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Posted: 11 years ago
part 4
wow Maan is here...
and he already thinks Geet is too much...
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part 5
awesome...
what a mulaqat...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 2
awesome update
just loved it dear
sorry for replying late
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Part – 6

 

For the next few days Annie keeps on talking about her brother…..

Maan bhai aaise hai…..waise hai…yahan se ye laye hai….wahan se woh laye hai…..

Maan bhai ye jaanthe hai…woh jaanthe hai…..

Geet keeps teasing her….she keeps pulling her legs….

Geet: hare Pinky, tujhe patha hai woh isskke bhai kaise kehte hai?

"Maan Singh Khurana"  aaise koi apne aapkke naam letha hai kya?

Geet Maan ki nakal karthi….

Meera: unnka style hi kuch alag hai

Geet: aur suno " mein Maan Singh Khurana, mujhe Angry mat karna"

Meera: par gusse karthe waqt bhi kitne hot lagthe hai?, Meera drools……………

Pinky: aaise nahi Geet, ye purana style hai, mujhe dekho

" don't angry me"

Geet: Dust danav, haina?

Annie: guys, bahut ho gaya, ab bas bhi karo, lagtha hai aap sab tealous hai mujhse, kyunki aapko aaise bhai nahi hiana?

Geet: kaun chahatha hai aaise bhai? Aaise bhai hone se achcha hua ki mein single child hoon

Meera: haan Geet aaise bhai nahi boyfriend hone chahiye, haina?

Geet: Meera tu toh pagal ho gayi ho? MSK aur boyfriend? 

Annie: Geet ye teek nahi hai

Geet: chalo chalo aaj ka Maan class katam, topic change karo, so boring, mujhe neendh aarahi hai

Pinky: ye toh kuch zhi ho raha hai, sambalke, Annie ko choddo ye Meera tujhe khaa jayegi

Geet aaise hi mazak karthi rehthi….

One day……at KM….

Sab terrace pe khel rahe hai….

Annie ties Geet's eyes with a scarf……

Now Geet has to catch them…..

Annie tries to play a prank…..

She asks everyone to leave…..sab neeche chale jaathe hai……

Maan just returns home…..

Maan ko dekhthe hi Meera ek magazine lekhe padne ki natak karthi…..

Par chup chup ke ussko hi dekhthi rehthi……she has a crush on him….

Woh Maan ko dekhte hi disturb ho jaathi…..

Annie aur Pinky agla prank plan kar rahe hai…..

Aaj Geet ko kaise bhi darana hai……

Maan toh kush hai…..aaj ghar mein itna shaanthi?...

Shayad woh rowdy Geet nahi aayi?...

Maan goes up…..

Geet tries to move & hits a flower-pot…..it falls down…..

Maan hears the noise coming from the terrace & goes to check…..

Geet apne aap se baat kar rahi hai…..

Maan: isse kya ho gaya? Sach mein pagal toh nahi ho gai?

Geet: Annie, mujhe patha hai kit um yahi ho…..Annie….Annie…..

Geet comes near Maan woth her arms reaching out to catch Annie…..

Maan ek minute Geet ko dekhthe hi rehtha…..

Geet: pakad liya…..

She has caught Maan…..

Maan: tum?

Geet unties her eyes….

Geet: aap? Annie ne bathaya nahi ki aap bhi khel mein ho

Maan: kya? Tum mujhse dhoor hi raho

Geet realizes that she is almost touching him….she steps back…..

Maan: ye kaisa game hai? Tum kya aat saal ki bachchi ho?

Geet: kyun? Hum ye nahi khel sakthe? Hum toh abhi bhi jawan hai, aap ki tarah budhe nahi

Maan: kya?

Maan ka gussa out of control ho raha hai……

He stares her…..

Geet: kuch nahi….woh Annie….Annie…

Geet tries to leave…..

Maan catches hold of her hand….

Maan: ek minute, tu kya apne aap ko gangleader samajthi?

Geet: meib Annie ko bhulathi hoon, Annie…

Maan: toh tum mujhe damki dethi ho? MSK ko?

Geet: haan

 Maan: kya? kissiko bhi bhulao, Annie….Dadi….aur kaun?

Geet: Pinky….

Maan: kya?

Geet: nahi woh Annie, Pinky…hum sab khel rahe the….ab patha nahi sab kahan chale gaye?

Maan: ek baat yaad rakho, tu mere behen ko apne pagalpan mein shaamil mat karo, samji

Geet: par ye toh usska hi idea tha

Maan: chup….bilkul chup…jab MSK baat katha toh beech mein koi nahi bholtha

Geet: aap bolne denge toh bolenge

Maan: Geet, agar tummari ye faltu khel se Annie ko kahin lag jaatha toh tum mujhse bach nahi sakthi, samji?

Geet: ab toh mere haath chodo, mujhe dard hotha hai

Maan suddenly realizes that he is holding her hand….he releases his hold……

Geet leaves……Maan keeps looking at her……

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Geet: kyun? Hum ye nahi khel sakthe? Hum toh abhi bhi jawan hai, aap ki tarah budhe nahi  😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet...always she get caugght by maan...continue soon...
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part 6
awesome...
this is really too good...
cont soon dear...
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Part – 7

 

Next week…..

