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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:02am | IP Logged

Third day morning

HARISH'S PLACE

h- arrey pankhuri tumhe pata hai, Adi ko wo project mil gaya jiske liye wo pichle 2 mnths se din- raat mehnat kar raha tha..

p- sach papa, mujhe nai pata tha but thankyou batane k liye, kitna khush hongey na Adi aur baaki sab bSmile

h- haan beta, ab tum mujhe thank you bologi, mai tumari avantika aunty nai hu jo tum itna formal ho rahe ho bachcha

p- nai papa aisa nai hai

har- achaa chalo ab chai lelo

p- ji, dadi kahan hai 

h- maa so rai hai unko fever tha raat ko medicine de di hai

p- thik hai, uthengi to mai dekh lungi

h- chalo I am over with the tea mai jaata hu ready ho k aata hu

(both Harish and Pankhuri left from living room, pankhuri goes to kitchen and harish to his room to get ready)

DEEWAN MANSION

Adi was sleeping peacefully , sunrays start falling on his face, alarm rang , he got up but he was not feeling to come out from bed ….finally he went to washroom to freshen-up

Adi comes down and joins every1 at dining table

Avantika- aao Adi, breakfast kar lo

Adi- ji Mom

Preeti- congratulations Adi, sorry raat ko jab mai tumhe wish karne aai tab tum so gaye they

Adi- thanks masi

Nanaji- Adi beta aaj tum off le sakte ho agar chaho to

Avantika- Yes Adi, I agree with dad kal tum boht thak gaye hogey…

Adi- nai mom, its ok I will come to office

naNAji- arrey barkhurdaar, aaj tum mere saath ghar pe ruku kyu na aaj ek-ek match khele badminton ka

adi- ok nanu

 

avantika recieves call from their banglore office

Av- dad mujhe aur bhaiya ko abi banglore k liye nikalna hoga

(suddenly Adi got something in his mind, Mom ja rahi hai to mai aaj pankhuri se mil sakta hu..hmmm ye sahi rahega)

Na- par beta yu achanak se, hua kya ?

Av- nthng serious dad, waha kuch London k clients hai jo sirf hum logo se milna chahte hai deal sign karne se pehle

Na- ok

Av- Adi if u have not planned anythng yet, to kya tum chalogey saath ?

(Adi shocked, what now, mai to kuch aur soch raha tha ye kya ho gaya)


TO BE CONTINUED

PLease guys, let me know if u r liking it or not(I can't see ur comments)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Hello thank you for the pm.
well i could only understand part of ur story. I am nt hindi speaking. sorry, but frm what i read and understood, i love the flow (:
keep writing dear. One thing is yes you may nt get many comments and likes initially but dun give up on the story that you have started, just go on writing, people will eventually read and comment. you must have known that there many silent readers as well in the forum. sooo just continue dear, you are doing a good job. Smile connect with ur inner feelings and write and write moreee and beee happy! LOL
No offenses intended. 

love,
sneha

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Ofcourse. I lykd diz. Plz continue...!Embarrassed

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shangawesome

Hello thank you for the pm.
well i could only understand part of ur story. I am nt hindi speaking. sorry, but frm what i read and understood, i love the flow (:
keep writing dear. One thing is yes you may nt get many comments and likes initially but dun give up on the story that you have started, just go on writing, people will eventually read and comment. you must have known that there many silent readers as well in the forum. sooo just continue dear, you are doing a good job. Smile connect with ur inner feelings and write and write moreee and beee happy! LOL
No offenses intended. 

love,
sneha

thanx a lot sneha, ur reply is appreciated, well i know about silent readers now i will try to write the same in english

thank you dear

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Silsha

Ofcourse. I lykd diz. Plz continue...!Embarrassed


thanx dear... next update is ready but i need to do some editing on that part 
will update soon

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Nice dear...!! Continue soon..!!
Thanx for pm Smile

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
nice os pls continue Clap

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Very nice OS Smile
Contine soon Smile Tongue

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