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Part – 7

 

Next week…..

Annie college nahi aathi…..

Geet calls her…..

Geet: halo Annie

Annie: haan Geet

Geet: tu aaj college kyun nahi aayi? Teri tabyat toh teek haina?

Annie: haan, mein teek hoon

Geet: lekhin tere aawaaz sunke aaisa nahi lagtha, kya baat hai?

Annie: Geet mein kal aakke sab bathathi hoon,ab mujhe jaana hai,bye

Geet: ye Annie ko kya ho gaya? Kal tak toh Maan bhai Maan bhai karthi rehthi…..

Hare babaji! Ye kya?  Usski aadat ab mujhe lag gayi? Nahi nahi….

Next day……

Annie comes…. She looks dull……

Geet tries to cheer her up….

Geet: toh Annie, kal tummare Maan bhai ne kya kya kamala ki? Kal hum DD ke kahaani

 ko bahut miss karte the, haina Pinky?

Pinky: DD?

Geet: hare Dusht Danav….

Meera: nahi nahi …dhak dhak…unnke paas aathe hi dil kaisa dhak dhak karne kagtha?

Still no response from Annie…..

Geet: ye toh abhi bhi chup hai, lagtha hai koi serious problem hai

Pinky: Annie, kya baat hai?

Geet: Annie, humme bhi nahi bathaoge?

Annie: koi baat nahi

Geet: ab tu mujhe bathaoge ya mein Mr.Maan singh Khurana ko phone lagaoon?

Annie: Geet, tum aaise kuch nahi karogi

Meera:  toh mein call karthi hoon, mujhe toh number bhi maloom hai

Geet: Meera, tu thode dher chup raho, Annoe toh tu hi bathao, kya hua?

Annie: woh next week meri sagaayi hai, Vicky ke saath

Meera: toh agla toh teri shadhi hogi, ktine achche baat hiana?

Pinky: wow! Congrats Annie

Geet: Vicky? Khanna uncle ka beta?

Annie: wahi mera bachpan ka dhost

Geet: aur tumne bhi haan kardhi?

Annie: haan

Geet: Annie, kya tumme ye shadhi se kush ho?

Pinky: ye kaise sawal hai? Vicky toh Annie ki best friend, haina?

Geet: Pinky…………….Annie tu jawab di

Annie: mujhe patha nahi

Geet: ye kaise jawab hai?

Annie: Gee tab tu apni investigation ko band karo, mein pehle hi pareshaan hoon

Geet: woh toh mujhe patha hai, issiliye pooch rahi hoon

Annie: Gee tab mere paas tummare sawaloon ka jawab nahi hai

Geet: toh teek hai, ye teri life hai tu hi sambalo

Geet wahan se chale jaathi…..

Annie ka patha nahi, lekhin Geet iss shadhi se kush nahi hai…..

Pinky: hare Geet, tujhe kya ho gaya?

Geet: Pinky, mujhe lagtha hai ki Annie ye shadhi apne marzi se nahi kar rahi hai

Pinky: par Geet, hum kya kar sakte hai?

Geet: kaise bhai hai? Apne behen ki pasand napasand ko nahi jaanthe, Mr.Maan Singh Khurana

 Ka patha nahi lekhin mein apni Annie ki zindagi barbad hone nahi doongi

Pinky: toh tu kya karogi?

Geet: Pinky jaldi Adi ko bulao…..

Geet ke paas ek plan hai…….

Adi comes…..

Geet asks him to call Maan…..

They go to a public booth…..

Adi toh Maan ko Geet ke b'day mein dekha tha…..

Maan ka gussewale aakhen abhi bhi ussko yaad hai….

Adi  gabragaya…..

Geet: hare Adi, jaldi karo

Adi: Geet are you sure, mujhe hi baat karna padega?

Geet: haan

Adi calls…….

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana speaking

Adi ka aawaaz hi nahi nikaltha…..

Adi: halo

Maan: yes, woh is this?

Adi: halo

Maan gets angry……..

Maan: kya halo halo karthe ho? Aage bolo

Adi: halo

Maan phone kaattha……

Now Geet has no other choice than to call herself……

Geet: Mr. Maan

Maan: ye kaise mazak hai, ab voce change karke baat kar rahe ho, tum wahi haina?

Geet: aapko mere chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, pehle aapki behen ki chintha karo

Maan: tum….tum……tum Annie ko kaise jaanthi

Geet: aap pehle aapki behen ki mann ki baat jaanlo

Maan: hako, kaun hai tu?

Geet: Annie ko shadhi nahi karni

Maan: tumme kaise patha?

Geet: pehle aap ye baat ko jaanlo

Geet  phone rakhthi

Maan: halo….halo….phone kaatdhi?  Usski ye himmat?

Maan bahut naraaz ho jaatha….

Par Geet ka kaam ho gaya….

