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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
hi guys...i m sorry 4 delay...but i'll updating this FF regularly from coming sunday...until then enjoy first part of my new ff 'MY LOVE IS NOT LIE':)
HOPE U ALL LOVE IT:)
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Part 1

 
 
"Papa run!!!!!!"
 
Manvi shouted on her father who was sleeping peacefully..Leaving all troubles and worries on his daughter. He woke up hearing manvi's loud voice….

Madan:- kya hua mannu…earthquake aya kya????

Manvi:- agar aap yahan se jaldi nahi bhage na, toh jaroor aa jayega!!!!

                 Aapko marne who pappu aur uski gang yahi hamare ghar ki taraf aa rahe hai…..app bhagiye papa….

Madan:- hey bhagwan!!!!!...tum apna khayal rakhna beta….mein jaldi ghar wapas aaunga…

Manvi:- don't worry about me….just take care of urself…

he ran through back door on his night clothes….just when someone knocked door…

Pappu:- kaha hai tumhara baap???

Manvi:- who kaam pe gaye hai….(smiling)

Pappu:- mujhe pagal samajhte hai kya…..woh Madan Sharma kaam karega…aur who bhi itni subah….

Manvi:- please mujhe kuch aur time dijiye…mein jald hi aapke saare paise wapas kar dungi…please (joining hands)

Pappu:- maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai..chamak challo..ki mujhse shaadi karlo…tumhari sare loan maaf kar dunga….

Manvi was really angry on him now. He always irritated her asking to get married to him….but now she lost her temper…and she shouted on him….

Manvi:- oye..pappu ke bacche….agar phirse shaadi ki baat ki na toh teri sari haddiya tod  dungi!!!!

Pappu:- oh….gussa aa raha hai…agar tum ne abhi mere paise nahi diye toh mein tumhe utha ke le jaunga!!!! (glaring at her evilly)

Manvi was little scared now…as she knew they mean it….she thought hard and idea clicked in her head…she turned around and tried to bring fake tears….

Manvi:- (facing Pappu) aap please mujhe kuch aur time dijiye please…mere pass koi naukri nahi hai abhi, aur upar se yeh baccha..(Keeping hand on stomach)

Pappu:- tum pregnant ho!!!! (Shocked)

Manvi:- haan…mein ek ladke se bohot pyaar karti hoon magar jab use pata chala ki mein uske bache ki maa banewali hoon who mujhe chodke chala gaya… aur mere papa bhi mujse baat nahi karte, aur apne bache ke liye mujhe private tourist guide ka kaam karna pad raha hai, subah se sham…agar aap bhi mujhe itni taqleef denge toh mein kya karungi….

And she covered her face and turned around to hide her smile…just when she felt his hand on her shoulder…she turned around to see everyone...Including Pappu , were crying!!!!

Manvi was so shocked…she knew that she can fool them easily.….but her lie could make a goon cry, she was seeing it for first time!!!

Pappu:- manvi…ro mat….mein tumhare saath hoon. Tumhe paise dene ki jaroorath nahi hai. Aaj se mein tumhara bhai hoon…aur tum meri behen!!!

He hugged her, consoling like a mother, running his hand on her hairs….

Manvi:- (breaking hug) thnx bhai….aap kitne aache hai….aap toh…'Ek hazaroon mein mere bhai hai!!!!' (Suppressing her laugh)

Pappu:- (emotionally)manvi behen…tum fikar mat karo jab tak tumhara yeh bhai hai na…tab tak mein tumhe sari musibat se bahar nikalunga…

         Bata mujhe who kaun kamina saala hai jisne tumhari yeh halat ki hai….mein use abhi thik hoon!!!!

Manvi was scared…but still she managed to keep on this act…..

Manvi:- bhai…aap kyu taqleef le rahe hai… woh bohot amir (rich) hai, aapki dhamki se nahi darega…waise bhi mein nahi chahti ki use kuch problem ho…mein use bohot pyaar karti hoon bhai…. (Faking tears…)

Pappu:-ok Manvi behen…..tum baas apna aur chutku ka dhyan rakhna….aur kuch tumhe chahiye toh humese kisi ko bhi call karna….bye!!!!

Manvi :- bye bhaiya!!!!

She closed the door bidding them bye…. She started laughing till her stomach hurts.

Manvi:- kitne buddhu hai bechare…accha hua yeh idea mere dimaag mein aaya varna us pappu ke saath mujhe shaadi karni padti….well done MANVI!!!!! (hugging herself)

Abhi mujhe yeh baat rishi ko batati hoon…

Rishi was her friend Nishi's brother, but he was more attached to Manvi than Nishi….he always helped her in bad times. He was also her assistant in her private tourist guide work!!!!

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 Pappu and his gang were very sad hearing Manvi's story…

Pappu:- Dekha tum logo ne, manvi kitna pyaar karti hai us ladke se….hum jaroor usse manvi ke paas le aayenge kisi bhi halat mein…

Shyam(one of his gang member):- magar bhai, manvi behen ne toh uska naam bhi nahi bataya!!!!

Pappu:- tum log uska peecha karo…woh jaroor use milegi….. mujhe uski sari information aaj hi chahiye….dekhta hoon woh saala kaise hameri manvi ko nahi apnata….

Shyam: - k...Bhai….

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Manvi was talking with Rishi on cell…narrating whole story to him….

Manvi:- aaj agar tum unki shakal dekhte na..toh tumhe apni mannu Di pe naaz hota!!!!

Rishi:- di….but be careful….woh bohot khatarnak hai….

Manvi:- don't worry Rishi…waise tum L'Avenuel hotel ke pass jaldi aa jana…tumhe pata hai na…hume tourist dhoondne hai wahan….

