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KISMAT CONECTION

 

KHURANAS'''''.MUMBAI KE  BUSINESS FAMILY

SAVITHRI DEVI ' MAAN'S DADI

 
                MAAN ' ANGRY YOUNG MAN & LOVING BROTHER

                ANVESHA ' MAAN'S SISTER

 

HANDAS''''..HOSHIARPUR KA PYAARI FAMILY

                MOHINDER -   GEET'S FATHER

                RANNO ' MOTHER

                GEET ' LIVELY YOUNG GIRL

 

Pinky's house''Mumbai''

Pinky Geet ki  saheli hai'..

As usual Geet PG hai''

They both are doing their b.com final year''

Its reopening day''

Geet has just returned from Hoshiarpur after the holidays'..

They are getting ready for college'..

Aditti Chopra as Pinky Pinky...
Pinky: Geet rukho, mein bhi aathi

Geet: Pinky tu yahi rehke dinbar kaathe raho

Uncle: haan Pinky, Geet teek kehrahi hai

Pinky: papaji aap bhi? Hare Geet'.geeet

Aunty: kya sahi? Ye toh aaise kaa kaake apne sasuraal mein kya karegi?

Uncle: ab tu yahan kya karthi?

Aunty: har koi ko aap jaise pathi kahan miltha?

Uncle: ye taareef hai ya?

Aunty: haan haaan aap yahi rukhke mere kaam sambhalo, mein dukhaan chalthi hoon

Uncle runs a sweet stall''

Uncle: nahi nahi, tu aayegi toh customers ko mein kya doonga?

Aunty: haan haan ab ye mazak chodke jaldhi jao

Uncle: teek hai, chaltha hoon

Geet: Pinky tummare wajhe se hum hamesha late jaathe hai

Pinky's munching something''

Pinky: ye utna achcha nahi hai

Geet: kya?

Pinky: ye crunchy nahi hai, papaji ko kehke masterji ko badalna hoga

Geet: Pinky kal se tu uncle ke saath hi chale jaana

Pinky: mein bhi kab se yahi kehrahi hoon, lekhin papaji toh maanthe hi nahi

Geet: ab tu jaldi chalogi, bus chale jaayegi

They run & catch the bus'''..

At the college'.

Annie & Meera are waiting for Geet'..

Meera...
They are all classmates & friends''

Geet comes'.Annie goes & hugs her''

Annie: hare Geet, tum kab aayi?

Geet: mein toh do din pehle hi aagayi, par tujhe toh phone karne le liye bhi waqt nahi haina?

Meera: par Geet tum toh call kar sakthi thi?

Pimky: hare aaplog abhi shuru mat ho jao, pehle hum apne naye class mein toh jaaye

Meera: Pinky aaj toh kuch gadbad lagtha hai, tu class ke baat kar rahi ho?

Pinky: aaj pehle din haina, chalo sweet se shuru karte, jaldi chal

Pinky has bought sweet from their stall''.

Meera: toh Geet Hoshiarpur kaisi hai?

Geet: usske baat mat kar?

Annie: kyun? Kya hua?

Pinky: hare Ranno aunty Geet ki shadhi ki tayyari kar rahi hai

Meera: kya? Par tummari padayi?

Geet: issiliye mein wahan se escape ho gayi, shukaer hai babaji ki, maa ko koi achcha ladhka nahi milla, warna aaj toh mein kissi ki dulhan banchuki hothi

Annie: Geet tum apne maa se darthi ho? Shayad meri maa hothi toh bhi aaise hi karthi, haina?

Meera: hare aaj tere maa ki yaad kaise aagayi?, tere bhai se baat nahi hui hai kya?

Pinky: tum issko yaad mat dilao, warna ye shuru ho jayegi

Meera: Geet tum bathao, tummare maa bahut strict hai kya?

Geet: aaise nahi, woh Hoshiarpur ke alawa kuch nahi jaanthi, woh chahathi ki mein jaldhi settle ho jaaoon, agar Pinky ke papa yahan nahi hothe toh mein sapne mein bhi Mumbai ko dekh nahi pathi

Ranno toh school ke badh hi Geet ki shadhi karna chahathi''

Pinky ke nanny Hosiarpur mein hai toh Pinky bhi Geet ke saath hi padthi thi'.

Phir Pinky ke papa ne Pinky ke saath saath Geet ke liye bhi applications lekhe aagaye'.

Mohinder bhi chahate ki Geet atleast UG complete karein'.

