Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


mahimaneet IF-Sizzlerz

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Our love is like this porcelain rose
Fragile, yet unable to be broken.
This rose, like our love,
Will never die.

The dew kissed petals represent
The tears we've cried.
It often says the words of affection
That sometimes go unspoken.

Please do not leave our love on the shelf,
With me, you do not have to be afraid to be yourself.

As our life together begins,
I want you to hold the porcelain rose close to your heart.
And remember our love is too strong to be torn apart


She was sitting in a lone corner of her room...ready to slit her wrist...Her trembling hands shivered, as she made her hold tight on the knife...Her mind kept on commanding her to end herself in a sharp blow...She for the final time looked around at the walls...which only screamed of their love...Her gaze stuck on his smiling face...and she scruched her eyes tight, letting out her painful tears...Her heart cried to get rid of his memories, his love, their love...Why it was getting so tough to end herself...
Her cries screeched through the air, as the determination to kill herself drowned...shaking her soul to now live with the burden of her life...Her grip on the knife loosened, as she kept gazing at their love, which echoed from every corner of her room...
A deadly silence prevailed, as her numb hands moved to grab the image of their togetherness...Her soul craved for his one last embrace...that soothing touch...
"geet" she heard him her gaze started searching him in the darkness...She stood on her limping feet, trying to catch his hazy image...Her trembling steps halted infront of the mirror...making her look at her bruised state...
Geet moved back, not able to bear her the images of that horrible night came crashing...She struggled to hold herself safe, but her own touch disgusted her...She madly looked around for the knife, panicking to end herself...And the next moment a deafening roar pierced the air, followed by a ghastly silence...
"maan" she whispered, smiling to her death bed...
Authors Note :- The above content may sound little scary...So please sensitive people can avoid reading this OS...
It has been said...time heals all wounds...But I do not agree...The wounds remain...With time, the mind protects its sanity...covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens...But it is never gone...
                                                  - Geet Handa
The damage was permanent...there would be scars...But even the angriest scars faded over the time...I belive my love is capable of soothing her pain...I will never let her live in those moments ever again...
                                              - Maan Singh Khurana
~Link to all my work~
Hellooo guys how are you all...I am back again with another short story for you guys...It will be hardly of 4 parts...As  u can guess the story is little dark...But will try to make it as simple as possible...
Still will ask sensitive people to avoid i don't want any bashing on this story...
I hope readers will support me...and seriously i need it this time...Pls give it a try...
love u lots,
(C) 2012 Varsha Khedekar, All Rights Reserved.

Edited by mahimaneet - 04 August 2013 at 1:19pm

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sobia4maaneet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged


di ...kabhi kabhi mujhe na Almighty ko ghussa karne ko mood hota hai ..
yeh itni ache writing skills kyun dee dii aap jaisi devil ke paas ..

me sobbing reading it ..
itna painful prologue dee rahe hu di ..
bachoon ko rolaoge ...OuchOuch


i loved ur starting poem ..
awestruck with it ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

the porcelain rose ...Day Dreaming

what an example ..
actually it is undying just like thr love ...!!

ClapClapClap   StarStarStar    ClapClapClap

Maaneet's prospective was true ...but i loved maan's oath ...awee he is ready to accept her with all her pain n bruises ..

me kind of getting the idea of what would have happened with her ..yet can't dare enough to type it hope i am wrong ..OuchOuch


iss ko sirf 4-5 parts tak rakhne ke liye ..
mien iss se ziada bardasht bhi nhi kar paati ...LOLLOL 

Now start it soon ..n end it soon as well ...TongueTongue
u know y i am saying it ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

All the Best ...waise pata tou hai u will rock it YET AGAIN ..
but fir bhi
PAPA new project ki starting par bolte hain na ..

Sobia ...Hug

BTW ..
me first ...dhinka chika ...LOL

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 30 November 2012 at 3:18pm

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mahimaneet IF-Sizzlerz

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Maan Singh Khurana :- A 25yrs old charming guy...Who lives with his dadi maa in Khurana Mansion...His parents died when he was just 4 yrs old...and sinces than his dadima looked after him...He has just completed his studies and now learning business under the supervision of his Mentor, his dadima...
Wana take over KC completely by himself...He want it to reach the same heights where it used be at the time of his dad...
Madly in love with Geet handa, whom he met through a common friend...Very serious about his relationship with her...And even his dadima has approved it...
For him she is his life...his world...his inspiration...his everything...Without her he is nothing...
Geet Handa:- A very vivacious bubbly girl...24 yrs old, and is now in her final years of MBA...Staying alone, as her parents are divorced...Highly rich, but very down to earth...
Is hopelessly in love with maan...She first time met him at armaan's party, where their friends smartly abondoned them to spent some time alone...
For her she is everything what maan wants her to be...In short her life starts and ends on him...She is nothing without him...And belives only he has that right to touch her soul...

Edited by mahimaneet - 08 July 2013 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
ehehe ..mene aapki index ki jaga maar li ...LOL

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:21pm | IP Logged

chalo i am entering with MSK pic ..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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