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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by K.R_ackraal

nicee...
rey,sswayam and vicky bike racer... Wink
hmm bike racers
n thank u

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rubykriyansh

Awsome concept !
Loved d update ..!
Update soon !
thank u

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MOON_ARSHA

nice start .
ye tani rey ka pichha kab chodegi ?
waiting for kriyansh meeting.
thnx for pm.
argghhh!!! tani

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyaansh4evr

awesum yaar ure born genius...Wink waitin 4 kr, meet...thnx 4 pmTongue
mai n born geniuusROFL

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
chapter 2

NEXT DAY...

Rey woke up...he was very happy...but he dont know the reason...thinkin this he went towards the washroom n opened the door...but he frozed...their tani was under shower with oly shorts n short top which ended up till her rib...

Rey: W*F!!! tani what the hell r u doin here??

ta: baby come na lets take a shower...n pulled him towards her...

rey: (he pushed her...makin some distance b/w dem) tani this is the limits...y ur doin all this??

ta: (comin closer to him) because i love you...

rey: but i dont...n now leave...

ta: no...

rey: ok fine...m goin(sayin this he slammed the door...n went out...)

ta: bahut jald ull accept me...

rey went to vicky's room but viky was not their...so he thaught of taking shower...he went n opened the washroom door...

rey: aahhh!!!!(screamed)

actually viky was taking shower...hearing the scream...he also shouted..

vi: ahhh!!! mummy...rey tu yahan kya kar raha hai??

re: viky tu door band nahi kar sakta kya???

vi: vo sab chodo na yaar...waise tu dekhliya kya??

re: vo...vo...haan

vi: nahiii(ekta kapoor style)

rey: (closed his ears)shut up viky...

vi: pehle mujhe promise kar ki tum kisi ko nahi bataoge...

rey: itna gatiya cheezz mai kisi ko batahoonga kya???noways

vi: gatiya...

rey: leave na...mujhe nahana hai...toh side hatt

vi: kyu tumhara washroom ko kya hua??

rey: vo tani...(little sad)

vi: chod yaar usse tujhe pata hai na...uske baare mai

re:hmm (sayin this he went in n took shower)

they all had breakfast...did their works...

IN AFTERNOON

rey: toh dude where vll go??

vi: hmmm tamarind...

rey n swayu: k chaal

ta: kaha ja rahe ho rey??

vi: vo kal rey race jeetha hai na...so he's givin treat...

ta: mai bi chaloongi(holding rey's arms)

rey: ok...

all headded towards the restaurant...

AT THE RESTAURANT

g1: kaha hai yaar ye ladki??

g2: pata nahi wait ill call her...(she called)

g3: hello

g2: kriya where r u??

kr: sharon m stuck in the traffic..do 1 thing u guys go in...ill join u

sh: teek hai(cut the call)

g1: kaha hai vo??

sh: haan neha...vo traffic mai attak gayi hai lets go in...she said she'll come...

ne: ok chalo...

shar n neha were busy talking,...n dashed to some boys...

boys: whooo!!!

shar n neha: sorry sorry...

boys: its ok(when they saw the girls.they were just staring at them...
(aftr sorry mantras both girls went towards a table n settled...

rey: swayam,vik aise statue banke kyu kade ho??

sw: haan haan nothin...ena viky..

vi: haan yaar nothin...

rey: ok
(they all went to the other table..including tani...)

rey: viky shuru kar...

vi: haan haan...
(all were ordering their food...)

GIRLS

ne: ab call karke dekh??

sh: ya 1 sec...(she callled)..kria kahan ho??

kr: m parking shar...m comin

sh: ok...she's comin...

BOYS

all were having...
the seatin was like this...boys table in left ...girls on right...(like opposite)so they can see eachother faces...

kria entered she saw shar n neha...n was comin towards them...

kria's dress:
rey was having...kria passed him...but her duppatta got struck in his watch...(kria's back was facin him)...he saw her...n started undoin her duppatta...kria tuned towards him...he looked up...he was mesmerised...h
could'nt take his eyes from her...he was just seeing her...she was breathtakingly beautiful...
kria came to him...said sorry n started removin her duppata...(BG music same as d3)...llhh...she couldn;t remove it...so she was pouting,biting her lower lip...rey was just staring at her finally she took it out...

kr: sorry...

