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part 11
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chalo big bro has come to know about Arjun...
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Part 12

After a few days'.

Annie comes out of her shell'..

She is dull & quiet'.

She doesn't go to college'.

Geet is worried'.

Iss Annie ko kya hua? Woh phone kyun nahi uttahthi?

Kahin usskke akdu bhai ne ussko Mumbai ke bahar nahi bhejdhi?

Usska koi barosa nahi, woh MSK haina?

Kuch bhi karega'.lekhin kuch bhi karne se pehle doosron ke barein mein sochtha hi nahi '..

Geet  keeps on calling Annie'..

Geet toh kal KM jaake check karnewali hai'..

At KM'.

Annie ka phone ussdin garden mein ghir gayi '.

Annie kissi se baat nahi kar rahi hai '.ussne Arjun ko bhi call nahi ki'.

Ye baat Geet ko aur pareshaan karthi'.

Mali se Nakul phone lekhe aatha'.

Nakul: Maan sir, phone

Maan: jisska phone hai?

Nakul:  laghta hai Annie m'am ka hai

Maan gets it '.

He calls Annie to give the phone'.

Maan: Annie'.

Someone calls'

Maan looks'it's Geet'

Ye kyun call karegi? Phir se kuch ulta toh nahi karnewali?

Maan answers the call''

Maan: tum?

Geet: aap? Toh aapne Annie ka phone bhi cheenli? Ussko house arrest karke aapne teek nahi ki

Maan: stupid ladhki, kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?

Geet: mein teek keh rahi hoon, Annie abhi major hai, aap aaise nahi kar sakthe, mein police ko lekhe aathi

Maan: tum kissiko bhi lekhe aao, mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki KM ke andar kaise aathi?

Geet: hummare Hoshiarpur mein bhi log civilized ho gaye hai
 
Maan: kya?
 
Geet: aapne ussko kuch khilaya  pilaya bhi ya nahi? Lagtha hai mujhe pehle ek doctor ko lekhe aana chahiye, Annie teek toh haina?
 

Maan: tum ek kaam karo saath mein ek lawyer ko bhi lekhe aaao, case file karna haina?

Geet: haan ye bhi teek hai

Maan: tumme kissne bahar rehne dhi? Tumme toh pagalkhane mein bandh karna chahiye

Geet: kya? Mein pagal hoon?

Maan: haan, tum jaise katarnaak  logon ko bahar goomne nahi dena chahiye, pehle tumme house arrest karna padega, samji?

Annie comes'

Annie: bhai, mera phone aapko kaise mila? Aur aap kisse baat kar rahe hai?

Maan: woh teri pagal dhost , Annie tum isse dhoor hi raho, warna tumme bhi pagal banadeghi, sach mein ye ladhki toh mujhe aada pagal banadhi

Annie: Geet?

Annie snatches the phone'..

Geet: Annie tu teek toh haina?

Annie: Geet mein teek hoon, Arjun kaisa hai?

Geet:  woh  bahut upset hai, do din se no khana aur no batein

Annie: kya? Ab kya kar raha hai?

Geet: kabrao mat, meinne ussko samjadhi ki agar uss MSK ke saath ladna hai toh pehle se zyada khalo aur body shody banao, warna Annie ko bhool jao

Annie: kya?

Geet: haan, ab Arjun ko gym bhi join karna padega

Annie bursts out laughing'..

Annie: Geet ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Maan is happy to see his sister return to normal'.

He leaves''

Geet Arjun ko phone dethi'.

Annie talks with him'.

He assures to set everything right as soon as possible'.

Next day''..

Maan finds Arjun's letter'.

Annie must have lost it that day'.

The letter goes''.

Annie,

                Congrats. Aaj tummari sagaayi hai, mein bas tumse maafi maangna chahatha hoon.I am really sorry Annie. I shouldn't have left like that. Par mein kya karoon? Tummare Maan bhai ke batein sunke mujhe nahi laga ki mein tummare layak hoon, aur mujhe himmat bhi nahi thi tummare bhai se tummare haath maangne ki. Issiliye mein Bangalore chala gaya. Mujhe nahi patha ki tummare gharwalein tummare shadhi itne jaldhi fix karenge.ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardho.  ' Arjun

Maan is impressed by this letter'.

Maan sochtha'.toh ye sagaayi thodne ka plan Ms.Attitude ka hi tha''

Maan goes to see Annie'..

Annie apne kamre mein hi hai'.

Maan: Annie

Annie: bhai

Maan holds her hand & takes her down..

Annie is scared'

Annie: bhai, mujhe kahan le chalte hai aap?

Dadi: Maan bte, kya hua?

