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                                                       Part -  79

 

Years pass by…..Geet gives birth to another angel Sweta…..
 
Neha is growing into a beautiful girl…..
 

She is so popular at school and everywhere she goes…..

Maneet are proud parents now…..

Neha is going to be 12 next month…..
 

Maan has decide that it's time for her to know about her parents….

Geet is still not ready for this….she feels Neha is too young …..

But Maan thinks it's better for them to tell her before she herself asks them…

By this time she might have come across  a few incidents when someone or the other looked at her with pity and enquired about her anxiously and Maneet have managed to protect her till date…..

This might not be possible now as she is big enough to question Maneet about such people and their odd behavior……or maybe someone might directly ask her about her loss ….

You know not all the people are same and also it's not possible for Maneet to keep them away….

These people come from nowhere and start their drama before one could realise  whats up….

 Maan ke paas ek plan hai……

Neha comes home …..

Geet: Maan, Neha aagayi

Maneet take an album and start chatting about it….

Neha comes and still they keep hooked to the album….

Neha gets curious and she also comes and takes a look…..

Maan: Geet, ye dekho, ye Annie ki  10th b'day hai, ye dekho Dadima, aur ye kaun hai? tumne pehechana?

Geet: ye toh aap ho? Maan tab toh aap bahut alag dikhthe ho

Geet laughs……

Maan: Geet, kyun hasthi ho? tummare bachpan ke photos nahi dekhi? Bandar ki tarah pedh mein chadthi thi, haona?

Geet: mein Bandar hoon ?

Neha comes closer……

Maan : toh Geet, tumme yaad hai, ye tummare b'day ki pictures hai

Geet: haan, Annie itna  pareshaan kyun dikhthi? Haan, Mr.MSK saath mein the, issiliye

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapko yaad nahi, aap kaise gusse karkke wahan se nikhal gaye the?

Neha: papa aap kya dekh rahe ho?

Geet: Neha, aap aagaye?

Geet  ussko bhi apne paas bitathi…

Maan: ye dekho, ye Annie hai, meri behen

Neha: aapki behen?

Maan: jaise Sneha aur Sweta tummari behen haina? Waise ye meri behen hai

Geet: Maan, teek se bathao

Maan: haan, ye dekho ye usski  bachpan ki photo

Maan starts showing Annie's photos from her childhood…..

Maan: ye dekho Geet ke saath

Geet: Annie meri best friend hai

Geet shows their colloge photos…..

Then she shows Annie's wedding album….

Neha: ye kaun hai?

Geet: ye Arjun hai, Annie Arjun se pyaar karthi thi, lekhin jab MSK ko ye baat patha chala woh DD bangaye

Neha: haa! Dust Danav? Phir kya hua?

Geet: phir meinne iss Dust se ladkke Annie ki shadhi karwayi

Maan: tumne Annie ki shadhi karwaya tha?

Geet: haan, warna bechari Annie kya karthi?

Maan: Geet, ye joot hai

Geet: kya? Toh Annioe ki shadhi kaise hui thi?

Maan: woh  shadhi toh meinne karwaya tha

Geet: babaji, aap jaanthe haina, kya hua tha?

Neha: maa, mujhe bathao, kya hua?

Geet tells how she helped Annie to run away from the wedding that Maan arranged for her…..

 
Neha: ye toh  bahut filmy hai…..

Maan: Geet apna drama band karo

Geet: ye toh sach hai, haina babaji?

Maan: teek hai, aage ki kahaani sunao, Neha intrezaar kar rahi hai

Geet tells about Annie's wedding with Arjun……

Neha: issme mein nahi hoon?

Maan: tab toh tum thi hi nahi

Geet: haan

Neha: lekhin aapke wedding album mein mera photo haina?

Geet: haan, tab toh tum bahut choti thi

Maan: Geet, woh album dikhao

Geet takes Neha's 1st b'day album….

Maan: isse dekho, issme tum ho, ye tummari pehla b;day hai

Neha looks at it…..

Ussko kuch kuch patha chaltha……

Neha: mein inkke saath?

Maan: haan, ye tummare parents hai

Geet: Maan?

Maan: Annie tummari maa hai aur Arjun tummara papa hai

Neha is confused……

Maan continues……

Maan: tummmare b'day ke badh unka accident ho gaya aur

Maan stops……

Neha keeps staring at Annie Arjun's photo……

Geet: Neha

Neha: aur?

