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update de do yr koi toh

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Originally posted by ..Cinderella..

Awesome update... Clap
Loved it...
Update soon...
And thanks for the pm... Smile
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Originally posted by d3_rox

Amazing update...
Really loved it...
Plzzz update soon..
Thanx 4 the PM!!:):)

-Tehmina!!
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hey di 
wen are u updating

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Smilechapter 6Smile

NXT DAY>>>

at rey's house...

rey woke all smiley smiley...SmileWinkhe took his mob n msgd...n went to washroom to take shower...he had a long shower n came out wiping his hairs he ws nt wearing shirt oly pant...he came to his cupboard but someone pulled him...

rey: WTH...Confused

tani: good morning baby(shuffling his hair)...Angry

rey: tani yeh kya hai??? n tum mere baal mai haat maat laga...(serious)

ta: kyu???

rey: kyu ki vo haaq sirf meri love of life ki yeh...Wink

ta: jo mai hoon rite???(smirking)Angry

rey: ur wrong...LOL

she pushed him on the bed n came upon him like her both legs were around him she pinned his hands on either sides n moved forward to kiss...but rey pushed her side n got up he was really angry...but she again pushed him back on bed...n tried to kiss him...

rey: tani stop it...

ta: common rey...ek kiss...Angry

rey: noways...

she started beating him ...she lifted her top for removing it but rey caught her hand...Angry

rey: (geittin his teeth ) wat the hell r u doin tani...

she ignored n started kissing him on his chest...he was frustrated he pushed her with such a force that she fell from the bed n hurt her ankle...he didnt gv a damn abt that n took his dress n walked out of room...

tani had tears n she was hell angry too...Angry

ta: ur always mine rey n smirked...Evil Smile

AT KRIA'S HOUSE

kria woke up she had a broad smile...Big smile

she took her mob n checked if their was any msg...their was a msg from rey...it had good morning loveHeart...she blushed n soon she texted him good morning reyHeart...n she immediately got a call seeing the caller id..a smile crapt on her face...Wink

kr: hello??

rey: ut gayi??Embarrassed

kr: haan...(blushed)Blushing

rey: so aaj free ho??

kr: nahi rey u knw hw's my work...

rey(he was dissapointed)Cry

kr: sorry rey...

rey: hey thats ok..enjoy ur day...i love you...Embarrassed

kr: love u too...Embarrassed

kria was feeling sad...n moved to washroom soon gt ready...

her dress  which rey gifted her in lift...:
n went to living room but she didnt find shar n neha...she was sad coz they didnt wish her...n thaught that may be they hv gone to hospital n went...when she reached hospital nobody wished her...she felt strange n she was searching fr neha n shar...

kr: sister sharon n neha kaha hai??

sis: abi tak nahi aahi mam...

kr: wat???

kr: (thinkin) kaha gaye ye log n she called neha...

neha: hello...

kr: hello neha kaha ho tum...??

ne: vo kria mai aur sharon na humhe ek purani frnd mili thi uski ghar pe hai...hum aaj hospital nahi ayenge ok..bye...

kr: par... kaat diya...

IN REY"S HOUSE...

vi: i love u n all haan...

rey was blushing...Embarrassed

sw: dekho vicky he's blushing...

rey: guys stop it...Embarrassed

someone rang the bell n vicky moved to open it...he opened the door n froze...LOL

sw: yeh aisa boot banke kyu kada hai...n he moved to the door even swayu froze...LOL

rey: yeh log paagal yeh kya n he went to door n saw shar n neha staring at swayam n vicky...

rey: hi sharon hi neha come in...

shar n neha entered but two boys were standing there oly...LOL

sh to rey: rey yeh log paagal yeh kya...hum andhar hagaye phir bi wahi dekh rahe hai...LOL

rey: let me see...

he went n snapped his fingers in front of them..they came back to senses...

rey: guys meet sharon n neha meri kria ki bff's...Blushing

sharon n neha forwarded their hands but these idiot boys were kept on staring their girls...sw was seeing shar n vicky seeing neha...