Maan: kuch nahi Dadi, hum abhi aathe hai

Annie: par bhai hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: tujhe apne bhai pe barosa haina?

Annie: haan bhai

Maan: toh koi sawaal nahi, bas chalo mere saath

Maan takes her to Arjun'.

Ab Maan ke liye Arjun hero bangaya aur bechari Geet vamp bangayi

Arjun is surprised to see Annie'.

Arjun: Annie, tum teek toh haina?

Annie looks at Maan woh is standing behind'..

Arjun has not noticed him'..

Arjun: aap? Andar aayiye

Maan comes in'..

Annie & Arjun couldn't believe their eyes'.

Ye Maan hi haina?

Donno Maan ko hi dekhte kade hai'.

Maan: Annie, tummara choice hi hummara choice hai

Annie: bhai?

Maan: haan Annie, Arjun bahut achche insaan hai, he is perfect for you

Annie: thanks bhai

Annie goes & hugs him'.

Arjun keeps looking at her'..

Maan: Annie tum baat karke aao, mein chaltha hoon

Maan has barely turned Annie goes & hugs Arjun'.

Maan turns back''

Arjun steps back'.

Maan : woh Annie mein driver ko bhejtha hoon

Arjun: mein Annie ko drop kartha hoon

Maan smiles & leaves'..

As soon as maan leaves Annie goes & tells the story to Geet '.

Geet is very happy'.

Finally Maan bhi Maangaya?...

Sab kush hai'.

Geet: congrats Annie, aakhir tummare Maan bhai kaise maangaye

Annie: mujhe bhi patha nahi

Geet: chalo, zindagi mein pehle bar tere bhai ne apne dimag ki isstimaal ki

Annie: Geeet

Geet: shayad Dadi ne unnko samjaya, warna ab tak woh thandav karte rehte, Dust Danav

Annie: Pinky ye Meera kahan hai? Mein issko akhele nahi sambal sakthi

Just then Meera comes'.

Meera: lagtha hai mere baat ho rahi hai

Pinky: Meera Annie ke bhai ne Arjun ko accept karli

Meera: mujhe pehle hi patha hai, woh bahut achchehai

Geet: ab ye bhi aagayi toh Arjun chalo humme yahan koi kaam nahi hai

Arjun: haan Geet chalo hum apne ghar chalte hai

Annie: Arjun, tum bhi?

Geet: haan, woh hamesha sach ka saath hi detha, haina?

Arjun: you are right Geet

Annie: Meera tum toh mere saath haina?

Meera: ofcourse? Kal hummari dosthi rishta ban sakthi haina? mein toh hamesha tere saath hi hoon

Pinky: toh Annie aaj teri treat hai, haina?

Annie: done

They go out for dinner'..



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Part – 13

 

After dinner Adi takes Geet & Pinky back….

Arjun goes to drop Annie……

Maan sees them from his room….

He calls Annie….

Maan: halo, Annie

Annie: bhai,m ein ghar ke bahar hi hoon, abhi aathi

Maan: mein tumme dekh raha hoon

Annie looks at Maan…..

Annie: bhai , kya baat hai?

Maan: Annie Arjun ko andar nahi bhulaogi?

Annie: ohh……..mein toh bhool hi gay

Annie takes Arjun in….

Maan comes down…..

Dadi is puzzled to see Annie coming with a stranger…..

Maan: Dadi, ye Arjun hai, Annie issi se pyaar kathi

Annie sharmathi…..

Dadi: beitiye Arjun bte

Arjun Dadi ka aashirwaad letha…..

Dadi is happy……

After a while Arjun leaves…..

Dadi bahut din ke badh Annie ko itna kush dekhrahi hai……

Anie : Good night Dadi, gud night Maan bhai

Annie leaves……

Dadi: Maan bte ye Arjun?

Maan tells her the wohle story…..

Dadi: lekhin Maan bte hummne socha ki agar Annie ek bade pariwaar mein shadhi karke jaathe toh kabhi akhela mehsoos nahi karenge
 

Maan: par Dadi tanhaayi ki takleef Arjun se behther kaun jaan saktha?  woh kabhi Annie ko akhele nahi chodega

Dadi: lekhin Annie ka achanak sagaayi se bhagna?

Maan: Dadi, Arjun bahut achcha ladkha hai, ye sare tamasha ke wajhe toh koi aur hai

Maan thinks of Geet….his eyes burn with anger…..

Dadi: aap ko kya lagtha? Arjun hi Annie ke liye sahi hai?

Maan: haan Dadi, meinne Arjun ke barein mein sab kuch jaanli, he is the best choice for Annie

Dadi: Maan, sagaayi tootne ke badh log hummare Annie ke barein mein kya kya kehte hai?