Maan: aur uss accident mein donno mar gaye

Neha keeps on looking at them for a while…..

Maan ussko sohcne detha…..he doesn't say anything more….

Geet tries to say something….Maan stops her……

Neha takes the album and goes to her room….

Geet : Neha  , Neha

Maan: Geet, ussko thode dher akhele chodtho

Geet: ye aapne kya kardhi? Aap itni choti bachi ko akhele chodenge? Aapka dimag toh karab  nahi hogaya?

Maan: Geet, rukho

Geet follows Neha…..
 
Geet: Neha, tum teek toh hona?
 

Neha: haan

Geet: ye Maan bhi na, sabko unkke tarah hi samajthe, sab Sher Singh Khurana nahi hothe, hiana?

Maan: tum  aaise nahi hogi, lekhin meri beti meri tarah sherni hai, samji, haina Neha

Neha: haan

Maan: Neha, ab tum badi ho gayi ho, tumme ye sab jaane ki haq hai

Geet: aap bachi se kaise batein karthe ho?

Maan: Geet, ab Neha bachi nahi hai

Geet: Maan, ye toh hamesha meri bachi hi hai

Maan: Neha, this is just a fact jo tumme aaj patha chala hai, aur kuch nahi, hamesha ki tarah tum hi humaari pehli beti ho, aur meri princess

Geet: kya zaroorat thi ye sab bathane ki? Ab kehthe raho Neha meri princess hai

Maan: Geet, mein tumse nahi Neha se baat kar raha hoon, samji

Neha: papa

Neha goes and hugs him……

Geet is stunned…….

Ye toh sach mein papa ki beti hi hai……

Mein yahan itne pareshaan ho rahi hoon aur issko sirf apne papa ki padi…..

Neha: tum bhi aao Geet

Geet : kya? Ab mein Geet ho gayi hoon?

Neha: mama, aap toh hamesha meri pyaari Geet hi ho, haina papa?

Maan: haan

Geet too joins them, family hug……

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Posted: 13 March 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged
part 78
awesome...
Neha is growing fast...
and really the parents too along with the kids have to done the school works...
but Maan and Geet scenes were nice...

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Posted: 13 March 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
part 79
awesome...
beautiful...
Maan has told the truth to Neha but its good...
she will be close to Maan and Geet all the more...
the last scene was so lovely...
cont soon dear...

PS - nice pix...

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                                             Part ' 80

 

Jab se Neha ko sachaayi patha chala hai Geet bahut pareshaan hi rehthi'.

She keeps a close watch on Neha'.

She is afraid Neha might start missing her parents'..

Maan tells her that she won't as she had always known Maneet as her parents'.

Geet is not convinced''

Neha thoda chup chup se ho gayi''

Pehle ki tarah shararat nahi karthi'.

Sneha ke saath ladthi nahi'..

Upar se Geet ki har baat manthi hai'.

Ye toh kabhi nahi hotha''

Geet ko ye bilkul pasand nahi hai'..

Ye sab Maan ke wajhe se hi hua hai'..

Bade aaye sach ke saath denewale'.ab inkke sachaayi ne Neha ke kya haal banadhi'

Ye toh bahut achche bankke sare sach ko bathakke 24*7  KC chale jaathe'..

Ghar pe rehthe toh Neha ki badlaav nazar aatha'.

Aaj toh Maan se baat karna hi padega'.

Aaj bhi Maan late hi aatha'..

Geet: Maan

Maan: tum soyi nahi?

Geet: kaaise sothi? Aap ne toh itna bada pareshaani kada kardhi?

Maan: kya pareshaani?

Geet: kya? Aap kuch nahi jaanthe?

Maan: pehle bathao, kya baat hai?

Geet: aapne Neha ko notice nahi ki?

Maan: kyun? Usska kya problem hai?

Geet: kamakaam itna problems create karkke poochthe ho ki kya problem hai?

