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Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) (Page 4)

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
My LIKE button is problematic on this tablet Cry .

Indu that was just beautiful! I loved it. I can't wait to see how you continue it.

By the way, is Mishti a nickname or the actual name ?

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
@Nina: Thanks pal...Don't worry about the like button. What matters to me is your support, and I know I have it.Hug   As for the nickname...I'll try to explain it in the next one. Let's see.

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Superb writing...please cont soon...im curious now, what is She hiding for..

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:53pm | IP Logged

Indu, enjoyed this opening to pieces!  Clap  Particularly liked how you used the dialogue and created the distinction between the two characters because even without the use of name handles, their personalities are so clear from the get-go.

Very curious to know what has brought them to this point.  Also looking forward to seeing how her plans to leave go, as well as to see what he does shortly after his bandages are taken off.

Eagerly waiting Part II.  Tongue

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
@luv_lvndr: Thank you so much. Hmm...I am still working around the Why of Mishti...Smile


@1HappyGrl: Thanks, dear friend. SmileYou caught me there...The entire opening based on only a single verbal interaction, with no supportive text, was the tricky part. I am glad I could get you to define the distinction. That's a big relief. Big smile

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
Dear Indu it was an amazing write up those words touched my heart like a gentle breeze.loved it waiting for next update.

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
hey itz really very nice..
I like it.
Enjoying reading it...

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Great part dear. 
Continue soon dear

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