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Omg shree and chotu r dead and ariya was amazing 
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amazing update
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Thank a lot for the PM and sorry for the late comment!

Loved the story so far...Ariya are awesome.
Precap looks funny...update soon.
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Arooja joota, chappal, aande, tamatar jo man chahe marle for being so late to comment 😕 I dunno how did i miss it.so sorry dear

Update was fab dear. Love the eyelock ❤️ hayee 😳 I hope laddu aur chasmish wapis dost ban jayye..nehi nehi dost nehi usse bhi zyada 😳
shree ko aapni beemar aunty ko dekhne jaana hai na club me??🤣 Rathod sir bhi naa,kuch nehi samajhte 🤣

love the update dear..continue soon & sorry for late again.
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Thx every for all da lovely comments.. 😊
it made me feel reallie gr8 dat u all liking my story...😊❤️
nd hope mai sb ki expectations pe utar rahi hn...
nd yeah reallie sorrie for so late update...
Kia karun yeh uni ki waja se tym nahi milta...
nd sorrie once again k mai kisi ko individual rep nahi Kia... bt next tym pakka karun gi...
again thx every 1 nxt chp will b update soon ...😊😊
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Hey dearies, sorrie oce again for the late update..😕 thx for ur valuable omments hope yeh part b sb ko acha lagey..😃😃 dere no ariya scene in it.😕😕. bt pakka in 4b zarur hon gein... 4b will updated tonight or else kal tk... ok enough of my bakwass.. enjoy reading.. do hit LIKE button nd pls leave feedback.. it encourages me to write...😊

Chapter # 4a

Characters:
Arjun(A): Encounter specialist
Riya(Ri): Research specialist
Rathore(Ra): chief of ETF
Chottu(C): muscleman of ETF
Shree(S): It specialist
Karan(K): temporary forensic technician
Aliya: victim
Vineet(V): Aliya's friend
CO: club owner
G: guard
M: manager


Shree and Chottu running as fast as dey could leaving ETF office behind...

S: rukh yar chottu aur Bhaga tou yahi gir jao ga

C: chal phr tujhe utha kar le chalta hn

S: agar Teri 11:30 wali ne dekh lia tou... tujhe kuch aur he samajh bhaitey ge

C: acha chal bas yaha se 5 min dur aik club hai waha chaltey hai

S: magar mein aur nahi chal sakta

C: phr tou aik he tarika hai club tak paunchney ka...

S: no ... nahi

before shree could say anything ... he was in the arms of chottu and chottu starts walking

S: chottu mujhe nichey utaar..

C: shree Ab agar kuch bola tou phir agey club tak tu mujhe utha kar le jaye ga ...n I mean it

shree gives an action of zipping his mouth

C: Bol kuch tou Bol shree

shree just gives him a nod in no direction
After a couple of minutes later they reach the club

S: chal Ab neechey utaar de .. warna mere liye larko k rishtey Aana shuru ho jaye ge

C: chal is bhahaney larko k rishtey tou aa hi jaye ge... kiun k mere bachelor Rehtey huey Larkian tujhe tou dekhti he nahi ...

S: Larkian mujhe nahi dekhti yah mein unhe ghaas nahi dalta

C: koi dekhey tou ghaas daley ga na tu

S: tu janta hai na chottu mujhe yeh Larkian kabhi samajh nahi aati isi liye mein in sab mein nahi parhta

Chottu to himself yaar aisay tou is ka kuch nahi ho sakta


C: acha chal Ab andar chaltey hai

On the way to the entrance , they are stopped by the guards(G)

G: pass please

shree and chottu looks at each other
C: ETF .. and shows his card ...investigation k liye aaye hai...

G: Lekin sir is waqt...

S: invetigation ka koi tym nahi hotaaur haan kisi ko bhi is barey mein nahi pata chalna chahiye ... k investigation ho rahe hai...