Maan Annie ki shadhi ke barein mein sochne kaga….

Annie bhi do din se utna kush nahi lagthi….

Kya problem hogi?

Maan tries to speak to Annie…

Lekhin Annie says that it's just the marriage tension & nothing else…..

Maan phir bhi kush nahi hai…koi toh baat hai……

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part 7
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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
nice updt...straightfrwrd geet...continue soon...

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nice story:)

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 4:15am | IP Logged
part 7
awesome...
why is she not happy?
cont soon dear...

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Part ' 8

 

That evening'..

Maan is not at all happy with all the happenings'.

Par Annie ko hi koi problem nahi hai toh ye kaun hai jo iss shadhi se itna pareshaan hai'.

Hogi koi jealous ladki'haina?...

Maan tries to forget all that'.but he is still worried about Annie'.

Do din pehle hi Khanaa uncle ye rishtey lekhe aaye the'.

Dadi toh bahut hi kush hai'.

Annie ko Vicky se achcha saathi nahi millega'

Ye toh Maan ko bhi patha hai'.aur ye donno bachpan se ek dooosre ko jaanthe hai'

Jaise Annie Maan ki pet hai waise hi Vicky ka bhi pet hai'..

Vicky Annie ko bahut chahatha hai'.

Lekhin patha nahi Maan ko kyun aaisa laghtha ki Annie apne pure dil se ye shadhi

Ke liye haan nahi kaha hai'.

Dadi convinces Maan that Annie is worried about her studies'

But mr.Khanna abhi sagaayi hi karna chahathe hai'shadhi toh Annie ki marzi ke hi hogi'.

Woh chahe toh 5 saal badh bhi shadhi kar sakthi'.

Koi kush ho ya na ho Dadi toh bahut kush hai'.

Annie bin maa ki bachchi hai..

Aaj tak Maan ne ussko apne maabaap ki kammi kabhi mehsoos nahi hone dhi'

Vicky bhi aaisa hikarega'..ye Khannas ko Dadi 30 saal se jaanthi hai'.

Apna hi parivaar ki tarah hai woh'.

Dadi Annie ke shadhi ko lekhe hamesha pareshaan thi'.

Maan toh mard hai'lekhin Annie ko apne sukduk ko batne ke liye maa ki zaroorat haina?

Ab ye Mr&Mrs.Khanna  toh Annie ko bachpan se jaanthe hai'..

Aur usskke maa baap ke barein mein bhi jaathe hai'.

Woh toh hamesha Annie ko apna beti hi samjte hai'.

That's why Dadi wants to fix this marriage as soon as possible'..

At KM'..

Sagaayi ki tayaari zor se ho rahi hai''

Maan is also busy'..

Pinky & Meera come & meet Annie'.

Par Geet nahi aathi'.

Maan Annie se poochtha hai ki ye kaise dhost hai jo aaj bhi tujhe milne nahi aayi?...

Par tut oh usske janam din kitna tension ho gayi ki usski party mein jaane kid her ho gayi'..

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan in angry mood
Geet toh Mumbai mein hi nahi hai'.

Woh kahin bahar gayi hai'.ek zaroori kaam se''..

Sagaayi ke din'.

Annie tayyar ho rahi hai'..

Pinky is with her'.

Meera toh neeche hi hai''she is stalking Maan'.

Lekhin aaj bhi Geet nahi aayi'.

Annie bahut gusse mein hai'.

Annie: Pinky, ye Geet ab tak kyun nahi aayi?

Pinky: Annie, woh bas abhi aathi hogi

Annie: tu usse support mat kar

Pinky: Annie, Geet teri sagaayi ko kaise miss karegi?

Annie: aane do usse, mein usse koi baat nahi karnewali hoon

Geet ka phone'..

Pinky: Geet, tu aagayi?

Geet: Pinky, Annie ko phone do

Pinky: Annie, Geet ka phone hai

Annie: mein usse baat nahi karna chahathi

Pinky: Geet

Geet: haan haan meinne sunli, tu ab exactly kahan ho?

Pinky: mein Annie ke kamre mein hoon

Geet: Annie tayyar ho gayi hai kya?

Pinky: haan , bas thoda final touches bakhi hai

Geet: tu ek kaam kar, jab tak mein nahi aathi tu Annie ko bahar mat jaane do, samji

Pinky: Geet, pagal ho gayi kya?

Geet: Pinky mein mazak nahi kar rahi hoon, ye maamla bahut serious hai

Pinky: Geet'.Geet'..

Geets cuts the phone'..

Drashti Dhami as Geet in Geet hui Sabse parayi


Edited by ghsp2fan - 04 December 2012 at 8:19pm

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
me first ... atlast i managed to be the first one to comment...
looks like geet was out fr sumthing related to the engagement only...maan nquiring abt geet...continue soon...


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