Feelings:Raghav's POV chapter 3 pg 7 (Page 2)

Post Reply New Post

Next Topic

Prev Topic

-Haari-

IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 September 2012

Posts: 6749

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged

nice post shasha

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Aditi_4ver,

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Feelings:Raghav's POV chapter 3 pg 7 (Page 2)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Aditi_4ver

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 October 2012

Posts: 2827

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Jerryberry

Awesum start sasha.. dis was sumthng v always wantd.. v hve always seen sia's feelings bt nt raghav's.. thanks 4 starting sch a lovely ss.. continue soon.. Smile

Thaku Jerry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aditi_4ver

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 October 2012

Posts: 2827

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged

Originally posted by muskanpuri99

wow!!! Sasha !!...The idea of the ss is too good and the start is just amazing...u have potryed each and every feeling beautifully and the pics go very well with what u have written...cant wait to read more about raghavs feeling...Its just lovely!!

Thanks Muskan! Your comment matters a lot!

Aditi_4ver

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 October 2012

Posts: 2827

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Haari05

nice post shasha

Thanks!!!!!

Aditi_4ver

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 October 2012

Posts: 2827

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by chahat4u

Firstly, so happy so see u back. Hug

Missed u very-2 much. Regarding this FF, I loooved it; loved it to the core. It was so awesme and very nice to read about Raghav's feelings and his POV after his departure. You portrayed them sooo well sweetie. Big smile

My request to you: Hope you are not writing this as an OS!!! Please make it longer and make it a SS!!! YOu write so-2 well, and love ur readings. I am not that good at words...but I really wnt to read more! Smile

Thanks!

AbiAnshUtpol

IF-Stunnerz

BollyCurry Buzzer

Joined: 21 February 2012

Posts: 36148

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged

Sasha sorry for being late bt soon i'll read all updates

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Aditi_4ver,

Aditi_4ver

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 October 2012

Posts: 2827

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged

Originally posted by AbiAnshUtpol

Sasha sorry for being late bt soon i'll read all updates

Heeeyyy!!!! Seein u after a looong tym in the forum... heard u hav xams... All the best!!!!!
And, don't worry, baad mein comment kar do... thanx Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AbiAnshUtpol,

Aditi_4ver

IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 October 2012

Posts: 2827

Posted: 05 December 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 1

"Oberoi Mansion". I have reached home. Back to USA. Now, theres no turning back. Par... I DO wanna talk to mom and dad and sort out our problems but... Khash ye problems sort karne ke liye mujhe Elite chodke na aana padta. I take i deep breathe and look at the big mansion in front of me...

I still remember my fifth birthday. Mom and dad... Werent so busy that time. They always made time fr me. Coming to my fifth birthday...

30 Deember. A cold snowy winters night. I was packed off to Rishabh's house (My bro) in the morning and in the evening, i was rushed to Jack's house (my friend).

I returned home at 7 PM. It was all dark arround and then suddenly... "Happy Birthday Raghav!" I heard innumerable people scream from everywhere! And then I enjoyed my birthday to the fullest! It was the best day, I ever had with my friends and family. Especialy mom and dad; but it was the last fun moment we ever had...

Now, finally decide to go in. Meet mom and dad. I had informed dad about my arrival, but I asked him not to tell mom. I wanted to surprise her. I ring the bell. A lady opens the door. Mrs Stewert, our house keeper. She was practically my baby sitter as well. She greets me with a tight, warm, motherly hug and I hug her back. Now, I tip toe into the living room...

Mum is sitting on a sofa; she is reading a magazine. "BOO" i say, right near her left ear.Mum litterally jumps with fear and turns back!

"Raghav! Tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya tha!" she says as she hugs me tightly and gives me a kiss on the cheek. I hug her back. And suddenly, we realise that we've not spoken to each other for years. But still, this is so wierd that within 5 seconds we got along so well. Guess this is what they call MAMTA!

"Tumhari flight kais thi?" asks mum breaking the silence between us

"Flight... Well, it was white on the outside, golden yellow in the inside aur..." I say

"I meant ki tumhari journey kaisi thi!" says mom

"Achchi. Aur aap?"

"Theek... Waise tumne bataya kyu nahi ki tum aa rahe ho?" says mum

"Bataaya tha, dad ko. But, Maine unhe iss baat ko secret rakhne ko kaha taaki aapko surprise kar sakoon!" I say winking

"Tum aur tumhare dad na... So, tum kuch khaaoge?" she asks

"Haan, par abhi main fresh ho jaata hoon." I say walking towards the stairs...

Thats my room! Cool right? It hasn't changed a bit. Theres only ne difference... Now its a lot more cleaner! I dump my bags on the ground (I didn't let the house keepers carry it; i wanted to do my own work). I sigh and fall on the bed!!

...

Thats it for now.. Hope you liked it. Sorry for not adding any Rasia memories. Do comment and hit the like button if you liked it. Thank you!

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:

diyadawda13, MusicPrincess, shruti-love, chahat4u, nimmi-hhl, pia.raha, -Haari-, AbiAnshUtpol,

Page 2 of 9
« previous
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
next»

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Topics	Topic Starter	Replies	Views	Last Post
ABHIYA FF:LOVE THAT SLAUGHTERED ME(chapter 10 page 70)pms later 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 77 78	-srija-	621	26591	23 May 2013 at 7:11am By .rumki.
Arshi ff its nt accident but destiny(chapter 1 pg 7) 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 14 15	-srija-	114	22073	23 April 2013 at 9:06pm By bunaveena
Abhiya FF: Love conquers All Chapter 11 PG 24 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 23 24	HallyH	188	12186	06 April 2013 at 2:33pm By Abhiya_Visu
FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 34 35	FingerFetish	279	31142	31 March 2013 at 11:18pm By nimi216
Dil, Dosti, Magic!--Chapter 6 pg 33 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 35 36	the_writer_21	284	20850	15 March 2013 at 9:03pm By meghanakiran

Feelings:Raghav's POV chapter 3 pg 7 (Page 2)

Page 2 of 9

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged

Posted: 05 December 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged

Related Topics

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Search

Join India-forums Today!

Here's why members would love to be a part of India-Forums.com:

Join Us Close