Maan: Geet, seedhe seedhe bolo

Geet: jab se aapne Neha ko sachaayi bathayi Neha bahut badal gayi, pehle jaise nahi rahi, bahut chup chup se ho gayi
 

Maan: aaise koi baat nahi hai Geet, haan, thoda asar toh hotha hi hai, lekhin abhi bhi tum usse do saal ki bachi samjthi ho, hummari Neha ab badi hogayi hai, muture ho gayi hai, apne responsibilities ko samjthi hai, that's all

Geet:kuch bhi ho, mera mann bahut gabratha hai

Maan: agar aaisa kuch hotha bhi Neha bahut jaldh apne aako sambalegi, tum ikar mat karo
 

Geet: aapse baat karkke koi faida nahi, aap har baat ko apna  andaz mein hi dethe ho, mein hi kuch karthi hoon

That night Neha comes for dinner'.

She finds only aloo parathas and dahi'.

Ye toh Neha ko bilkul pasand hai'.

Sneha ko bahut pasand hai'..

She is happy'.

Neha looks at Geet'.

Geet smiles and she just keps feeding Swetha'.

Neha: aaj aapne pasta nahi banaya?

Geet: aaj tere papa koi dinner pe gaye hai toh meinne nahi banaya

Neha: teek hai, mujhe juice hi kaafi hai

Geet: achhca, mein juice lekhe aathi hoon

Geet brings pineapple juice job hi Neha ko pasand nahi hai'..

Lekhin Neha chup chap juice peethi hai'..

Geet is surprised''.iskko kya ho gaya?

Geet: Swetha , aap apple juice piyenge?

Swetha laughs''..

Swetha: hare mama, mujhe pineapple juice pasand hai, aap ne phir se juice badal di

Swetha snatches it from Neha''

Geet: mein bhi na, bhool hi gayi

Neha: haan mama, ye teek nahi hai, aap mere pasta ko bhi bhool gaye  ho

Neha is disappointed'..

Geet: tum bhi apne papa ki tarah Italian mat banno, hum Hindustani hai, ye tum kabhi mat bhoolo

Neha: ye baat aap papa ko kyun nahi bathathe?

Geet: kyunkke MSK kissikke baat nahi sunthe

Neha: mein bhi MSK ki bati hoo, samje aap, mein abhi papa ko phone karthi hoon

Geet: teek hai, karlo complaint, mein kissi se nahi darthi

Neha calls Maan and complaints'.

Maan: Geet, ye kya hai? tum toh kabhi aaise nahi karthi

Geet: mein bas apni beti ko wapas lane ki koshish kar rahi hoon, lagtha hai plan success hai

Maan: kya? Geet ye mazak karne ka waqt nahi hai, samji

Maan gussa hokke phone kaattha  hai'.

Geet: Gusse Singh Khurana

Geet pretends to be upset ''
 

Neha is now satisfied''.ye toh hamesha aaisa hi chaltha hai'.

Suddenly everyone smell something burning'..

Nakul:Geet m'am, aapka khana jal raha hai

Neha: mama, shayad aap kuch aur bhi bhool gaye ho, kuch jal raha hai

Geet: aapka pizza? Hare, Nakul tumne check kiya hai ya nahi, babaji

Geet had made pizza for Neha''

Geet runs into the kitchen, Neha follows her'..

Fortunately Gee  had  reserved one  pizza for Maan''

Geet prepares it for Neha'.

Neha: mama, sambalkke, kahin ye bhi jal nahi jaaye

Geet: pizza raedy, kissko chahiye garmagaram pizza?

Neha: ye mera hai

Sneha: nahi, ye mera hai

Geet: ye mera hai, chalo tum donno jaakke paratha kaooo

Neha:mama?

Geet: aaise hi lagthe ho toh kuch nahi milega

Neha: teek hai, hum share karthe hai, haina princy?

Swetha: haan deedhs

Geet is happy now'''''

Maan too comes ''..

Maan: hare , kya ho raha hai?

Neha: papa, aap bhi try karo

Maan: mmm, pizza kahan se mangwaya?

Neha: Geet ne banaya

Maan: kya?  Meinne pehle hi khaliya hai toh mujhe nahi chahiye

Geet gets angry''.

Geet: Maaan

 
Neha: don't worry papa, humne pehle hi  test kardhi, it's good
 

Geet: nahi, ap kal se bahar hi khalijiye, yahan aapko khana nahi milega, samje?

Geet snatches the plate from him'.

Maan: hare Geet

Maneet ki ladayi shuru hothi'..

Maan tries to egt it back'..

Geet ties to pull it'.she loses her balanve and falls'.

Maan catches her''Maneet eyelock'..