G: okay, sir

N they enter inside the club
shree to the waiter

S: two orange juices

W: sir 5 mins

the waiter went away to bring juices
Chottu sees some bottle on the table and picks a bottle
C: mere gala Sukh raha hai... mein tou pani he pee raha hn... juice ka kon wait karey..

without seeing what's inside the bottle he open s and drink it...

S: juice ka intezar Karne se behtar hai yehi pe ln

shree and chottu finishes all the bottles kept on the tableand soon gets over drunk... The club is almost empty...The manager(M) comes to them

M: sir , aik bajney wala hai humey club band Karna hai

S: haan haan , tou band kar do humney kab mana Kia hai

M: tou sir aap log ghr jaye ge tou hum band karey ge...

after the manger finishes his sentence he realise both are fast asleep... chottu's phones ring.. the manager picks his phone and read

M: rathore sir

n picks the phone
Ra: chottu mein wo thora kaam mein busy hogaya tha ... tum dono kaha ho mein parking lot mein khara hn

M: rathore sir, chottu aur unke aik friend yaha club mein over drunk ho kar unconscious ho Gaye hai

Ra: kya chottu aur shree ... club mein... over drunk... unconscious. ...
and sits in his car

Ra : acha app mujhe club ka address bataye ... mein abhi waha paunchta hn

Manager directs rathore to the club... and soon in a couple of minutes reach the club... Rathore went inside the club and see shree and chottu both lying unconscious
Rathore to manager

Ra: rathore here

M: mein hi tha jis se abhi aapki baat hui thi

Rathore moves chottu to the car and manager bring shree to the car...
Rathore then leaves shree and chottu to their houses and went to his house

NEXT DAY...
ETF office 9:00 am

Rathore is reading the case files... arjun is busy wid the evidences of the case... and riya is busy profiling ...

Ra: yeh chottu aur shree kaha hai...

Ri: sir mein call kar k check karti hn

Riya calls chottu... chottu wakes up..

C: hello riya... itni raat ko call kiya... sab kheriyat tou hain...

Ri: chottu time dekho it's 9:15am aur rathore sir tumhara aur shree ka wait kar rahe hai

C: kya ... aaj tou khair nahi... acha riya mein aur shree half an hour mein aatey ...pls rathore sir se bacha Lena
Ri: ok.. mein kuch karti hn tum log jaldi pauncho...

Riya den goes to rathore...

Ri: sir meri abhi chottu se baat hui hai wo dono rastey mein hain traffic bht jam hain.. thori dair mein paunch jaye ge

Ra: riya don't lie abhi wo ghr se bhi nahi nikley hongey

Ri: nahi sir wo rastey mein thay... bas paunchney waley hai

Ra: jaisey he paunchey tou conference room mein bhejna

Chottu calls shree ... den gets ready ... and both leaves for the office ... after 20 mins both reached the office parking lot...

S: yar mujhe tou kal club k baad ka kuch nahi yaad ...

C: Lekin hum ghr kaise aaye

S: kal Mene yeh dream dekha k rathore sir ne humey club se liya
chottu finishes his sentence

C: aur ghr chora

S: tujhe kaise pata

C: arey mein bhi tou tere dream mein tha

S: acha chal Ab upar chaltey hain... rathore sir bht gusey mein hongey hum bht late ho Gaye hai...

they both enter the office... riya quickly runs towards them

Ri: itna dair kahan laga de thi... meine rathore sir ko bola hai k tum dono traffic mein phas Gaye thay... tou tum dono yehi bolna ... aur haan rathore sir ne tum dono ko conference room mein bhejne ko kaha tha...

Arjun and Rathore are sitting in conference room...
Riya chottu and shree enters the conference room...
Rathore stands n goes toward chottu and shree

Ra: hamrai team mein do bht hi kabil n dedicated members hai ... jo yahan se janey k baaad bhi puri dedication k saath investigation kar rahe thay

n then looks toward shree and chottu'.

Ra: kiun shree aur chottu...

