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kaussar

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged

This is so good. you are a very good writer.. i wish you would continue this as an SS... Describing Dilshad's and Najma's reaction to their love and Ayan's feelings when he comes to know that Zoya has fallen for Asad.. it would also be wonderful to read  about Asad's  reaction when Zoya tells him that she also loves him.
Please continue it. Big smile

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AMMY12

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with you!??

Why must you go and make me dream up all sorts of fantasies with you brilliantly beautifully written work?! WHY!?

Haayeee, I'm in LOVE with this TS. I LOVE it. PLEASE do write more! Embarrassed
-Raina

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Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
Loved it! That was amazing!

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gunnu1

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Posted: 18 December 2012 at 5:35am | IP Logged
it was awesome...loved it!! u write beautifully...

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aaw1505

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Superb.. One of the best i have ever read..

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Chinnu.Munnu

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged
lovely update.Wink

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