MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sirjee


Waooo continue soon
thnks and will try and update soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by pia.raha


loved itt!!!!!!! the way manyata cleaned uday's wounds!!!!!! and pakash chala gaya😆 lovelyy!!!!
thanks yar
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey girl when will u update??????????
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by MAHI1198


i agree yar ye manyata hai hi pagal...
hmm...manyata such m pagal h...use wo chawl wala pakash acha lgta h.. or yahan DIL TO PAGAL HAI uv k liye...but vo uv h ki hme bhav hi ni deta...sirf manyta ko deta h.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by cherry.parul0


hmm...manyata such m pagal h...use wo chawl wala pakash acha lgta h.. or yahan DIL TO PAGAL HAI uv k liye...but vo uv h ki hme bhav hi ni deta...sirf manyta ko deta h.
srsly yar bahot jalan ho rahi hai...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Dark.Diva


Update plizz
so sorry i'll update today...
Posted: 11 years ago

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 3'. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 MANVEER

 

In the morning udayveer gets up and finds out that the whole night he was sleeping on manyata's lap. He feels very happy about dat'..then he gets up and picks manyata in his arms who was sleeping on the side of the bed and puts her properly in the centre of his bed'so that she could sleep comfortably. Then uday goes to freshen up. When he comes back he finds manyata awake and confused'.

Uday: are manyata uth gayi tum??

Manyata:mein yaha kese? Oh teri lagta hai tumhe sulate sulate mein khud so gayi'

Manyata goes near udayveer and touches his chest wound.

Manyata: uday tumhara ghav kesa hai? Tum thik to ho na?

UDAY TOUCHES MANYATA'S CHEEKS'.

Uday: apne dava lagayi hai to ghav ko to thik hona hi hai na'.

MANYATA BLUSHES AND THEN SADDENS'.

Uday: kya hua manyata?

Manyata:uday mein vo pakash ke bare mein soch rahi thi''

UDAY GETS ANGRY BUT CONTROLS HIMSELF

Uday:pakash ke bare mein?

Manyata:han udaybeer, jo pakash itna padha likha hai use aaj meri wajah se ek waiter ki

               Nokri karni pad rahi hai'''

Uday:manyata ye sab hamari vajah se hua hai to humhi ise sahi karenge'.hume pata hai 

          Ki pakash khuddar insane hai. Aap chinta mat kijiye hum use pata nahi chalne

          Denge ki uski madat humne ki hai'''..

Manyata:shukriya udayveer'.

UDAY REMOVES MANYATA"S HAIR ASIDE FROM HER FACE'.

Uday:shukriya kis bat keliye han? Manyata hum utne bhi bure nahi jitna aap sochte

          Hai'..

MANYATA TAKES UDAY'S FACE IN HER PALMS'

Manyata:mujhe pata hai udayveer tum kitne ache ho thike?

                Aur vesebhi tum mere dost ho ye to bhagvan ne diya hua sabse pyara tofa hai'

                 Han nahi to'''.

MANYATA AND UDAY SEE INTO EACH OTHERS EYES AND SMILE''..

Uday:chaliye manyata hum apko rajmahal leke jate hai''''

Manyata: han yar vese bhi kal raat mein ghar nahi gayi vese sabko pata to hai ki mein

                Tumhare sath hun par phir bhi vo pareshan honge'..chalo chalet hai'

{when they reach mahal all were sitting together. J sees manyata)

J:are jiji aa gayi aap?kaha thi aap sari raat kahi us pakaash ke sath to nahi?

Dadisa:Han manyata kaha thi aap?

            Udayveer cums from back and stands besides manyata''..

Udayveer:manyata humare sath thi  dadisa'.

J IS SHOCKED AND ALSO OTHERS''.

Dadisa:apke sath aur ye chote kese lagi aapko?

Udayveer:kuch nahi dadisa hum ghudsavari karte waqt girgaye '.to unnati ne manyata

                 Ko batadiya aur isiliye vo humare sath thi''

Dadisa:manyata aap jaiye fresh hokar aiye''

MANYATA GOES INTO HER ROOM AND AFTER SOMETIME SHE COMES OUT OF THE WASHROOM'AND FINDS UDAY SITTING ON HER BED'..

manyata:wah mere gulab jamun tum to bade ustad nikle jhoot bolne mein'.

Uday:to kya karte hum dadisa ko sach batake apko daat khilvate?

