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Part – 14

 

Maan ko Geet pe barosa hi nahi….

Har waqt ussko shak karthe rehtha….

Jaise woh ye shadhi mein bhi problem karnewali ho……

Geet jaldi jaldi kahin jaa rahi hai…..

Maan comes in her way…..he stops her…

Maan: rukho….ye kya hai?

Geet: ye aapke liye nahi, Annie ke liye hai

Maan: mujhe patha hai

Geet: toh kyun rokh rahe ho?

Maan: pehle mujhe dikhao, ye kaise product hai?

Geet gets angry……

Geet: mujhe jaane do, Annie intrezaar kar rahi hogi

Annie ke mehendhi hai….Geet mehendhi lekhe jaa rahi hai….

Maan: sagaayi ki tarah yahan bhi tu apne badmaashi shuru karegi toh

Geet: toh kya?

Maan: teri itni himmat?

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke apne taraf keenchtha….

He warns her….his eyes are burning red….

Geet couldn't look into them…..itna gussa?

Maan: mere behen ko pareshaan mat karo, samji

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chodoonga toh

Geet: toh……

Geet  aur kuch nahi bol pathi….

Maneet eyelock….Mahi…..

Ye Maan Geet ko bahut disturb kartha hai….

Geet jitna bhi dhoor jaane ki koshish karhti utna hi kareeb aajaatha….

Apne bade bade aankon se gurke rehtha toh bechari ki jaan hi nikhaljaathi….

Geet bahut mushkll se wahan se bhaag jaathi…..

She tries to keep away from him….

 
Annie: Geet, kya baat hai? Tu itna pareshaan kyun ho? Ye teri shadhi nahi, meri shadhi hai, Tujhe itne tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi
 

Geet: haan haan, pehle tere shadhi ho jaane do, mere shadhi mein toh koi bhai ki tension nahi hogi

Annie: tere shadhi  mein toh mein kuch nahi karnewali, Arjun haina, woh sab sambalega, jaise aaj

Maan bhai sab sambhalte

Geet: Maan bhai?  kya bhai bhai karthi rehthi ho? Kal se koi bhai whai nahi

sirf pathi,  aaj se bhai out …pathi in, samji…..

Annie: aaise kaise, mein toh hamesha apne bhai ke pyaari Annie hi hoon

Arjun comes…….

Arjun: haan haan,toh ye m'am abhi bhi bhai nama hi kar rahi hai

Geet: Arjun tu hi samjao

Arjun: mein toh pehle hi nervous hoon, shadhi ke badh isske bhai ko kaise sambalein?

Geet: ye lo, issko apne pathni ki fikar nahi, lekhin usske bhai se dar hai

Arjun: mein kissi se nahi dartha

 
Annie: Maan bhai
 

Arjun suddenly stands up & looks ….

Arjun: kahan hai?

Geet:Arjun, tu aaise hi darte toh ye donno tumme ullu banadenge, sambalke

Annie: Geet tu kyun kamakaam Arjun ko pareshaan karthi?

Pinky: hare, Arjun tumme neeche bhula rahe hai

Arjun leaves……

Shadhi ke din…..

Geet shadhi ki kaam mein busy hai….

Yahan wahan goomthe rehthi….

She looks gorgeous….

Sab ke nazar toh Geet par hi hai….kaaskarke ladkhon ki….

Maan ne bhi notice ki, Geet toh aaj kuch zyada hi stunning lagthi….

Geet ladder pe chadke kuch decorations adjust kar rahi hai….

Her duppatta falls… Geet doesn't notice….

Par kuch ladkhon ke bhure nazar toh Geet pe hi padhi hai….

Maan sees them…

He immediately calls her….

Maan: Geet

Geet: aap? Ab kya hai?

Maan: pehle neeche uthro

Geet: nahi

Maan: meinne kaha neeche uthro

Maan ussko zabardasthi neeche keenchtha…

She falls….Maan catches her….

Maneet eyelock….mahi…………

Maan gets her duppatta & covers her….

Geet keeps looking at him……

She has lost her senses….ab Maan ki magic kaam kar raha hai….

Geet:thanks

Par Maan toh tabhi chala gaya……

 

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Part - 15

 

Geet ke aankhen Maan ko hi doondhte rehte…..

This is new to her….

She usually doesn't like to see him…..

His eyes are always filled with hatred or anger…..

Maybe there is another side of him behind that scary image…..

Geet could see that today, as a loving brother….

Kaise shadhi ke ek ek baat pe dyaan detha?

Annie kehthi hai ki usskkee sare kapde bhi wahi lakhe detha…..

How much he cares for his sister?….

Geet misses a support like him….

Someone to set you right when you go wrong …….