Ranno ko bhi maanna pada'..

Yahan aake sabko dekhke Geet aur aage panda chahathi hai'..

Meera ek south indian hai settled in Mumbai''

She visits her family at Chennai during vacations'.

Annie toh Mumbai ki hi hai'..

She lost her parents when she was 2 yrs old''

Dadi has taken care of her ''.

Aur Maan haina, usska bhai'..

He is 7 to 8 yrs elder'..

After his parents Maan has taken care of Annie like a father'.

Annie respects him very much''

Maan Annie ki choti choti kushiyon  ka bhi dhyaan detha'..

He has never let her feel their parents' loss'..

But aajkal Maan London mein hai toh Annie has started missing him'..

Aur ab Geet ke batein sunke pehle bar Annie apne maa ko yaad karthi hai'..

Maan ek saal se UK mein hai'..

Woh Annie ko chodke jaana nahi chahatha'

Par ye usski business ke liye bahut zaroori tha'

Maan asked Annie to come with him'.

Par Annie apne college chodke aana nahi chahathi''

Ab aage''''''



Edited by ghsp2fan - 13 March 2013 at 9:27am

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congrats...

part 1
nice part...
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congrats for the new ff
part 1
nice start..

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Part – 2

Back to college…..

That day Annie thoda disturbed lag rahi hai…..

Geet & Meera try to cheer her up……

Geet: hare Annie aaj tere bhai ne subhe se kya kya kiya hai? Unka phone nahi aaya?

Aur tumne bhi unko bathaya hai ki aaj tum subhe jaldhi utgayi, brush kiya aur nahaya bhi like a good girl….

Annie still not interested…..

If it were any other day she would have started talking about Maan…..

Par aaj nahi…….Geet pareshaan hai….ye meinne kya kardhi?

Next day……

Annie is back on track……

She looks very happy today…..

Meera:  Geet, ye Annie toh kal kitna upset thi, par aaj dekho?

Geet: haan mujhe bhi samaj mein nahi aaya ki ek hi raat mein ye kaise badal gayi?

Pinky: chodo yaar ab ussko kal ki yaad mat dilao

Geet: woh bhi teek hai

Meera: Annie, aaj tum kuch zyada hi excited ho, kya baat hai? Humme nahi bathaogi?

Annie: hare aap logon ko nahi patha? Maan bahi Mumbai aarahe hai

Geet: toh ye baat hai, toh ye aajse kudh ko bhi bhool jayegi

Meera: Geet, tumne Maan bhai ko dekha?

Geet: nahi? Par ye itna build-up karthi toh ek na ek din uss Maan bhai ko zaroor milna padega

Meera: meinne ek bar dekha, jab woh Annie ko lene mere ghar aaye the, par woh toh itne jaldhi mein the ki ek hai bhi nahi kar sakthi

Geet: toh ab tum unkko milnne ke liye Annie se bhi zyada bechain ho?

Meera: hare, aaise nahi?

Annie: hare mere bhai ke barein mein kya baat ho rahi hai?

Meera: kuch nahi

Annie: Geet mujhse pooch, tumme kya jaanna hai?  Maan bhai toh

Geet: lo ye shuru ho gayi, ab toh pura din isska bhai ka Ramayan hi sunna padega, babaji aaj mujhe do aur khaan ki  zaroorat padegi, haina?

Meera: usski koi zaroorat nahi, ye lo cotton, apne khan band karlo, meinne toh kardhi…dekho

Thay all tease Annie…..

Ye toh roz ki kahaani hai….

Next day…at the canteen…..

Geet, Meera & Pinky chat kar rahe hai……

Pinky apne kaam mein busy hai….

Adi comes & joins…….

Meera: hai Adi

Geet: hai Adi, aur ek hai bhi

Adi: ye kissliye?

Geet: woh Pinky ki taraf se, woh kya haina? M'am bahut busy hai, haina Pinky?

Pinky tries to speak with her mouth full…..

Meera: Pinky tu kyun takleef karthi, tu bas apne kaam kar hum log haina?

Adi is also from Hoshiapur, he is doing his PG……

He likes Pinky…….aur woh sabka achcha dhost hai….

Adi: Pinky aur kuch logi?

Pinky: ek anda pav

Adi: shuker hai, ab toh muh koldhi, Pinky bas ek? Tummari tabyat toh teek haina?

