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~BLEEDING HEARTS~

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Please re-read the previous two updates, before starting this...And wana share a good news wid u all...I just got whole BLEEDING HEARTS copyrightedBig smile...And the updates i am giving here is basically now its edited versionWink...
 
 
~PART-3~
~Love is eternal...Love is beautiful~
 
 
 
Maan madly pushed past everyone, and painfully started screaming for geet...He barged into one of the room, and got horrified looking at the disgusting sight infront...There was sameera making out with some men...Maan turned around and closed his eyes, clenching his fist in shame...His heart was in his mouth, but still he turned around and grabbed sameera by her throat...while she tried to hide her nude body under the duvet...
"where is my geet" he screamed with his eyes spitting fire...feeling disgusted to even touch her filthy skin...While sameera smirked looking at his vulnerable state and leaned in closer, whispering..."rotting in hell" and she winked, startling maan with her s**ty side...
 
Maan was horrified as sameera's dreadfull words rang in his head...He trembled taking few steps back...His whole body uncontrollably shivered, while warm tears trickled down his cheeks..."geet" he whispered...numb, broken...as the thoughts of their past raced in his mind...He almost could hear her chirpy voice, when she last called him few hours back...Why didn't he just asked her to go home...why...he screamed, closing his face in his palms...The shock of what could have happened with geet terrified him...He briskily turned around to find geet as soon as possible...But his moving steps halted when sameera's evil laughter screeched through his soul...
 

 
Maan clenched his fist, while his eyes turned red in outrage...He turned around and with a sharp blow slapped sameera hard, making her puke out blood...She looked at him, fear evident in her eyes...Maan grabbed her throat in an instant, and pulled her up to his face..."I will ruin you...will make sure YOU rot in hell" he spat on her face, hissing in pure disgust...while his fingers digged deeper into the thin flesh of her neck, choking her to death...
 
Sameera wriggled trying hard to break free from maan's iron grip...as he clenched his fist tighter, with her every struggle...He strangled her mercilessly, when armaan came rushing and pulled him back..."maan leave her...we need to find geet first" he screamed into his ear, while maan again pounced on sameera wanting to cut her in pieces...Armaan some how dragged maan out of that room, while police went in and arrested sameera...Maan fell down on the ground, crying bitterly...He screamed for geet, just with a dying hope to hear her reply...The scene around looked chaos, with police taking all the girls and goons out of that place...They seized sameera and few men in the hall area, and interrogated about geet...When they finally blurted out about geet being dumped behind that locked door...
 
A sudden hope raised in maan's heart, as he heard their words...He looked up at armaan with a tearfull smile and madly ran to that door, banging with his fist..."geet" he screamed loudly, and then his gaze stuck on the metal lock hanging their...He glared behind at the goons, and animally pounced on them, asking for the key...while the police and armaan pulled him back...
 

 
Finally the inspector asked for the key, beating the goons black and blue...And getting it, they handed it over to maan...who ran over to the door, opening it with his shaky hands...He pushed the door with all his force, but to his utter distress the door was shockingly locked from inside..."geet" he kept screaming and madly banging on the door with all his force...While armaan kept helplessly looking at his friend going through hell...He so much wanted to sooth him, but knew now only geet's presence can heal his pain...
 
 
FEW HOURS BACK
 
A tearing pain ran across geet's whole body as she opened her intoxicated hazels to the dull and smudgy surrounding...Her vision was still blurred with the effect of drug, while her head thrombed with an excruciating pain...She lifted her hand to her head and winced in slight pain...She breathed in slowly, taking in the scene around her...and gently sat up, scrunching her eyes shut with the pain she felt with her every move...The scene around her looked horrifying with scattered cloths, liqour bottels, playing cards, cigarettes and syringe spread all around her...She heavily blinked her hazels, as her gaze stuck on the syringe, and she remembered how it came there...Realization stuck, and she looked down at her body...nude and tarnished...An agonizing shock took over her, as she found herself sitting in the pile of blood, which was dropping from her wounds...Her whole body suddenly felt so heavy, unresponsive, with the terror of her lost innocence...She curled up into a tight ball, and cried her silent tears...
 

