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Part – 3

It's Sunday…..

Subhe se KM mein hungama ho raha hai….

Aaj tak sab apne mannmaani karte rehte…..

Par ab toh unka commando aagaya…..

Dadi sab ke peeche padhi hai….

Ye saaf karo woh dekho kitna dhool hai….

Maan ko sab kuch saaf honne chahiye aur sare cheez apne apne jagah pe honne chahiye….

Maanthe hai ki ek saal ho gayi…par Maan toh aathe hi koi change ho toh turanth notice karega….

Ussski photographic memory jo hai….

Nakul: Dadiji…ye jar ko kahan rakhoon

Dadi: mere shir pe

Nakul: achcha aap zara neeche beitenge?

Dadi: kya?

Annie: kya Dadi, aap bhi? Kisske saath mazak kar rahe ho?

Dadi: mujhe toh patha bhi nahi ab kya karein?

Annie: aap bas aaram karo, mein hoona, Nakul woh mujhe dedo

Annie finds the right place for it…..

Dadi: patha nahi aapko sab kaise yaad hotha, hummara dimag toh kamzoor ho gaya

Annie: choo mantar, Dadi mere paas ek magic mirror hai jo past ko dikhatha

Dadi: past ko dekhke kya faidha? Future ko dekh sakthe hai kya?

Annie: woh toh issme nahi dikhega

Dadi: Annie bte ye 21st cemtury hai, kuch bhi ho saktha

Annie: ye dekho mere jadu, tadda….

Annie opens her lappy…..

Dadi: Annie bte ye toh laptop hai, hum itna bhi nahi jaanthe?

Annie: ye dekho, aabra kadabra, humme 2011 lekhe jao

Dadi: hare ye aapnne kamaal kardhi

Annie: Dadi ye mere 2011 ka b'day video hai, ye dekho Maan bhai kitne tension mein hai

Dadi: ye toh unkki normal roop hai

Annie:  teek kaha aapne, woh diwali party ke raat , kaise Maan bhai ke kamre mein rocket girgayi aur Maan bhai toh itna pareshaan hogaye jaise volcanic eruption ho

Dadi: haan kaise hum donno ko ek gante garden mein kadhe kardhiye the

Annie: woh mere liye achcha punishment tha

Dadi: toh woh aapka hi kaam tha

Annie: hare aap nahi jaanthe?

Dadi: ab patha chal gaya

Annie: mein bhi na

Dadi: kuch bhi ho, aap hi apne Maan bhai ko sambal sakthe hai, kal unnki pathni aagayi toh kya karegi? Patha nahi kiss ladhki ki kismat karab hai?

Annie: Dadi, aap kyun fikar karthe hai?, mein hoona na, shadhi ke pehle one month training dekhe apne bhabhi ko tayyar kardhoongi

Dadi: isse behther aap apne bhai ko badal dijiye

Annie: woh toh mere bas ki baat nahi hai

Dadi: hum bhi dus saal se koshish karke haar chuke hai, shayad unnki patni unnko badaldegi?

Annie: Dadi Maan singh khurana ko badalna mushkil hi nahi, namunkeen hai

Dadi: bas ab bahut hogayi,  aap mere pothe ko aaise kaise keh sakthe?

Annie: Dadi aap toh hamesha Maan bhai ki tarafdhari hi karthe

Dadi: haan aapke taraf toh aapke bhai haina?

Nakul comes…..

Dadi: ab kya?

Nakul: woh  dinner mein kya banaoon?

Dadi: hare itne din toh aap humme poochke banathe the?

Annie: hare Dadi,  Maan bhai aarahe haina?

Dadi: toh wahi aapke malik hai?

Nakul: haan

Dadi: isse baat karthi toh mere BP raise hogi, Annie bte aap hi sambalo

Annie Maan ki pasand ki menu tayyar karthi….

Nakul: ye sab dinner mein hona chahiye?

Annie: nahi ye sab agle hafte ke menu hai, ek din ek banao

Nakul: teek hai

Annie: hare bhuddu, ye sab dinner mein hona chahiye, samje

Nakul: teek hai, toh mein abhi se  tayaari shuru kartha

Annie: kuch bhi karo, mujhe disturb mat karo

Pinky calls……

Annie: halo, who's this?

Pinky: hare Annie, mein hoon Pinky

Annie: Pinky?  Ye kaunsi no hai? Tera mobile kho gaya hai kya ?

Pinky: woh toh Geet ke paas hai, Geet ne tujhe yaad dilanne se manna kiya hai

Annie: tu kya baat kar rahi ho? Patha haina aaj Maan bhai aarahe hai, toh mujhe kyun kamakaam pareshaan karthi ho?

Pinky: mein kitne mushkil se public booth se call karthi, isse dekho, hare Annie shamko 5'o clock yaad haina?

Annie: haan mujhe yaad hai

Pinky: time pe aajanna, warna Geet cake nahi kaategi

Annie: tujhe abhi se cake ki padhi hai, tu ussko kaise bhi sambalo, mein jaldhi aajaaoongi

Pinky: teek hai, bhoolna mat

Annie: achcha, bye

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part 3
nice update..