Rishi:- magar di hum tourists ko tourists place mein bhi dhoond sakte hai na…phir us bade hotel mein kyu???

Manvi:- are mere bachhe….waha hume ache tourists milenge, jo fees bhi bohot denge….!!!!!

Rishi:- k, di as u say…..i'll b near hotel in few minutes…bye…

Manvi:- bye!!!

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Manvi got ready for her work and left from her house. Pappu's gang members followed her all the way and she least knew about it.

Manvi came near Rishi….

Rishi:- Di aap aa gayi…ab hum andar kaise jayenge????

Manvi:- don't worry…pehle mein jaati hoon phir tum aa jana mere piche…aur guards ki taraf mat dekhna…k….warna unhe shak ho jayega….

Rishi:- k, Di…

Manvi confidently walked inside hotel…she saw hotel…with her big wide eyes… it was so beautiful and luxurious….then she composed herself and turned to walk towards waiting hall….to look out for some tourists…

Just, when someone bumped on her shoulder hard. She lost her balance and was about to fall when someone caught her waist surrounding his strong arms and saved her from falling. She closed her eyes tightly in fear of getting hurt, but she didn't feel any pain…so she slowly opened her eyes…and there she saw the two most beautiful eyes looking at her…they were green shaded…she wondered how can someone have so beautiful eyes….but her dream broke as soon as he jerked her pushing back….

Guy:- how dare u…..r u blind????

Manvi was still in shock…no words were coming out of her throat…

Guy:- cant u speak….u wasted my time…u dumb girl….

He was scolding her continuously….

Manvi was now very angry as he was shouting on her in front of everyone…but then she clam herself as she did not want to create scene and get caught….

Manvi: - (making innocent face) I m really sorry (joining hands)….woh mein jaldi mein thi….

Virat: - from next time…u better walk properly (pointing a finger)

Manvi: - sorry again (walking opposite direction)….

He left in his angry mode with all his assistants following him….

Pappu's gang member witnessed the entire scene from outside through glass door…as they were not allowed to enter in hotel by guards, seeing their clothes.

Shyam:- shayad wohi hai jisne manvi ko dhoka diya, use kaise daat(scold) raha tha woh.…chalo uski information nikalte hai…aur boss ko batate hai…

And they left to collect every single detail about that guy…..

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Manvi came back home after a big day. She was really tired wondering for tourists…but nothing came in her hand. She was depressed, but still she managed to keep that smile on her face as she knew crying won't be the solution for her miseries….

Manvi opened the main door and she saw her father watching TV….

Manvi:- papa, aap thik hai na….kab aaye aap???

Madan:- abhi kuch der pehle…waise tum kaha gayi thi????

Manvi:- kaam ki wajah se bahar gayi thi…waise apko pappu ke logone dekha nahi na ate hue???

Madan:- nahi mannu….

Manvi:- papa aap yahanse Mumbai jayiye…please…jab tak tak yeh sara mamla thanda nahi ho jata….

Madan:- magar tum kyu nahi aa rahi ho mere saath….

Manvi:- mein nishi ke paas jaungi…usne mere liye koi naukri dhondi hai wahan….toh mein uske saath shimla mein rahungi….aap meri chinta mat kijiye….

Madan hugged her….

Madan:- sorry mannu…I m really a bad papa….but soon I'll earn money in Mumbai and will pay all loan.

Manvi:- I know dad u will…(her eyes got wet)

Manvi:- waise wahan settle hote hi mujhe call kijiye…k….
 
Madan:- k…..
 
They both packed his bag and bid her bye to her dad…..

Just then her phone rang….

Manvi:- hello!!! Kaun bol raha hai???

Pappu:- tumhara bhai…Pappu!!!

Manvi made a irritating face as she heard him….

Manvi:- haan boliye bhiyaa…

Pappu:- ab darne ki koi baat nahi hai manvi…maine use thikse samjhaya hai…woh tumhe jaroor apna lega ab!!!!!

Manvi:- kaun????

Pappu:- tumhare bacche ka baap….aaj mere logo ne tumhe uske saath baat karte dekha hotel mein….maine use phone karke sab thik se samjhaya hai mere tarike se….dekhna kal tumhare paas daudta (running) ayega….

Manvi:- (stammering) aap kiski baat kar rahe ho????

Pappu:- VIRAT SINGH VADHERA….tumhara aashiq!!!!!!!! 

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Rishi...

 
Nishi...
 
 
hope u all like first part:)...sorry for some mistakes...as i drafted it in just an hour...
tamatars and chappals r most welcome...
for people who cant understand hindi...i'll update english translation of dialouges from next part...hope u bear it for this part...
gud night...sleep tight:):):)LOL

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yay  Party first to comment
it was hilarious loved manvi's story
now lets see what  happens
continue soon


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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Res.
Unres.
Gud start shilpa.
Feel sad for pappu.
Kya hoga abhi?
eagerly waiting to read d next part.
Thanks for d pm.

Edited by aaliya172 - 12 December 2012 at 9:36am

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged
hey shilpa I had just read your FF "Jab we Met"Embarrassed and it was really good piece of writing and also have also seen your vm on jab we met and is really good!Thumbs Up and this also continues the accent and is a really interesting concept! hope to read more so please pm me as well.Thumbs Up

and a great work! applause!!!!!Clap

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
luv ur writtng skill...i had become ur great fan...
plz update  soon next part...
by the way whn r u updtng

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ppoojaa1

luv ur writtng skill...i had become ur great fan...
plz update  soon next part...
by the way whn r u updtng

soon dear...maybe by tommorow morning:):):)Wink

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its lovely dear...Smile

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Posted: 12 December 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Nice start..! hilarious to see maanvi fooling n then falling in her own trap..!

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