MANYATA COMES N SITS NEAR UDAY AND TAKES HIS HAND''

Manyata:tum abi bhi ghussa ho na humse??

Uday:hmmm..he to sahi par thodese''

Manyata:are yar ab maf bhi kardo na''.

Udayveer:na na pricess itni jaldi nahi uske liye apko humare liye kuch karna hoga'..

Manyata:par kya:?

Uday:date pe chalengi humare sath?

Manyata:date pein?

Uday:acha chodo humne tumse bekar mein hi pucha'..

Manyata:are uday accha thik hai baba mein chaloongi'

UDAY'S SMILE WIDENS UDAY GOES OUT AND COMES BACK IN THE ROOM''

Uday:to phir ye lo''

Manyata:ye kya hai?

Uday:hum chahte hai kit um ye dress aur jwellery pehen ke ao date pein''

Manyata:thike baba jesi tumhari marji'''han nahi toh''.

Uday:to kab chale?aaj shaam ko?ms. han NAHI to'.

Manyata:aaj'.thike

Uday:gr8 to mein apko lene sham ko aa jaunga''.

MANYATA NODS HER HEAD'..

Uday:to thike hum chalet hai princess

Manyata:ja rahe ho itni jaldi?plz thodi der rook jao na vese bhi vo vijay mujhe pareshan

               Karega'''..

Uday: accha thike hai baba hum thodi der aap keliye rook jaenge ab khush??

Manyata: bahot bahot khush'''ab milke vijay ki band bajaenge'

Udayveer: HAN NAHI TOH''.

Manyata:ohhh teri'..

          And they both start laughing loudly'..

 

AFTER MANYATA'S CLASS''

Udayveer:manyata jaiye aap tayaar ho jaiye hum apko thodi hi der mein lene aenge'

Manyata: han han mein abhi tayaar hoti hun..

Manyata leaves

 

        Then udayveer decides to become evil and calls pakash''

Uday:hello Majnu keso ho tum?

Pakash: mudde pe aa udayveer''

Udayveer: han han majnu jara dhire itni bhi kya jaldi hai??

Pakash:dekh uday mere pas tere is faltu badbad keliye time nahi hai samjhe tum??

Udayveer:han han majnu to soono tujhe lagta hain na ki manyata,oh sorry tumhari moniya humare sath jabardasti aa rahi hai?chinta mat karo vo humare sath date par bhi jaa rahi hai par apni marji se'''.han aur ek aur baat tumhari ye jo brand new nokri lagi hai na who bhi hamari oh sorry manyata ki vajahse lagi hai. Vo kehte hai na tumhare chawl wale style mein "KYA MAJNU CHOKRI BHI TERI AUR NOKRI BHI TERI HUM ESA KESE HONE DE SAKTE HEIN?"

Then uday cuts off the phone'

Pakash:uday uday kutte sun.

 

Phones cut pakash realises that and then goes to raajmahal and makes a scene and all fight takes place as shown in Wednesday's episode'

 

Now day for holi' manyata wakes up and goes out.(manyata to maid)

Manyata:are soono uday kaha hai?

Maid: rajkumari ji rajkumar uday to kabke rajmahaal mein aa gaye hai'..

Manyata:accha tum jao'

                (manyata man mein) "are esa to kabhi nahi hua ki uday mahal mein aaye aur humse na mile"

Then she goes and sees uday going''..

 

     She shouts udayveer but uday ignores her. She shouts four to five times'.but still he ignores her'. Then angrily she goes near him and turns him forcefully holding his arms she says'

                 "TUMHE KYA HUA HAI YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER KE BACCHE??TUM MUJHE SUNKE BHI UNSUNA KYUN KAR RAHE HO??"

 

Uday angrily lifts her hand from his elbow and throws it back forcefully. Manyata is puzzled for what has happened to uday'.??

                        LETS SEE IN NEXT EPI WHY IS UDAY UPSET WITH MANYATA????

                  ~mahi~

so guyz favourite part ??

pasand aya??

 

 

Edited by MAHI1198 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
yayy 1st 1 to comment(finally)
wah g wah tusi te cha gaye!
it was a short and sweet update...
plz mahi make it long long long long next tym...😉
Posted: 11 years ago
fir ek new suspence????????...offoo tum b na!!!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
awsomeee...update mahi
love it update soon thanx for PM.

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