rey: its,,,its ok
she moved to her table...(bg tune is still playin guys)

she caught her ears and said sorrry to shar n neha...the girls were having food laughing,pouting,giggling...n were enjoying

rey was starin at her...
finally the lunch got over...the girls made their way out...
rey excused himself frm the gang...n followed her...the girls went to their house...rey also returned home...he went directly to his room...closed the door n hopped on the bed...he was starin the ceiling n smilin to himself...

rey:(thinkin)...wow...she's so beautiful...i love her,,,,what love ek hi baar dekar...may be love at frst sight...

he felt someone kissing his cheeks...he jerked n got up...n saw tani nxt to him...

rey: tani tum yaha kaise...

ta: tum apni kayalo mai inti kohi hui thi...tum mujhe dekha hi nahi...waise kya soch rahi thi..

rey:(dreamin) uski baare mai...

tani suddenly got up...n came to him...

ta: kiski baare mai...

rey: arre kuch nahi...

ta:(caught hold of his collar)tum meri alawa kisi ke bare mai sochna bi mat...

rey: leave tani...

n he left the room...n tani broke the nearby wazz...n went out

NXT DAY

rey left his house early n went to the house were girls stay...

he was standin outside the gate...finally kria came out...she was in a hurry...she took her car n drove with a full speed...rey was tensed n he too followed her...she reached the place...

rey: hospital...

she gave her car keys to the guard n ran inside...rey also parked his car n went in...

kr: sister patient kaha hai...

sis: andhar...

kr: sab ready hai...

sis: yes dr...

rey: doctor...

sis: dr actually baby ko safocation ho rahi hai...n patient ka bp bi high hai...

kria tied her hair...sis put her the mask...she wore her gloves...her dress...n went in...rey was out ...a ward boy was passing his way...rey stopped him...

rey:sono ek ladki aayi abi abi...vo dr ye kya??

wb: koun??

rey: abi..operation theatre mai chali...

wb: oh...app madam ki baat karrahe ho kya??

rey: haan madam...

wb: haan vo yaha ke doctor hai...

rey: unka naam

wb: kriya...

rey:(smilin)kria...beautiful just like her...

wb: sab aapne kuch kaha??

rey: nahi...tum jao n thanks

wb: ji(n he went)

rey:Dr.kria...

the operation got over...the patient relatives thanked her...n she entered her cabin...

sis:dr ek patient aya hai...

kr: ok andhar bejiye...

sis: yes doctor...

the patient came in...

kr:(thinkin) isse kya hua dekne mai teek hi lag raha hai...

kr: ji kahiye...

pat: hi...m reyaansh

kr: hi reyaansh..

rey: rey for u..

kr:(thinkin)ajeeb hai...

kr: ok...boliye

rey: mai kya bolu aap boliye...

kr: excuse me...aap yaha yahe ho...

rey: vo actually mujhe love hua hai...iske dawayi ye aapke pass,,,,

kr: what...dekhiye mr reyaansh

rey: rey

kr: watever...

rey: dekhiye aap aise nahi bol sakte...mai apki patient hoon...aap aise baat karte hai apke patients ke saath...

kr: dekho...dont irritate me...n nw out

rey: arre...aap iska solution batahiye mai yaha se chale jauoonga...

kr:(thinkin)kria ye pagal lagtha hai...kuch kar warna tu bi pagal hojaugi...

kr:(smilin) ok aap uss ladki ke paas jakar kehdo u love her...simple...

rey: agr vo nahi mani toh(smrikin)

kr: tum usse manana padega..u love her seriously rite...just go n tell her...

rey: ok...I LOVE U

kr: mujhe nahi uss ladki ko...

rey: vo ladki tum hi ho...

kr: WHAT

rey: itna shock mat ho...take ur time...

kr: r u out of ur mind...aisa koyi kahta hai kya??

rey: oh!! toh tumhe grand proposal chahiye...mai vo bi kardoonga...

kr: leave...

rey: ok...bt ill bi waitin for ur answer...

kr:  pagal(sayin this she slammed her door n went out)

rey: haan...pagal toh hoon...tumhareliye(smilin)...

hwzzz it...
chota tha...i think its long...
plzz gv ur comments...
love ya









 



Edited by kreya_pearl - 30 November 2012 at 6:43am

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
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me first one to commentParty
fabulous update
bechare boys flat toh honge na afterall humari divas hai
rey toh kuch zyada hi fast forward hai but i loved it aur taani uffAngry
thanks for pm
update soon


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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:58am | IP Logged
wow,
awesome...
rey tho full on fida on kria...
loved it...
bt this taani yar argh...
thnx for pm..

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
superb update... Luv it... Thanx for d pm... Hate tani

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