 
Blood was continuously dripping down from the corner of her lips, as she clutched her mouth to stop her painfull whimper...Those goons evil laughter outside horrified her, making her screech in terror...She cocooned herself more tightly, unknowingly pressing on her fresh bruises...A loud cry left her mouth as she grunted in pain...Her hands were uncontrollably shaking, freaking out with there terrorizing words...They were talking about her in cheap way, fighting for whoose turn is next...
Her whole body tensed up, hearing them abusing...Geet panicked and started crawling on her knees to close the door, before anyone could barge in...She with heavy pain stood on her feet and locked the door, then dragged her body to the wooden table placed at the corner of the room...and pushed it to the door, blocking their entrance...Her gaze got stuck on her torn cloths, which were thrown at some corner...She some how dragged herself to them, and wore it to hide her modesty...She cried her heart out while putting them on and finally thumped herself on the floor...with no energy left...Soon her vision blurred and unconsiousness hit her hard, as she drifted into a deep slumber...
 
FLASHBACK ENDS
 
 
Maan continuously banged his fist on the wooden door with his now bleeding hands...With his every attempt, he screamed his lungs out, taking out his frustration...He was freaking out with every passing minute, somewhere getting this intuition of loosing her forever...Finally with all his force he broke the lock and pushed the door ajar, meeting the dreadfull sight infront...To his horror, he saw geet on the floor lying in a pool of blood...He ran to her and crouched down beside her, pulling her numb body on his lap..."geet utho...Its me...tumhara maan" he whimpered, shaking geet's limp and unconscious body rapidly...but to his utter dismay there was no response...Maan shook her again and again, but nothing happened..."geet please...you can't leave me like this" he cried miserably hiding geet's body in his arms...His trembling hands snaked around her bare flesh, and this is when he realized her cloths were torn...Horror took over his senses, as he madly tried hiding her body from everyones gaze...The panic was evident, as his hands trembled to hold her unconscious body securely in his arms...
 

 
Armaan looked away with tears running down his cheek...He never in his dreams imagined to see the two people close to his heart, in this state...He was standing their stunned looking at geet's bruised body, when the cop behind him nudged, asking to take geet to hospital as soon as possible...Realization dawned and armaan quickly jerked maan, who was still trying to wake geet...
"maan geet needs medical assistance...we have to move from here" armaan spoke shakily, while maan nodded and quickly removed his shirt...and made geet wear it...He scooped her in his arms and hurried out of that room, and further out of that building...As they reached down, he gently got in the back seat of his car, with geet on his lap...Armaan started driving and cop's jeep took the lead infront to push away the traffic, if any...
 
It was midnight by now, and they reached the near by hospital and got geet admitted with in no time...She was now under the top most doctors supervision...Cops helped maan with all the legal necesseties, just making it easier for him to get over all those frustrating admitting procedure...Maan requested the cops to keep this matter low profile, as he didn't wanted the media to bug geet in any way...He even called the commisioner, letting him know what had happened, and he too assured maan to help him in all possible ways...The comissioner ordered the inspector incharge to keep this matter hush and even asked him to keep security around geet's room, just in case if the news gets leaks from some other source...
 
Maan nervously paced up and down the hallway, as geet had been in with the doctors for a couple of hours now...He fidgeted with his thumbs, his heart rate was increasing rapidly...He knew this was entirely his fault...He should have not allowed her to meet that bitch at the first place...How could he act so careless, he painfully thought...
 
 
He covered his head in his hands and remained silent for a couple of minutes...Frustration, self pity, agony, outrage, every feeling hammered him in and out...Armaan was right there with him, silently landing his support in all possible ways...He walked towards maan, and sat down by his side..."sab thik ho jayega maan" he assured...while maan silently kept crying hiding his face...
 