Annie college nahi aathi…..

Geet calls her…..

Geet: halo Annie

Annie: haan Geet

Geet: tu aaj college kyun nahi aayi? Teri tabyat toh teek haina?

Annie: haan, mein teek hoon

Geet: lekhin tere aawaaz sunke aaisa nahi lagtha, kya baat hai?

Annie: Geet mein kal aakke sab bathathi hoon,ab mujhe jaana hai,bye

Geet: ye Annie ko kya ho gaya? Kal tak toh Maan bhai Maan bhai karthi rehthi…..

Hare babaji! Ye kya?  Usski aadat ab mujhe lag gayi? Nahi nahi….

Next day……

Annie comes…. She looks dull……

Geet tries to cheer her up….

Geet: toh Annie, kal tummare Maan bhai ne kya kya kamala ki? Kal hum DD ke kahaani

 ko bahut miss karte the, haina Pinky?

Pinky: DD?

Geet: hare Dusht Danav….

Meera: nahi nahi …dhak dhak…unnke paas aathe hi dil kaisa dhak dhak karne kagtha?

Still no response from Annie…..

Geet: ye toh abhi bhi chup hai, lagtha hai koi serious problem hai

Pinky: Annie, kya baat hai?

Geet: Annie, humme bhi nahi bathaoge?

Annie: koi baat nahi

Geet: ab tu mujhe bathaoge ya mein Mr.Maan singh Khurana ko phone lagaoon?

Annie: Geet, tum aaise kuch nahi karogi

Meera:  toh mein call karthi hoon, mujhe toh number bhi maloom hai

Geet: Meera, tu thode dher chup raho, Annoe toh tu hi bathao, kya hua?

Annie: woh next week meri sagaayi hai, Vicky ke saath

Meera: toh agla toh teri shadhi hogi, ktine achche baat hiana?

Pinky: wow! Congrats Annie

Geet: Vicky? Khanna uncle ka beta?

Annie: wahi mera bachpan ka dhost

Geet: aur tumne bhi haan kardhi?

Annie: haan

Geet: Annie, kya tumme ye shadhi se kush ho?

Pinky: ye kaise sawal hai? Vicky toh Annie ki best friend, haina?

Geet: Pinky…………….Annie tu jawab di

Annie: mujhe patha nahi

Geet: ye kaise jawab hai?

Annie: Gee tab tu apni investigation ko band karo, mein pehle hi pareshaan hoon

Geet: woh toh mujhe patha hai, issiliye pooch rahi hoon

Annie: Gee tab mere paas tummare sawaloon ka jawab nahi hai

Geet: toh teek hai, ye teri life hai tu hi sambalo

Geet wahan se chale jaathi…..

Annie ka patha nahi, lekhin Geet iss shadhi se kush nahi hai…..

Pinky: hare Geet, tujhe kya ho gaya?

Geet: Pinky, mujhe lagtha hai ki Annie ye shadhi apne marzi se nahi kar rahi hai

Pinky: par Geet, hum kya kar sakte hai?

Geet: kaise bhai hai? Apne behen ki pasand napasand ko nahi jaanthe, Mr.Maan Singh Khurana

 Ka patha nahi lekhin mein apni Annie ki zindagi barbad hone nahi doongi

Pinky: toh tu kya karogi?

Geet: Pinky jaldi Adi ko bulao…..

Geet ke paas ek plan hai…….

Adi comes…..

Geet asks him to call Maan…..

They go to a public booth…..

Adi toh Maan ko Geet ke b'day mein dekha tha…..

Maan ka gussewale aakhen abhi bhi ussko yaad hai….

Adi  gabragaya…..

Geet: hare Adi, jaldi karo

Adi: Geet are you sure, mujhe hi baat karna padega?

Geet: haan

Adi calls…….

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana speaking

Adi ka aawaaz hi nahi nikaltha…..

Adi: halo

Maan: yes, woh is this?

Adi: halo

Maan gets angry……..

Maan: kya halo halo karthe ho? Aage bolo

Adi: halo

Maan phone kaattha……

Now Geet has no other choice than to call herself……

Geet: Mr. Maan

Maan: ye kaise mazak hai, ab voce change karke baat kar rahe ho, tum wahi haina?

Geet: aapko mere chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, pehle aapki behen ki chintha karo

Maan: tum….tum……tum Annie ko kaise jaanthi

Geet: aap pehle aapki behen ki mann ki baat jaanlo

Maan: hako, kaun hai tu?

Geet: Annie ko shadhi nahi karni

Maan: tumme kaise patha?

Geet: pehle aap ye baat ko jaanlo

Geet  phone rakhthi

Maan: halo….halo….phone kaatdhi?  Usski ye himmat?

Maan bahut naraaz ho jaatha….

Par Geet ka kaam ho gaya….

Maan Annie ki shadhi ke barein mein sochne kaga….

Annie bhi do din se utna kush nahi lagthi….

Kya problem hogi?

Maan tries to speak to Annie…

Lekhin Annie says that it's just the marriage tension & nothing else…..

Maan phir bhi kush nahi hai…koi toh baat hai……

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nice updt...straightfrwrd geet...continue soon...
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part 7
awesome...
why is she not happy?
cont soon dear...