Neha and Sneha: Mahiii

Aaisa hi Maan apne Geet ka khyaal raktha'.
 

Now they are a happy family''

One morning''

Neha is getting ready'.

Geet is after her'.khana khilathi hai''..Sneha too comes'..

Ussko bhi mummy ke haath se hi khana hai'..

Maan is getting ready''..

Sweta starts cring'.ussko bhi bhook lagthi'.

Geet toh pareshaan hai'

Geet: Maaan

Maan comes & lifts sweta'..

Neha: maa lao plate, mein ab badi ho gayi hoon, mein kudh khaloongi

Sneha: mein bhi , mein bhi

Nakul donno ko serve kartha'.

Geet takes swetha in'..

Maan ye donno ko sambaltha'..

Ab teen teen ladkiyon ko sambalna itna aasaan toh nahi haina?

That evening Maan comes early'..

Geet: Maan itne jaldhi?

Maan: haan Geet, toh kya kar rahi hai choti princess?

Geet: ssshhh sorahai hai

Maan : oohhh '..toh Geet tum kya kar rahi ho?

Maan winks'

Geet:Maaan
 

Maan lifts her & takes her to the bed'..

Geet: ye kya ho raha hai?

Maan: ssshhh baby sorahi hai

Geet: Maan chodo mujhe

Maan:  nahi chodtha toh

Geet:  Maan, ab aap teen teen betiyon ke baap ho
 

Maan: Geet, tumme dekhkke toh koi aaise nahi keh saktha

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan tu toh abhi bhi college days ki GG hi lagthi

Geet : halo Mr., sambalkke patha haina mein kaun hoon? Mrs.MSK

Maan: Geet ab sirf batein hi karthi rahogi ya ?

Geet sharmathi''

Aur haan Maneet ki Mahi Mahi continues'..

One day '..

Geet: aap aagaye?

Maan: haan Geet tum jaldhi tayaar ho jao

Maan takes care of Swetha''

Geet tayyaar hokke aathi'.

Geet: Maan aap bhi tayaar ho jao, function  6 bajhe haina?

Neha ke school ki Annual day hai aur Neha perform kar rahi hai'..

Maan: haan Geet, tum jao, mein bachchon ka khyaal raktha

Geet: aapko yaad haina? Neha ne sab ko bhulaya hai

Maan:Lekhin Geet, hum donno kaise jaa sakte, inn donno ko kaun sambalega?

Geet:Dadi haina?

Dadi just comes'..

Dadi: haan bte, hum haina?

Maan: par Dadi aap ye donno ko kaise sambalenge?

Geet: Sneha toh hummare saath aarahi hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, aap tayaar haina ?

Sneha: haan mama'..

She is ready wearing her favourite dress'.

Maan: lekhin Geet tum jaanthi haina logon ko dekhte hi ye chillana shuru karthi?

Geet: aaj toh aaise nahi karenge, haina?

Sneha: haan'..promise

Maan stares Geet'.

Geet: toh Dadi hum chalte hai, kissiko nahi aana toh teek hai, par hum zaroor jayenge, haina Sneha'.

Sneha: haan mama, papa bad boy hai, hum ussko yahi chodkke jaatha hai

Geet: good, toh phir chalo'..

Maan ka gussa aur badh jaatha'.

Dadi smiles'

Geet leaves with Sneha'.

Dadi: Maan bte, ab yahan se gurkke kya faida? Aap bhi jaayiye

Maan: Geet'hare Geet'rukho

Maan follows them'.

Dadi: patha nahi yahan kaun bacha hai aur kaun bada? Sab ek jaise hi hai, haina? Ab patha nahi kal aap bade hokke kya kya karenge?

Dadi Swetha ko sambalthi'.

They  are now a happy happy family'..

 

@ Deepa...
photos courtesy Geet FB page...
thnks to the Maneet Maniacs who still keep that page alive...Clap
many a time I end up writing for the photos!!!!LOL
thats the end of this FF...hope U all liked it...
thank you guys for all the support...Tongue


Edited by ghsp2fan - 13 March 2013 at 9:24am

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 nice ff

but sad that it ended


come again with new oneLOL

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
part 80
last part
awesome dear...
loved it...
didnt expect u to finish this so soon...
but loved it completely...
start a new FF dear...

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read ur whole story

nice one

all the bestThumbs Up

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