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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Wow .. wowww..Thats really nice emotional part yaar ..
loved the way you wrote her feelings..

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged
cont soon
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 10:56pm | IP Logged

part 2

Roj naya roop nayi shararat hai iss bacchii ki ram aur aap jaise firse chota roop lekar mere god mein aa gaye ho har roj ye ehsaas khushi deta hai ke main apke saath hoon lekin dukh bhi ke ye sab main aap ke saath baat nahi sakti'.ye baat mujhe andar hi andar kha rahi hai main peehu ke saath khush hoon lekin aap ke pass aap ke liye nahi hoon '..

 

Ram aaj peehu ne palti mari aur madam mera dhyan jaye iss liye phurr phurr karke avaaj kar rahi thi 'seedha peeth ke bal letke avaaj karti hai aur phir palti marke pet pe let ke jorse hasti hai ram ye hasi bilkul aap ki hasi jaisi hai '.peehu hamari phir bhi bacchii hai duniya aur duiyadari se anjaan lekin aap raam aap duniya mein reheke bhi logon se alag un sab se pehchaan hai lekin phir bhi sab ke liye anjaan '.aap ki who masumiyat se bhari aankhein'..

Bass ab aur likhungi toh khud aur apse dur na rakh paun ..har din peehu ko dekh ke aap ko yaad karti hoon aur roj ap se phir ek baar pyar ho jaata hai'haan ram I LOVE YOU '..love you'..

 

Aaj peehu pure 6 mahine ki ho gayi ram aur pata hai ab ghoda ghoda karti hai 'aur uska pet thoda sa bada hai toh balance nahi kar pati aur bed pe hi madam gir jati hai dhooom '.khud hi hsati hai aur phir se suru'

Pata hai ram uski ye  baat bhi aap jaise hai kuch bhi ho who haar nahi manti aur has ke bass phir se suruvat karti hai'kuch kuch who mujhpe bhi hai raam ke woh chot lagne pe bhi hasti hai''

 

Ram apko pata hai aaj peehune crawl kiya aur kis cheez ke liye pata hai hasne lagenge pata chale toh 'main aloo layi thi madam rone lagi toh sab neeche gir gaye aur usko uthane duadi main '

Jab uthake neeche rakha toh crawl karke aloo lene gayi madam '..puri baap ki beti ban chuki hai aaj who ram ..har gol cheez use attract karti hai'..apko jab dekhegi mujhe darr hai ma ko bhi na bhool jaye'.

Meri peehu aaj usne pehla kadam uthaya hai meri taraf main cady se baat kar rahi thi tabhi usne mere pairon ko pakad kar khade hone ki koshish ki'.aur khadi bhi hui'.3 4 kadam badhaye ram aur phir thak gayi'.

Peehu bolne lagi hai '..pa pa pa pa karti rehti hai 'pehla sound uske mooh se pa tha ram PA 'ram e sab ki record karke cd banai hai bhagwan se roj dua karti hoon ke aap se miloon kahi aur aap ko yeh sab dikhau main'

Hamari peehu badh rahi hai raam aur madam ko baasss red colour ke hi kapde pehenne hai'..aur ek baat ram ..apki beti bohot badmash hai'usko apne papa ki tarah pata hai mumma ko kaise apni taraf kheechna hai...main use najar ka tika pair pe lagati hoon toh madam mujhe ..bulati hai'..mmm mmm aur jab uske paas jao toh apne chote chote haaton se apne pair pakad ke bu mmm bu mmm bu 'jaise bol rahi hai mamma bu yane dukh raha hai ''

 

Peehu ab sab saaf saaf bolti hai ram aur aloo hi mangti  hai '.bass '.pata hai ek aur baat peehu kharate leti hai  ram kharate 'uske kharate ki awaaj aap jitni badi nahi hoti ..lekin aise lagta hai jaise koi seeti baja raha ho'



Edited by snehalparab - 29 November 2012 at 10:56pm

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:33am | IP Logged
awesome dear.. continue soon
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Its awesome.
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
This is surely incredible, the pain of Priya is so well depicted, her hurt, her loneliness, her bebasi, her happiness, her feelings for the new born, everything us just appropriate, may be if I was in her place, I would also reacted like that, very emotional, sensitive but at the same time very touchy and beautiful, plz do continue, I loved it
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Beautiful continuation of Priya's thoughts...very nicely pennedClap

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