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Part -4

That evening……….

Geet ki b'day party shuru ho gayi…….

Geet looks like an angel…..

 
Drashti as Geet on sangeet
Pinky: Geet aaj toh tum bahut sundar dikhthi ho

Meera: woh toh hamesha hummari pari hi hai

Geet: mazak chodo, Ye Annie ne kissi ko call kiya hai kya?

Pinky: haan meinne call kiya, woh saath bhaje aajayegi

Geet: Pinky, tumne call kiya?

Pinky: nahi toh, ussne mujhe call kiya tha

Geet: joot, tera mobile toh mere paas hai

Pinky: woh

Geet: achcha m'am ko aane mein dher hogi, koi baat nahi chalo hum masti karte hai, start music

Par Geet ka mann hi nahi laga without Annie……

Geet: ye Annie ki bhai ko aaj hi aana hai kya? Kal ya parson nahi aa sakthe?

Meera: Geet tere liye woh apne schedule kyun change karenge?

Geet: kyun nahi kar sakthe? Flights toh roz hohte hai, par b'day toh saal mein ek bar hi aathi, haina?

Pinky: hare ye sab chodo, cake kaatthe hai

Meera: Pinky….abhi abhi tumne dus dus samose kaayi ab cake ?

Geet: ye Annie bhi na, hamesha mere b'day mein hi kadbad karthi

Meera: iss bar toh usski koi galthi nahi hai

Geet: tum chup kar, Annie zaroor aayegi, haina?

Meera: Geet kyun pareshaan ho rahi ho? Flight abhi abhi land hui hogi

At the airport……

Maan comes……

Annie: bhai

Maan: halo Annie

Annie goes & hugs him….

Annie: bhai, aaj toh mein bahut kush hoon, mere Maan bhai aagaye wapas apne Annie ke paas

Maan: hare ,ye kya? Tum rorahi ho?

Annie: nahi toh, ye toh kushi ki aasoo hai

Maan: MSK ki behen ke aakhon mein kushi ki aasooo ko bhi jagah nahi hai, samji

Maan wipes off her tears…..

Annie smiles…….

Maan: Annie Dadi kaise hai?

Annie: bhai Dadi toh subhe se aapke aane ki tayyari mein busy hai

Maan: mujhe abhi Dadi ko milna hai, chalo

Annie: bhai mein itne dhoor aapko receive karne aayi aur aapko dadi ki fikar hai

Maan smiles……

Maan: aaise nahi hai, mein toh ab tumme mil chukka hoon, aur ab toh tum hamesha mere paas hi rehne wali ho, haina?

Annie: aap se baat karke jeethna mushkil hai bhai

They leave…..

Maan notices the driver taking the wrong route….

Maan: driver, humme seedhe jaana hai, raastha bhool gaye ho kya?

Maan gets angry with him….

Annie: hare bhai, usski koi galthi nahi hai, mujhe kissi se milna hai, bas do minute, mein yun gayi aur yun aayi

Maan: Annie, woh kaunsi badi VIP hai jo ussko tumme aaj hi milna hai?

Annie: Maan bhai , hummari  Geet

Maan: kaun?

Annie: hare aapne photos mein dekha haina? Geet, meri sabse achchi dhost

Maan: haan dekha hoga, shayad?

Annie: hare, Geet ko kaise miss kar sakte ho? She is so cute, you know

Maan: ussko kya hua? ICU mein hai kya?

Annie: bhai, kaise batein karte hai aap?

Maan: tu itni tension mein ho toh mujhe laga bimar hogi

Annie: nahi nahi, aaj usski b'day hai

Maan: toh tumne ab tak wish nahi kiya?

Annie: woh toh mein kar chuki hoon

Maan: then, what's the problem?

Annie: Geet ke ghar pe party hai toh usski orders hai ki mein aaj zaroor aaoon

Maan: woh kaun hothi mere behen ko order karnewali?

Maan gets angry……

Annie: aaise baat nahi hai bhai, aap nahi samjoge

Maan: mein samjna bhi nahi chahatha

Annie: driver rukho, jaldhi gadhi rokho

Maan: Annie. Kya hua?

Maan pareshaan ho gaya…….

Annie:bhai mein toh Geet ki gift ko ghar pe hi bhool gayi

Maan: toh kya hua? Tu use kal dedo

Annie: nahi nahi Geet pehle hi naraaz hogi

Maan: Annie, ye kaise friend hai? Tum ek kaam karo, ussko abhi phone karke bathao kit um aaj nahi aasakthi, hum ghar chalet hai, mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki woh kya kar sakthi?

Annie: idea! Bhai aapne mere liye tofah laye haina?

Maan: haan, mein tujhe kaise bhool saktha?

Maan opens his briefcase & takes out a wrist watch……

Annie grabs it…..