shar n neha looked at each other...n saw rey...Ouch

rey: guysAngry

swayu n viks came back from their girls land...

rey pulled the boys aside n whispered...

re: guys aise kyu dekh rahe ho vo log dar jayenge so be  normal..LOL

rey: so guys meet sharon n neha...

swayam  n shar shook hands with them but our boys were nt ready to leave their hands...girls were trying to pull but nothin happened...rey who saw this...pinched swayu n viky...ROFL

sw: abbe teri...

sh: so tum bol sakte ho???LOL

sw: wat do u mean bol sakte ho...???Confused

sh: maine socha tum goonge ho..LOLLOL

sw: wat...???

neha looked at vicky...

vi: nahi nahi mai bol sakta hoon dekho m talking...ROFL

ne:(weired face) ok...

sh: so rey kya plan hai...?

vi n sw: wat plan??Confused

rey: vo aaj kria ka birthday hai so we thaught of giving a surprise to her...

sw n vik: hmmm surprise...Wink

rey: haan surprise tum logon ko koi problem hai...??(annoyed)

sw: bilkul nahi humhe kya problem hoga rite viky...

vi: (staring neha) rite rite...

neha(mumbled) weirdo...

rey tells them them the plan n all were vry happy...

hearing girls voice tani came out n saw sharon talking to rey...she came to them n pulled sharon with a force that she went n dashed on swayam..

rey: tani pagal ho kya...sharon r u alrite...??(concerned)

sh: m fine rey...waise who's this??

ta: mai rey ki girlfrnd hoon...Angry

sh n neha: wat???????Shocked n looked at rey...

rey: shut up tani...aisa kuch nahi hai...

sh n neha were nt convinced...

sh came to rey...

sh: rey lagtha hai jo hum plan banaye teh its nt goona work...vo har saal humhare saath kaise spend kar rahi thi vaise hi teek hai(with attitude)n bye...

saying this shar n neha walked out of the house...

rey: sharon ruko...

he moved to them but tani caught his hand...

ta: baby wat plan...Angry

rey:(he jerked his hand)its non of ur business...n moved out...

rey ran to shar n neha...they were moving towards their car..

re: sharon meri baat suno...

sh: kya sunu yahi ki u hv a girlfrnd...(a little loud...)

rey: she's nt my girlfrnd...

ne: phir jo usne kaha vo kya...??

rey tells them evrythin abt tani...

vo: haan sharon he's rite...

sh: swayam...

sw: haan she likes rey but he oly loves kria...

sh: sorry rey...

rey: its ok...so lets start the plan...Wink

tani was hiding n listening to them...

ta: rey mujhse pyaar nahi kartha...karna padega Angryn yeh jis plan ke baare mai baat kar rahe hai mujhe pata lagana hoga...

the whole day passed at evening...

kria was in her cabin checking some reports...she gt a call...

sh: kria ab jaldi se **** resort mai ha jao...

kr: waha kyu??

sh: tum aao pata lagega...

kr: mai nahi ha sakti sharon m busy...n waise bi koi nahi yeh yaha par pata nahi sab kaha gayab hogaye...

sh: kria tumhe hana hi padega...

kr: understand shron...k bye  n she cut the call...

OTHER SIDE...

rey: kya hua??

sh: vo kehrahi hei ki vo nahi ha sakti...

rey: wat???(he was on a verge of crying)Cry

sh: u just wait n watch..Evil Smile

sharon again called...

sh:(panicking) kria kria help me...kria mai (n she cut the call)

kr: sharon..shar

sis: kya hua doctor??

kr: vo sharon mujhe jana hoga..aap plz yaha sambal lijiye...

sis: sure dr...
n she ran out the sister smiled.,..

kria ran to car n drove...

rey: yeh kya kiya??kria

sh: vo hajayegi...

sw: tumhe kaise pata...