Soon doctor stepped out of the examination room and faced maan in worry...Maan rose to his feet and looked straight at the doctor...
"How is she?" he managed to cough out, keeping his hopefull gaze on the doctor infront..."She's stable...but her injuries are severe" doctor replied sighing sadly...
"How severe?" maan asked in a jerk...panicking with his words...
"you have to keep calm Mr.Khurana...actually she is been raped...so it will take time...if not with the physical injuries but with the mental trauma" doctors sympathetically patted on maan's shoulder and walked back into the room...leaving behind a shattered maan...
"rape" maan whispered as the news hit him hard, like a fist...He fell onto the ground, feeling the numbness taking over his whole well being...A wave of pure and excruciating agony washed over him, as he bit back the moan erupting from his lips...
Armaan sat down besides maan, and pulled him in his arms...patting his back...While maan clutched him tightly, crying his pain out..."how could I let this happen to her" he screamed, feeling mercilessly stabbed right on his heart...Suddenly the world around him seemed so filthy...He wanted to rip that men into pieces, who did this to his geet..."I will kill that bas***d" his eyes spat fire, as he pushed passed armaan...walking out to get those bas***ds right away...Armaan ran behind him, and forcefully stopped him saying now geet needs him here...more than he beating those goons...Maan closed his eyes, letting the tears slip away...Armaan pulled him back towards the couch, but maan angrily snapped his hand...and stood longingly looking at geet through the glass window, while she was operated inside...
 

 
Time went by and finally geet was shifted into a private room...Her wounds were treated and bandaged, while her unconscious body was laid on that hospital bed...Doctors informed maan that geet is under strong sedatives, so will get conscious next morning...Maan went in and sat besides her, taking her hand in his...He cried silently looking at her now pale face, which looked so lifeless...He softly caressed her cheek, searching for the red hue...which had crepts on her cheeks, when he last time saw her...He remembered how excited she was whole day, to meet her friend...He cried, as all their moments came flashing infront of his eyes...Her giggles, her blush, her continous chattering, her anger, those puppy cute looks...everything now haunted him, making it impossible for him to even breath...Their paradise has fallen apart, leaving behind grief and unwanted pain...Maan sat their numb, looking at his soulmate...who was in deep painful unconsciousness...He slowly leaned in and kissed on her forehead, letting his tears fall on her pale face...He felt his eyes drooping, so he gently laid his head down on their interwined hands...He still kept staring at geet's face, and slowly drifted his exhausted body into a deep slumber...
 
************
 
Geet's heart pounded rappidly, as she slowly blinked her heavy eyelids...adjusting to the brightness around her...The morning sunlight from the window reflecting off the white walls, making her want to close her eyes again...She felt like she had slept for years, but then she was still tired...With the beeping of a machine, she slowly turned her head towards the source of the noise...The muscles in her neck were stiff and sore...The sweat beads ran down her face, as her breathing grew shorter...Where was she, the thought came into her mind as she looked around the room with her wide eyes...realizing she was in hospital...Silent tears ran down her cheeks, as the blurry images of her tarnished innocence came crashing...A whimper erupted from her throat, and she bit her lip subsiding that painfull moan...
 

 
Geet was in her own reveries when felt something stirring on her hand...She stared down at her side and found maan sleeping, with his head placed on their intervened hands...Her soul longed to hide herself in his protective embrace, but then the thought of another men's touch on her body, disgusted her...She jerked away from maan, more in shame...Tears crowded, as it was getting impossible for her to hold back...She longingly kept staring at maan's pale face, his mussed up hair, his wrinkled tensed forehead, those pain drawn tightly closed eyes, his fever flushed cheeks...Geet couldn't imagine what he must have gone through, finding her in that state...A sudden guilt ran through her body, for pushing their relation in this mess...She laid their numb, blankly staring at maan...Her tears didn't stopped, nor her bleeding heart...Her stomach lurched with the memories that haunted her every passing minute...She suddenly felt restless, agitated...Her hands started shivering, as intrusive thoughts of that horrifying moment again came rushing infront of her eyes...She felt the urge to wash herself, inorder to get rid of that disgusting feeling which crept all over her body...She scrunched her teary eyes, trying to block the images of her lost innocence...Her hand snapped out of maan's hand and she started rubbing her body in panic...A whimper left her mouth, as her bruises started bleeding with her continuous assault...
 
