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~BLEEDING HEARTS~ MG OS IMP NOTE ON PG-158 (Page 5)

shruthiR IF-Rockerz
shruthiR
shruthiR

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Woah! Amazing prologue, I was stunned.Star It seems like a very sad and emotional OS.Waiting to read the first chpSmile
Sparkling-eyes5 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Awsum start
Shruthe IF-Sizzlerz
Shruthe
Shruthe

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Congrats on ur new OS

totally a different concept from what u have written so far...

so eagerly waiting for the next
-padmarao- IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
prologue is scary
waiting for the update
they both love eacother so much phir ye kisse hua
bubblygal1711 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Heart wrenching...very different concept...Loved it...Update soon...
-misty--love- IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
new os   
BLEEDING HEARTS 

poem is awesome, so well writtenEmbarrassed

nd prologue is so painful...geet ending her life

her bruised state and she feeling disgusted of herself...
it would be gonna so painful...
lets see ye snsitive baby padh pati hai ki nahi...
and as u write each emotion so well,i know u will make us cry very much...
so i'll read the last part to pakkaEmbarrassed
character sketch is great...
maaneet love with each other
waiting for updates
and congrats for
new new os...
love u diiiSmile
keerthi90 Goldie
keerthi90
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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Interesting Concept dear!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon...Waiting for it...
anuandavi IF-Sizzlerz
anuandavi
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Posts: 10240

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Darr lag raha he.

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