MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14 - Page 34

Super Sweet Update Mahima.

Manveer are just so so so fabulously romantic here.

LOVELY!! Do continue soon

really loved this part mahi after a long time especially manveer moments... really loved the towel scene and also how uday saved manyata from those goons... i really loved how at the end they poured out their feelings... i also like the song u chose it was going so well with this part do update soon and thanks for the pm
Edited by preya_radev - 10 years ago

Thx for the amazing update
Loved manveer scenes

Read all parts togather. Fantastic story. Love it. Thanks for the pm. Conti soon.

hi mahi

MY MADE IMAGINARY EPISODE 20... MANVEER...
Uday is sitting on bed, manyata sitting besides him...manyata keeps
her hand on his cheek: jao jake fresh hoke ao...uske bad mein tumhare
ghav saf karti hai...
Uday:ok..
He goes in washroom and here manyata gets uday's call...
Unnati: hi manyata waha sab kesa hai??
Manyata:yaha sab thike unnati...
unnati: kya hua manyata tumhari awaaj itni utri hui kyun hai??
Manyata tells Unnati everything:unnati kya uday ke life mein koi esa
insaan hai jiske bare mein who bahot kuch feel karta hai par kabhi
express nahi karta???
Unnati sad: dada ke life mein esi ek hi insaan thi manyata...MAA...
Manyata: thnks unnati...there's a sound of opening of door... acha chal
lagta hai tera dada agaya...bye...
Uday comes out in black banyan and trousers...his hair wet...but he is
still sad...she hold his face in her palms...
Manyata: Uday mein janti hu kit um bahot upset ho par please bhul
jao sab kuch...
She kisses him on his lips...but this time he doesn't kiss her back...as
the aggressive Uday used to... Manyata sad moves back and is about
to go when suddenly Uday catches her...and pulls back...he hugs her
tightly... seeing his pain manyata's tears fall... the music starts...
Maan yeh saheb ji
Jan hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane
Naina Nawabi ji
Dekhe hai Sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe Ishare
Maaan yeh saheb ji
Haan Karta Bahane
Naina Nawabi ji
NA samjhe ishare
Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo re Saibo
She makes him sit on the bed...she cleans all his wounds...and both sit
silent for sometime... Uday phir bolne ki himmat karta hai...takes her
hand in his...
Uday: im sorry manyata hum wo...
Manyata keeps her finger on Uday's lips...: shhh... koi baat nahi...
bas tum phir se mujhe mere pehle wale Uday ko wapas kardo...
Uday smiles and covers her in his arms...
Surkhiyan hai hawaon mein
Do dilon ki milne ki
Ho ho Arziyan hai nazaron mein
Lamha yeh tham jane ki
Kaise huzur ji yeh lab dikhlaye
Chuppi bhi lage ke bhi gazab yeh dhaye
Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere baiga dheere dhere Apna sa dheere dheere
LAage se Saibo
Manyata : ek baat puchu Uday?
Uday:hmm...pucho...
Manyata:mujhe apne bare mein kuch batao na...
Uday: hmmm...to kya janana chahti hai humari princess humare
bareme...??
Manyata: mujhe chod ke tumhare life mein ese insaan jinse tum khud
se bhi jyada pyaar karte ho...
Uday haste haste: hmmm... dad choti mo...he stops his
expressions change...his expressions change...tears fall...MOM...He
gets up from bed...
Manyata takes his face in her palms...
Manyata:mujhe maaf kardo uday tumhe upset karne ka koi irada nahi
tha mera...
Uday:its ok...
Manyata:kuch batana chahoge??
Uday:very upset...pata hai princess bachpanse dad ne sikhaya ki
kabhi bhi apne jazbaat juban pe lane se hum kamjor ho jaate hai...
Manyata:hum dono to ek hi hai na Uday...mein chahti hu kit um har
who jazbat mujhse share karo jo najane kitne saalo se tumne apne dil
mein ked kar rakhe hai...bataoge mujhe plz??
Uday looks at her innocently and nods...
"humari ma ka naam sulabha tha... Maharani sulabha giriraj singh...
bahot pyaar karti thi wo humse...hume humesha pyaar ka rastaa
chunane ke liye kaha karti thi...lekin us din..."he stops...
