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saba-ramisa

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged

Hey guys my name is ramisa (rami) and i'm new in qubool hai forum . this is my very first story i'm writing on asya hope you guys will like it ...

Night of Stars ...

CHAPTER 1

ok i will cont from where asad through his phone on wall . and zoya go to his room to return his phone after repairing it .

At asad's room he was sitting alone in window getting angry on zoya and remembring their first meet and the lastt meet when he was too close to her suddenly her stand up from window and go to the door he open the door and his eyes start searching zoya but she was gone his eyes catch the flor he sit on his feet and pick his mobile with a letter down from floor of the door he again watch here and there . he stand up go inside the room and close the door . he start reading the letter where was writter that 

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Mr.asad ahmed khan aaj tak mene aap se sorry bulwaya hai lekin aaj se mein aap ko sorry bolna chahun gi i'm sorry aap ka phone thike kar diya hai aur phone se password bhi hata diya hai zoya . after reading the letter he open his room's door and walk till zoya's room he knock her door . zoya open the door and asad enter inside zoya got shocked that why he came to my room . 

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Asad : zoya mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai 
zoya : kuch kehna hai kya 
Asad was going to speak suddenly zoya immidiatly speak ek min ek min isse pehle ke aap mujhe kuch kahein mein aap se kuch kehna chahti hoon .
Asad : zoya first let me complete aap plz baad mein bolna.
zoya : no...first me 
isse pehle ke aap mujhe dantein ya mujhe par challayein i just wanted to say you three magical words i am sorry ...mera ho gaya ab aap ki baari
Asad : arre zoya mein yahaan aap ko dantne ya aap pe chilane nahi aaya hoon 
zoya immidiatly said toh ???

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Asad : actually mein kehne aaya tha ke ...ke ...ab mein aap se kehne aaya tha ke i 
Zoya : i...???
Asad : i am ...ab...i am...
zoya : i...am ...kya ???
Asad : ok let me say it i ...am...sss...sorry huh .
zoya : haaa...di mein thand par gayi 
Asad : kya dil mein thand ???
zoya : haan thand ufff...bara maza aaraha hai aap ke muh se sorry sun kar 

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Asad : kya ???
zoya : haan and she start laughing 
Asad was shocked watching her laughing and confsed with her words words after some time he understand that what was her mean .
zoya : hmmm...bs yehi to mujhe chahiye tha
Asad : kya ???
zoya : aap ko confused dekhna come on lets shake hands and get friends .
Asad : friend ship and with you mene pehle bhi kaha tha ke mujhe tum jaisi larkiyun mein koi interest nahi hai and he leave
zoya still was standing there and saying ALLAH miyan what's wrong with him abhi to sorry bola and dusre pal hi gussa hogaye par jo bhi ho sorry to mene bolawa hi liya said zoya laughing ...

To be continue Embarrassed

how was it plz leave your comment's ...

Saba-ramisaBig smile


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Edited by saba-ramisa - 23 February 2013 at 4:08am

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Hey Ramisa,
 
Lovely write up. So good to read. Good Job.

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Nice continue plz

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Good start.
Continue soon

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by naina2010

Hey Ramisa,
 
Lovely write up. So good to read. Good Job.

thanks dear Big smile

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