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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 1:53am | IP Logged
This is after, Avantika told them to live seperately for 15 daysSleepy

here ADI was in Deewan Mansion and Pankhuri was at harish's place. Pankhuri's parents already left for Kullu. 

Adi was thinking he is already missing her, it just been few hours of seperation then how he will live without pankhuri for 15 days, with whom he will share his coffee nd now he has to take his dinner alone only, in Deewan mansion. Broken Heart

Avantika called him to take his dinner but he was not in mood to have it.

ADI- Mom, i am not feeling hungry, aap kha lijiye mai baad mai kha lunga..!!!
Avantika- as ur wish, waise b aajkal sunta kaun hai mer yaha

Adi left from living area. He was on terrace with his masi

masi, u r here Is everything ok..??

preeti- Adi i should ask this from you..??
adi- I know masi u r also upset from me, but trust me i am happy with my decision.
preeti- i know and i am not upset from u and muje pata hai you are missing ur friend tabi tumne dinner nai kiya na..??
Adi- sach bolu to yes masi i am already missing her. but i dont know masi why mom not understand this, wo boht achii hai n d sab ladkiyo se alag b

Preeti was listening to him and happy to see that he is in love with her but he is not aware of itSmile

p- don't you think it is something above friendship..??Tongue
A- masi ab aap b shuru mat ho jao, abi thodi der pehle Nanu ne mujhe itna badi class di hai pyaar pe
P- par maine to kaha hi nai ki ye pyaar hai
A- masi now u r playing with ur words
P- chalo chalte hai upar thand badh rai hai
A- ok chalo mai b jata hu apne room mai kuch kaam hai office ka.


HARISH'S PLACE

pankhuri was having dinner with half heartedly, she was not in mood but she had to because of adi. Papa bas kha liya maine, ab aur mann nai hai. beta kuch nai hota thoda sa aur kha le. 

H- beta, mujhe pata hai avantika ko aisa nai karna chahiye tha lekin, wo aisi hi hai, usko thoda time lagta hai cheezo ko accept karne mai
P- mai janti hu papa, koi baat nai

pankhuri in her room nd there Adi was in his room, thinking about each other (Adi thought to him self, pankhuri ko call karta hu wo to kisi ko pata b nai chalega) he calls her nd her mobile rings nd flashes his name "ADI" she was very happy nd picked it up in two rings only...

Adi- kya baat hai aaj to tuney badi jaldi phn pick kar liya
Pan- nai, wo..ummm ha wo na abi ek msg aaya tha to cell haath mai hi tha
adi knows she is lying, she is w8ng for his call
adi- achaa, aur bata khana khaya ?
pan- haa khya tha, aur aapne..??
adi- nai khaya mann nai tha
pan- Adi aap khana kha lo fir aap aadhi raat ko uth k baith jaogey, karwachauth waly din k jaise
adi- tu b na, waise mujhe ab thodi thodi bhook lag rai hai, tu hold pe ruk mai shanky ko bolta hu dinner dene k liye. 
pan- hmmm...
adi-...pan-...adi-...pan-...


they were talking till 4am on the pohne, they wished each other gud nt nd disconnected the call with sad tone as they were not feeling enough of it...


To Be  Continued(only if u want)


plzzz let me whether u like it or not...Smile









Edited by surbhi_16 - 03 December 2012 at 4:02am

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 2:05am | IP Logged
wow amazing os :-)

loved it ,,,

carry on :-)

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
Wow..!! Luvable OS..!!Clap, plz continue,!Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
loved it...
do continue but can you add eng translation too...

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Beautifully written Big smile 
Continue soon 

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
OMG, so cute ! Heart
Love it ! PM please Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetysaran

loved it...
do continue but can you add eng translation too...


Thank you dear, I can do that, but english does not give the original touch...nyways i will try

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
its awesome... plz continue very soon

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