with the flow. 

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Write in the form of random notes of their daily life.But plz try to increase the length a bit...that would be awsome.

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Reposting this comment here as well.

Jasleen,

You are a charmer! One who weaves her magic with words!

I read Coffee Notes and Things I'll Never Say simultaneously and enjoyed both of 'em. Just a teensy weensy suggestion: could you list the pages bearing these notes on the first page of the thread? Makes it easy to catch up if you're returning to this after a while.

Cheers,
T

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