Maan: Dadi, aap logon ki chintha kyun karte hai?

Dadi: aaise baat nahi hai bte, aaj hummare samne kehnewale kal Annie ke samne kuch kehte toh

Maan: kisski himmat hai? Msk ke behen ko shir uttkke dhekne ki?

Dadi: Maan bte, aap har waqt Annie ke saath nahi honge

Maan: Dadi, aap kehne kya chahate hai?

Dadi: agar Annie ko Arjun hi pasand hai toh undonno ke shadhi karwate hai

Maan: par dadi, Annie ke studies?

Dadi: Arjun koi anjaana nahi haina? Annie shadhi ke badh pad sakthi

Maan: teek hai Dadi, mein Arjun se baat kartha hoon………

Arjiun is happy but he has A couple of months work in Bangalore, after which they can get married…..

Annie shadhi ko lekhe thoda dar jaathi….

Abhi shadhi karegi toh sab kya sochenge…

Par Geet ussko samjaathi…yahi achcha moka hai warna DD ka koi barosa nahi ……..

kab kya karega? Woh toh kudh Maan ko  hi patha nahi…….Haina?

Arjun is very upset leaving Annie alone  & getting back to Bangalore….

Annie ke paas usska bhai haina? Toh Arjun thoda relax ho jaatha……he leaves…..

Geet Annie ki madat karthi……

She goes out shoping with Annie…..

Kabhi kabhi Maan bhi saath mein aatha…..

Geet aur Maan ki toh banthi hi nahi…..

Ek north pole hai toh doosra south pole, haina?

Annie ko jewels choose karne meinn thoda confusion hai….

Maan likes one, Geet likes other…..

Finally Annie gets what she wants…..

Annie paaswali boutique mein kuch kareedhna chahathi…..

Annie: Geet, tum bhi aao

Geet: nahi Annie tum jao, mujhe kuch dekhna hai

Annie leaves…..

Geet Annie ke liye ek pendant  doondh rahi hai…..

Maan bhi kuch doondh raha hai….

Both like the same piece…..

Maan bhi Annie ke liye hi khareedhna chahatha….

Geet pehle lethi…

Maan insists that it is he who had chosen it first…

Donno ladthe hai…

Maan ko lagtha Geet apne liye lena chahathi….

Finally Geet hi jeet jaathi….

She asks the salesman to gift wrap it…..

Annie comes…..

Annie: Hare Geet, bhai kahan hai?

Maan had left….he has gone to the car…..

Geet: mujhe kya patha? Tere bhai haina? Tu hi doondo

Annie calls Maan……Maan says that he is waiting out….

Geet gives the pendant to Annie…..

Geet: ye lo

Annie: mere liye hai

Geet:haan, open karke dekho

Annie ko woh bahut pasand hai…..woh bahut din se aaisa hi pendant lena chahathi thi….

Usne kissi magazine mein dekha tha…

Geet ye jaanthi thi….Maan bhi itne din wahi pendant doondh raha tha….

Annie wears it & shows it to Maan….

Ammie: bhai, ye dekho

Maan looks at it….toh ye Annie ke liye hi tha….

Annie: ye pendant yaad hai bhai ? dekho Geet  mere liye lekhe aayi hai

Kya bhai, MSK ko itni choti si pendant nahi mila?

Geet bahut kush hai…..

Maan stares her…..

Geet: kya dekh rahe ho? Annie ke sawal ko jawab do

Maan: Annie, kal se tum iss extra baggage ko chodke aao

Geet: kya?

Annie:  Geet tum tension mat lo, bhai toh aaise hi hai

Geet: Annie tu chal , mein taxi se chale jaathi

Annie: hare Geet, tu akhele kaise jayegi? Rukho, mein bhi aathi hoon

Maan: Annie, tu kahan jaa rahi ho?

Annie: bhai aap chalo, hum badh mein aathe hai

Maan: Annie…

Annie toh Geet ke peeche hi chale jaathi…..

Maan ko lagtha ki Geet Annie ke dosthi ke faida utta rahi hai…..

Annie kyun Geet se itne darthi?

Ye ladki samajthi kya apne appko?  ………..

Mujhe hi kuch karna padega….Annie bahut innocent hai….

Pehle shadhi ho jaane do….Annie ko apne saath apne ghar pe hi rakhenge….

Ye Arjun ka bhi koi nahi hai, toh pehle Arjun ko uss  Gundi ladki se dhoor lekhe aana padega

Warna ye Annie ko hamesha aaise hi tang karegi……

Geet And Maan Outside the Office

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