That someone who is always behind your shoulders looking at everystep you take….

That someone who holds your hand & takes  you in the right path…..

Just like Maan behind Annie……

How lucky Annie is?

Annie ki shadhi ho jaathi…..

Ek hafte Arjun KM mein rehtha….

Phir woh apne ghar jaana chahatha…

He tells Annie about this….

Annie Maan se baat karthi….

Maan is not ready to send Annie……..

Maan: Annie, ye kaise baat hai?

Annie: bhai Arjun kitne din yahan rukhega?

Maan: kyun? Kya problem hai?

Geet bhi aajaathi……

Geet: toh MSK shuru ho gaye?

Annie: hare Geet, aao

Maan is not happy….

Ye ab kahan se aayi……shayad ye sab isska hi kaam hoga?
 

Geet: Annie, mein neeche wait karthi hoon

Arjun: Geet, tum rukh jao

Annie: haan Geet

 
Maan: toh Arjun tumme yahan kya problem hai? Mujhe bathao mein sab teek kartha hoon
 

Arjun: mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Maan: phir tum yahan hummare saath kyun nahi rukh sahkte?

Arjun: aap samajte nahi ki mein kya kehna chahatha

Maan: mujhe bhi samaj mein nahi aatha aakhir problem kya hai?

Arjun: ye mera ghar nahi haina?

Maan: toh kya hua? Ye Annie ka ghar haina?

Geet: nahi, Annie ka ghar toh ab Arjun ka ghar hi hai

Maan: tum beech mein mat bolo

Arjun: kyun? Geet ne toh sahi kaha

Maan: kya ? isse kya patha mere Annie ke barein mein?

Geet: mujhe patha hai ki Annie bhi yahan rehna nahi chahathi

Maan: meinne kaha tum chup raho, samji

Annie: lekhin bhai

Maan: Annie tu innkke baton ko mat suno

Geet: Annie ko bolne do, annie tu kahan rehna chahathi

Maan: tumme kya lagtha? Annie uss chote se ghar mein kush rahegi? bolo Annie

Geet: aapko kya lagtha? Annie apne pathi ko aaise ghar jamaai bante hue dekhna chahegi?

Maan: Geeet, meinne kaha tum hummare family matters mein interfere mat karo, ek bar kehne se baat samajmein nahi aatha?

 
Geet leaves…..
 

Arjun: Geet rukho, mein bhi aatha hoon

Arjun bhi chale jaatha…..

Maan is very angry…. Ye ladhki bhi na? har bar galat waqt pe guss jaathi….

Annie: bhai, Geet sahi keh rahi hai

Dadi also comes…..

Maan: Annie, yahan tum logon ko koi pareshaani nahi hoga

Annie: bhai,  aap samajte kyun nahi?

Dadi: Maan bte, Annie ko jaane dijiye, woh hummare paas hi haina, aap jab chaho ussko jaake mil sakhte hai

Annie goes to Arjun's housse…..

Geet helps her settle down….

Geet bahut kush hai….

Aaj se Annie bhi yahi rahegi….

But Maan is not at all happy….

Ye sab toh uss Geet ki wajhe se hi ho raha hai…

Warna Maan toh Arjun ko aasaani se KM mein saath rehne ke liye raazi kartha….

At the apartments…..

Everyone is happy to have Annie there….

Sab saath mein padthe hai…..

Saath mein masthi bhi karthe hai….

For a change Annie sab ke saath bus mein college jaathi…

Arjun offers to drop her…but Annie is happy to go with her friends….

Maan kabhi kabhi Annie ko college se KM lekhe jaatha toh Geet hi Arjun ko samjaathi….

Arjun bhi sab samajtha…..

A few months later…..

Annie is pregnant…..

Final exams are approaching….

Maan takes her to KM….he takes good care of her….

Arjun too goes & stays there…..

Now she needs her family…

Arjun ka koi family nahi haina?

After the exams Geet Hoshiarpur chale jaathi….

Meera's family shift to Chennai…..Meera bhi Chennai chale jaathi…..

Geet  Hoshiarpur mein zyada din rukhna nahi chahathi…..

warna Ranno Geet ko aage padne nahi degi..

Geet  MBA  karna chahathi….Maninder Geet ko support karthe hai…..

Ranno is trying hard to find a match for Geet……

Geet wapas chalthi toh aur 2 saal rukhna padega……

Ek ladkha bhi Geet ko dekhne aatha……

Geet ussko damki dekhe bagaathi….

Ranno Geet ko daadthi…….aaise hi chalega toh Geet ki shadhi kaise hogi?

Ranno bahut pareshaan hai….

Geet keeps in touch with Annie & Arjun……

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