sh: u just wait...(smirking)

kria drove to the place were sharon had told her before...she got down it was fully dark...she was scared n saw every where suddenly a lattern got lited n floated in the air...

their were so many color color latterns n happy birthday written on it...

 
she could utter oly one word wow but also she was worried fr sharon...she took her mob to call but the whole resort litted 
imagine its fuul dark n the way is like this...

she walked with a smile when she went in the again it was dark n suddenly the lite was onned...
sorry guys if i hv dissapointed u bt mujhe yeh accha laga...LOL

all: happy birthday kria...

she got scared by the sudden noise but when she saw her love smiling
Embarrassedignore the bg...LOL 
n her besties grinning 
n the whole hospital staff were present their...she was so so happy...

shar n neha ran to her n gave a bone crushing hug n shouted...

happy bithday swtheart...

kria glared at sharon...sharon mouthed sorry hoding ears...

rey came to her...she was just lookin him he took her hand in his n kissed it...

rey: happy birthday love...Embarrassed

kr: thank u...Blushing

somebody's blood was boiling seeing all this...

sw: hpy bday kria...

kria looked confused...

kr: thank u...

rey: kria maine bola tha na swayam n viky..

kr: haan yaad aya...

vi: hpy bday...

kr: thank u n nice to meet u guys...

both smiled...Big smile

staff again wished her...

sw: she's damn beautiful man...

vi: haan yaar...

someone tapped on their shoulder...

vi: koun yeh be...

vo: mai hoon...

sw: rey!!!!Shocked

rey: kya keh rahe teh tum logo ne...(serious)

vi: ku...ku kuch nahi dude...

rey : nahi nahi something like beautiful...

vi: nahi nahi haina swayam...

sw: haan rey nothing...

rey: kria meri hai...get that straight...

vi: haan tumhara hi ok(stammering)LOL

rey: good...n ab chalo...

rey: kria ajao...

rey was standing a little far kria pulled him n both cut the cake...
  she used to feed shar n neha...frst she moved to them...
rey's face fell down but showed that he was happy...

sh n neha nodded no...so kria moved to rey n fed him frst he was so happy he fed her...then she fed shar n neha...they were enjoying...

rey pulled kria to a side on caught hold of her waist...

rey: u look beautiful(pinning her hairs behind)Embarrassed

kr(blushed)Embarrassed

he kissed her cheeks n made her turn the other side her back was facing him he moved her hair frnt n kissed her nape n slid a chain around her neck it was a diamond studded R shaped pendant...
kria saw it n smiled turnd towards him n kissed his forehead...

rey: sirf waha(pouted)

kr: toh tumhe kaha chahiye??

rey: (yahan)showed his lips...

kr:(smilin ok) she was about to kiss but suddenly someone pulled her...

rey: tani..Shocked

ta: tumhari itni himmat she was about to slap kria but rey caught her hand n twisted...

rey: how dare u...(hell angry)...

ta to kria: rey sirf mera hai...Angry

meantime sw,sh,vi,ne come their for the frst time swayam was angry on tani...swayam caught her hand n took her out of the resort pushed her in the car n drove...

kria hd tears n she also walked out...

precap: kriyaansh moments hmm hmmmEmbarrassedLOL

hw's it Big smile
do comment n like...
nxt update demand is page 70...pehli baar rakha haiLOLLOL
love u allSmileEmbarrassed









Edited by kreya_pearl - 30 December 2012 at 4:19am

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 1:29am | IP Logged
r u updating??
then m Ressing Wink
unres
Awesome... fabulous update sweetheart...Clap
what should I call that clinging Taani?? Witch or B***h?????!!!! Angry
Rey  should have slapped her tight!! Angry
btw luvd Rey's surprise...n d R-shaped pendant was so cute.. Day Dreaming
do continue asap...




Edited by shukti_19 - 30 December 2012 at 6:34am

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Originally posted by shukti_19

r u updating??
then m Ressing Wink
yes m gonna updteLOLWink

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