Geet: Pinky aaise hi kaathe rahogi toh ek din bomb ki tarah patjaoge

Pinky: Geet

Adi: Pinky tu fikar mat kar, mein tummare liye anda pav lekhe aatha hoon

Meera: ab ye Annie m'am abhi tak kahan gayi

Geet: hogi kissi konne mein, apne bhai ke saath baat karthi rahogi

 
Annie comes…..
 

Geet: lo m'am aagayi, toh ho gayi baat?

Annie: guys, ek good news hai

Meera: kya baat hai? Jaldi bathao, teri shadhi fix ho gayi?

Gee: isski toh hamesha shadhi ki paddi, par innke papa toh isske career ke peeche pade hai, mujhe dekkho meri maa meri shadhi ke peeche padi hai, ye m'am khaane ke peeche padi hai, Adi isske peeche, Annie ka toh baat hi alag hai, zaroor isski bhai ki koi kahaani hogi, haina?

Meera: Annie, Maan bhai  kab aarahe hai?

Geet: ya unnka trip cancel ho gayi hai kya?

Annie: Geet kaise batein karthi ho?

Meera: achcha tu bathao toh sahi, kya news hai?

Annie: patha hai,this Sunday is very special

Geet toh bahut kush ho gayi….kyunki Sunday ko Geet ki b'day hai….

Kya baat hai babaji, issko meri b'day bhi yaad hai…..

Geet ko laga ki har saal ki tarah iss saal bhi bhool jayegi….

Geet: Pinky, tujhe yaad haina?

Pinky: haan, mera anda pav, ye Adi ab tak kahan gaya?

 
Geet: Pinky, Annie kuch kehrahi hai, woh Sunday ko kya hai?

Annie: haan, Sunday ko mujhe koi disturb mat karna, mujhe koi khaas appointment hai uss din,

I just can't wait, ye Sunday kab aayega?

Geet: ek minute? Sunday ko kahin jaanewali hai kya?

Annie: Geet Sunday Maan bhai aarahe hai, tujhe patha nahi?

Geet: woh kya Obama hai ? jo unkki utne jagne ki har kabar news mein telecast hogi ?

Annie: Geet mere bhai ki mazak mat udao, mujhe ye bilkul pasand nahi hai

Geet: mujhe bhi ye sab pasand nahi hai

Annie: kya?

Geet: Annie iss saal bhi tu mere b'day ko bhool gayi

Annie: hare, sorry Geet, Sunday teri b'day haina, toh double damakha hoga, advance wishes Geet

Geet: aaise nahi chalega, Sunday evening hummare ghar pe party hai, tu aarahi hai, samji

Annie: par Geet, bhai ka flight bhi Sunday 5'0clock ka hi hai, aur bhai itne din ke badh aarahe hai toh mujhe unnko receive karna padega, mein subhe se sham tak tere saath hi rahooongi

Geet: matlab, tu party mein nahi aaogi?

Annie: Geet, woh mein kaise aathi?

Geet: mujhe kuch patha nahi, mein toh tummare aane ke badh hi cake katoongi, is that clear

Annie: Geet….geet…

Geet has left…..she is a little angry…………..

Annie: Meera tu hi bathao ye Geet samajthi kyun nahi?
 

Meera: ye toh tera hi galthi hai, tumne hi pechle saal Geet ki b'day ko miss kiya, ab toh tujhe aana hi padega

Annie: woh bhi hai, par bhai ko kya karein?

Meera: woh toh mein sambalthi

Annie: kya? Tu mere bhai se dhoor hi raho, samji?

Annie: Pinky tu kya karnewali ho?

Pinky: meinne toh sare tayyariyan kardhi

Meera: wow, kya kya kiya hai tummne?

Pinky: woh meinne do do cakes order kardhi, ek Geet ki pasand ki aur ek meri pasand ki

Annie: hare Pinky. Last time I asked U to remind me know? Tu toh bhool hi gayi

Meera: ye toh cake ko dekhte hi sab kuch bhool jaathi

Annie: toh tumne yaad kyun nahi dilayi

Meera: mujhe kya patha? Mein Chennai mein thi, Annie iss saal hum sab saath mein celebrate karenge, tum zaroor aana, patha nahi next year hum kahan honge?

Annie: teek hai, tumlog thode dher Geet ko sambalo, mein 7 bahje ke pehle aajaoongi

Meera: teek hai, par tu apne bhai ko dekhke sab kuch bhoolna mat

Annie: nahi nahi, warna Geet mujhe zinda nahi chodegi

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part 2
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part 2
awesome part...
Annie is obsessed with her bro Maan...
cont soon dear...

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