Maan: hare Annie, sambalke

Annie: wow bhai, it's so beautiful

Maan: tumme pasan haina?

Annie: haan bhai, this is just amazing, Geet would love this…

Maan: kya?

Annie: bhai, please ye mein apne friend ko dedoon?

Maan: par Annie ye meinne tummare liye kitne pyaar se laya , it's one of a kind, U won't find another watch like this

Annie: Geet bhi aaisi hi hai, U won't find someone like her

Maan: lekhin Annie

Annie: bhai ye nahi toh kya? Aap toh mere liye isse bhi achcha watch lekhe aayenge, haina?

Maan: woh toh hai

Annie: thank you bhai, aap duniya ke sabse achche bhai ho

Ab Maan kuch nahi kar saktha….

Gurmeet Choudhary on the sets of Geet

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nice story...waiting fr maneet meet...continue soon...

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part 3
loved it..

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Part - 5

 

Geet ki apartment bhi aagayi….

Driver stops the car…..

Annie gets down….

Annie: bhai, bas 5 min, mein abhi aathi hoon

Maan: koi baat nahi Annie, you go & enjoy the party, mein ghar chalkke driver ko bhajtha hoon, U don't worry about me….bye

Annie: thanks bhai

Annie leaves….

Hare Annie toh watch ko bhool gayi…..

Maan: achcha hua ki Annie bhool gayi, ab kal ussi ki gift dedegi

Maan is happy……par Maan ki kushi zyada dher nahi rehthi….

Maan: driver chalo

They just turn the corner….Annie calls……

Maan: haan Annie

Annie: bhai woh watch

Maan: haan yahi hai

Annie: bhai please aap use lekhe dena, party terrace pe hai,mein abhi abhi upar aayi hoon, lift bhi karab hai

Maan:sirf lift nahi, yahan toh sab kuch karab hai

Annie: bhai

Maan: achcha tum wait karo, mein aatha hoon

Maan bahut tensed hai….

Maan: aaj ka din hi karab hai, pehle Annie ki watch gayi aur ab mujhe ye sab karna padtha

Maan could have send the driver….par annie ko bhura laga toh?...

Issiliye kudh chale jaatha…..

Maan comes……

Everyone is singing…..happy b'day to Geet….

Maan looks around for Annie…….

He finds Geet …..Geet is cutting the cake…..

Maan: toh yahi  Geet hai

Maan forgets about the watch…..he keeps looking at her…..

Woh kya kya kar rahi hai…..

Geet is very happy……she keeps smiling……

Pinky: hare jaldhi karo

Annie: Pinky, rukho pehle b'day baby ko khilathe hai

Annie takes a piece & she rubs it on her cheeks…..

Annie: happy b'day Geet

Now it's Geet turn….

Geet takes a piece….Annie starts to run….

Geet chases her……..Pinky is busy eating……only she knows what to do with the cake…..

Geet goes & hits Maan…..

Maan ka shirt dirty ho jaatha……

Geet looks at him…..

Maan stares her…..Maan ko ye sab pasand  nahi hai…..

Geet: ooh….i'm sorry

Annie comes….

Annie: bhai toh aap b'day baby ko mil gaye ho

Geet smiles….Maan Geet ko aaise dekhtha jaise woh  koi khooni ho…..

Geet: hare babaji, wish nahi kiya hai toh kya ek smile bhi nahi kar sakthe? Kaise aadmi hai

Maan ka gussa aur badhjaatha…..woh apne bade bade aakhon dikhatha…..

Par Geet par koi asar nahi pada……hare ye kya? Pehle bar MSK ki haar?...

Meera comes….

Meera  Maan ko dekhthe hi rehthi….

She couldn't take her eyes off him…

Most of the girls feel the same…..

MSK ki magic hi kuch aaisa haina?

Annie: bhai aap mere bhai nahi papa ho toh aaise hi Geet meri saheli nahi maa hai, I mean aapki absence mein Geet hi mera khyaal rakhthi

Maan: thanks

Geet:bade aaye thanks kehne,  meinne  aapki thanks ke liye ye sab nahi ki

Maan: itna attitude…woh bhi Maan Singh Khurana  ke samne?

Maan keeps staring…..usske ankh se aag nikhalthi toh Geet jal jaathi….

Geet: Annie tere bhai bade dust danav lagthe hai

Maan: kya?

Annie apne bhai ki chehre ko padgayi….

Annie: achcha bhai, thanks, ab aap jaaooo…

Annie sends  him off before it is too late…..

Maan bhi wahan ek pal bhi nahi rukh saktha….Maan leaves…..

Meera: Geet ye tummne kya kardhi? Woh thode dher aur rukh jaathe toh kitna mazaa aatha

Geet: kya? Woh thode dher aur rukhthe toh mein yahan se koodhkke escape hothi

Annie: Geet aaj tera janam din hai, issiliye mein chup hoon

Aaise hua Maneet ka pehla mulakaat…….

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part 5
nice update
maaneet ki pehli mulakat achhi hui...

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part 3
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