There are wounds that never show on the body, that are deeper and more hurtful than anything that bleeds...
 
Her panic movements jerked maan, from his sleep...His eyes twinkled with tears, as he slowly tried touching her cheek..."geet" he softly whispered with atmost love in his voice...and cupped her cheek, with his gentle touch...Geet jerked with his move, and looked at him in shock...His touch burned her skin, as she snapped his hand away...giving him those frightened look...Maan cried looking at her with so much pain...His eyes burned with warm tears and he forcefully hugged geet, wanting to consume all her pain...He longingly caressed her hair, biting his own lips to stop his whimper..."jaan please calm down" he cried with his shivering lips, while geet continously wriggled in his arms, trying to push him off...with all her force...
 

 
The story is over,
It's finished, it is done
The dream that we had
Has vanished in the haze...
 
Rising panic swelled in her veins, along with the awful memories...She struggled to break free of maan's iron grip, which tightened with her every attempt..."geet its me...maan...tumhara maan" he was shattered, with her denial to his touch...but still cocooned his world from falling apart...Soon her whimpers seized, and maan felt her soft grip tightening around his shirt...He sighed and closed his eyes, tightly holding her with all his care...She is his soulmate and he won't let her go...not now, not forever...
Maan felt tears wetting his shirt, but he snuggled her more closer...soothing her with his warmth...Time flew by and her body relaxed...He continuously kept patting her back, and soon geet fell asleep with her heavy eye lids...He felt her slow breathing and gently placed her on the bed...He just kept looking at her, feeling utterly empty...He touched the end of her fingers, gently, and geet surprisingly intervened her fingers with his...A smile formed on his lips, as he gently leaned in pecking on her forehead...He really didn't know what he was suppose to say to comfort her...but now knew, his love is capable enough to pull her out of all this...
 
The damage was permanent...there would be scars...But even the angriest scars faded over the time...I belive my love is capable of soothing her pain...I will never let her live in those moments ever again...
 

 
 
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Precap :- EmptinessCry...And a twistSmile...
 
 
Hello sweeties...I hope you still remember this story lolzzz...Sorry for the delay...but believe me it was never planned...After this update the future updates wud be quick...so stay tuned with this story, as me gona finish it soon...
 
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Finally update mil raha hai ...yupiee
But mene abhi tak last wala part nahi parha ...

Chalo koi na ill read on sunday after test ...

Abhi tou mom iss halat mien p.c ke aas paas bhi nahi jaane degi ..:(

Waise mene pro, CH n part 1 ka reply type kiya huya hai ...but ek saath dungi ..:p
Jaldi update karo ...mien sunday ko parhongi ...:*

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Originally posted by sobia4maaneet

Finally update mil raha hai ...yupiee
But mene abhi tak last wala part nahi parha ...

Chalo koi na ill read on sunday after test ...

Abhi tou mom iss halat mien p.c ke aas paas bhi nahi jaane degi ..:(

Waise mene pro, CH n part 1 ka reply type kiya huya hai ...but ek saath dungi ..:p
Jaldi update karo ...mien sunday ko parhongi ...:*
 
okie i hope pro n part 1 acha laga hoEmbarrassed...here is the third part...n iske aage continue karo...abhi koi darr nahiLOL

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this was the hardest part for me to read i skipped most part
waise where r those bas***ds Angry

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Originally posted by abinash079

this was the hardest part for me to read i skipped most part
waise where r those bas***ds Angry
 
dear i edited it a lot...just to make it lil easier for readers to read...
n abt those goons n sameera...cops arrested them...just read it...i am telling u there is nothing scary in this update...

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