Manyata: tensed...us din kya??
Uday:tab hum 14 sal ke the... Humari ladai virayangad ke sath chal
rahi thi...unke riyasat ke maharaj ke dad ki mot hamare dadaji ke
hathon se hui...badle ke liye us raja ne kuch admi bheje hume maarne
keliye... Listening this manyata shocked...hum aur maa angan mein
khade the...pata nahi kya hua par achanak wo humare samne aa
gayi...hume kuch pata nahi chala...lekin jab wo neeche giri tab humne
dekha ki unhe goli lagi thi...
Uday apni story batate batate neeche gir gaya...
Maa:mujhe maaf kardo Uday beta...
Uday: maa maaa ap hume chodke nahi jaa sakti uthiye...maa...
His mom closed her eyes forever...back to present--------
Uday sitting on his knees shouting loudly...MAAA...
Manyata shocked to know this... Uday looks at manyata ...
Uday:mar dala humne unhe manyata ... humari wajah se unki jaan
chali gayi...kash wo log hume mar dalte...
Manyata sits down on her knees and hugs him tightly... Uske pith ko
apne hath se sehlate hue...
Manyata: nahi Uday ...jo kuch bhi hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi
thi...please apne aap ko doshi mat mano...
She moves back and wipes his tears...kissing him on his forehead...
Uday crying: manyata promise me kit um mujhe kabhi chod ke nai
jaogi...
Manyata: I promise...
Uday rests his head on manyata's shoulder... Manyata this time
covers him in her arms...
Manyata in mind..
" mujhe nahi pata tha ki is haste hue chehre ke piche tumne itna dard
chupaya rakha tha Uday..."
She makes him stand and takes him near the window...pointing
towards the brightest star in the sky...
Manyata: wo tara dekh rahe ho Uday wo tumhari maa hai...jo tumhe
dekh rahi hai...tara banke who hamesha tumhae sath hai Uday ...
Uday shout looking at the star:kyun kyun chod ke chali gayi app hume
maa kyun??
He goes and sits on bed...crying...
Manyata goes and sits near him...and holds his hands...
Manyata:Uday utmhe aaram ki jaroorat hai... you should sleep...
Uday nods and keeps his head on her lap...uday still crying... manyata
moves her hand through his hair...
Uday: thank you manyata
Manyata:sh... Abhi kuch mat bolo so jao...
Uday sleeps and manyata bhi thodi der baad so jati hai...
In morning...
Manyata sees that she is sleeping in Uday's arms... Uday still
sleeping... Manyata sees him innocently...kisses him on his head...
and removes his hand from her waist...and is about to go when uday
pulls her back...and she falls on uday...
Manyata: uday ye tum kya kar rahe ho??
Uday: apne hone wali patni se kiss lene ki soch rha hu...
Both look at each other's lips... manyata controls herself...
Manyata: abhi nahi badme...
She says in a low voice...
Uday: please princess ek kiss do na...
Manyata blushes...ese mango ge to mein mana kese karungi??
Ek Shararat Hone Ko Hai
Ek Qayamat Hone Ko Hai
Hosh Humare Khone Ko Hain
Humko Mohabbat Hone Ko Hai
SHE KISSES HIM ON HIS LIPS AND RUNS FROM THERE... AND GOES
AND STANDS IN FRONT OF THE MIRROR...
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
La Lai Lai Lai La Lai Lai
Uday comes and hugs her from back!!: thanks princess...
Manyata turns: Uday plz ese thnk you kehke mujhe paraya to mat
karo...
Uday pulls her more closer: ach toh hum puri tarah se ek ho jaate hai
na...
Manyata:beats on his chest... Shut up uday kuch toh sharam kar...
Uday: ab sharmana kya princess shadi ke raat toh vese bhi hum...
Manyata keeps her finger on his lips and he kisses her fingers...
Uday:I LOVE YOU...
Manyata: I LOVE YOU TOO...
~mahima~
i know i know u all wanna kill me but believe im sooo tired of the dailyy chores i e hw and assignments obvio that m unable to write anythong so sorry!!!
love u guys!

Finally you update after ages. Loved it to bits.
It was amazing. Every single line was written beutifully.
Manveer scenes were sooo cute and sweet.
I hope to see alot of manveer romance in further updates.
Please dont make us wait again and update soon

hi mah⭐️i

It waz fab update n romantic thnkz for pm 👏