S: sir wo hum

Ra: jis club mein aap dono investigation Kartey Huey unconscious parhey thay... waha se mein he aap ko le kar gaya ... tou jhut bolney ki galti mat Kari ga..
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Shree and chottu both look at each other of *it wasn't a dream kal rathore sir Hamey le kar Gaye thay*

C: sir wo hum kal aapka parking lot mein wait kar rahe thay ... aur kafi dair ho Gaye aur aap nahi aaye

chottu luk towards shree, Shree continues his sentence

S: waisey he bht dair ho chuki thi phr aap nahi aaye tou hum khudhi ghr k liye nikal Gaye... rastey mein chaltey chaltey thak Gaye tou club mein rest ke liye bhaithay ... phr hum ne juice order kiya... kafi time guzra Lekin waiter juice nahi laya tou humne table par jo pani ki bottles parhi thi wo pee le ...

C: aur uske baad kuch yaad nahi

Ra: aap dono ne club mein jana tha tou jaatey lekin ETF aur investigation ka kisne kehne ko kaha tha...mujhe meri team mein aisa koi bhi member nahi chahi jo Apni responsibilities na samjhey... aap dono itney gair zimey daar kaisey ho saktey hai... aap normal insaan nahi hai aur na hi aapko galti Karne ki permission hai... kiun k aap ETF team k members hai... balke thay ... mein tum dono ka transfer karwata hn jb tk tum dono ko Apni responsibilities nahi samjh aati ... tum dono ETF mein nahi reh saktey...

S: sir please aisa na karey

C: sir hum promise Kartey hai k Ab se aisa kuch nahi ho ga

Ra: my words are final ... shree and chottu pack ur things... arju
n and riya aap dono apne kaam par lag jaye...

Everyone leaves... rathore is now alone in the conference room

Rathore POV
mein yeh kaisey kar sakta hoon... in dono ka transfer yeh 3 saal se mere saath hai ... ETF ka bht important hisa hai... we r nw as a family... magar in ko inki responsibilities bhi tou samjhani hai... tou is k liye I have to take dis step..
with a knock on the door ... all the imagination of rathore comes to the end

Ra: yes .. come in

Ri: sir first of all apne kaam ko continue Karne ko kaha magar mera dimagh abhi Sirf shree aur chottu k Barey mein he soch raha hai... sir unko yun transfer Karna thk nahi hoga

Ra: tumhe kya lagta hai mein bht khush hn unke transfer se... wo dono 3 saal se mere saath hai.. mein unhe apne chotay bhai ki tarha manta hn...ETF k liye unho n bht kuch kiya hai... Lekin unko unki zimey daariya samjhni hongi...

Ri: sir unko Apni galti ka ehsaas ho chuka .. mere khayaal se aap ko un dono ko aik chance dena chahiye.. n sir I guarantee you k Ab wo dono dubara galti nahi karey ge... baqi sir aapka decision

Ra: okay.. tum bahir chalo...mein apna final decision bahir aa kar Sunata hn

after 10 mins of wait ... rathore comes out...


Ra: shree ... chottu

both come towards him with tears in their eyes

S and C: je sir

Ra: mein tum dono ko akhiri chance de raha hn aur agar aagey se aisi galti hui tou apna transfer paka samjhna... aur Ab rona band karo

C: sir hum aagey aisi koi galti nahi karey ge bas aap transfer nahi karey... shree cuts his sentence

S: chottu sir transfer nahi kar rahe

C: transfer nahi kar rahe

Ra: haan Mene abhi yehi tou bola

C: thank you sir

and chottu gives rathore a hug

Ra: chottu control ur emotions
chottu leaving rathore

C: oh sorry sir...

Ra: and team back to work ... aaj ka adha din tou aisey he waste ho Gaya hai... i want everone in conference room in 15 mins 


Precap:
Progress in the case

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awsomeee!!!

choree sspl!!!!

update soon!!!
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Superb update dear..
shreetu too gud..!
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Awesome dear
loved reading it
thanks for pm
update soon