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Idle Aditi_4ver

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Hey guys! I know Im a little too late to make this ss, but a thought just occured. I thought of making an ss on Raghav's feelings on how he felt after he left Elite. Heres the prolougue.
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We were out on our first romantic date together. That is when I got to know that mum has cancer. Blood cancer...
 
11 June 2012
The train left the patform. Im going to go back to US today. To be with mom. Cuz she needs me the most. I've got to leave behind everyone... Juno,my best buddy. Wadda Nikka, my partners in crime. Sammy, my other best buddy. Tanya, my silly but good friend. Vishal, the "Villian", Sally,my ex-girl friend. Pata nahi sab ko bye kaise boloonga. Agar in sab ko bol bhi doon, toh Pushpa ko kaise boloonga? Pushpa. My one and only first and the last true love of my life. The only girl, jiske saath main freely baat kar sakta hoon. The one girl jiske kareb aate hi meri heart race karne lagti hai. How? How do I tell her good bye?
 
3 hours later
"Raghav... Raghav... I...I...I love you too.." screamed my Pushpa. She came running behind the train. Oh how i wish i can pull her up into the train! But its too late now. She cant run any further. We just keep waving to each other till we can see each other.
The train has already left the plat form. I walk over to my seat and sit down. I kept my bags down on the floor, when I feel my cheks are wet. I touch them. I am crying. I cant control them any longer. When Pushpa was with me, I had to control, so that she doesnt start crying. But now. The compartment is also empty. I can cry all i want. No one to stop me...
(These pix are of Raghav's flashbacks)
 
That was the last I saw of her. I close my eyes..
 
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I open my eyes. The more i try not to think aout her, the more i end up thinking of her. I divert my thoughts to juno and the rest of my gang.
 
 
Insead of the good bye part, i remembered all the fun times we had together. The times when we made of Vishal...
 
 
How am I going to cope with this? Will I ever meet Pushpa, Juno, Wadda Nikka, Sammy, Tan, Miss Sane, Bull Dog... Will I ever meet them again...
 
...
Thats it guys. Hit the like button if you all like it. Sorry for the senti part.
Thank you... Embarrassed
 
 
INDEX
 
PROLOUGE= PG1
CHAPTER 1=PG2
CHAPTER 2=PG5
CHAPTER 3=PG 7


Edited by Aditi_4ver - 19 January 2013 at 4:44am

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Awesum start sasha.. dis was sumthng v always wantd.. v hve always seen sia's feelings bt nt raghav's.. thanks 4 starting sch a lovely ss.. continue soon..Smile

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
wow!!! Sasha !!...The idea of the ss is too good and the start is just amazing...u have  potryed each and every feeling beautifully and the pics go very well with what u have written...cant wait to read more about raghavs feeling...Its just lovely!!EmbarrassedSmile



Edited by muskanpuri99 - 01 December 2012 at 2:55am

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Firstly, so happy so see u back. Hug Missed u very-2 much. Regarding this FF, I loooved it; loved it to the core. It was so awesme and very nice to read about Raghav's feelings and his POV after his departure. You portrayed them sooo well sweetie. Big smile

My request to you: Hope you are not writing this as an OS!!! Please make it longer and make it a SS!!! YOu write so-2 well, and love ur readings. I am not that good at words...but I really wnt to read more! Smile

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
i don't follow this show shasha so i  have no idea who raghav is but you have a nice writing styleSmile...received your PM, thought i would check it out,...and found out you gave me the wrong link and thats how I ended up hereLOL

Edited by haya20 - 01 December 2012 at 1:00pm

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
hey sash glad that u started this ssBig smile
its nice to know things from raghav's pov...awesome start!!!
the feelings that u portrayed were too good!!!
want to read more...continue soon Smile

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
nice ss

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