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Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Superb !!!

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Gosh! Why do you always do that,Indu?! Distract me when I am working.Well,it's my mistake,but what to do,your writing always does that to me and icing on the cake is that it is an SS not an OS.Great! First of all,superb title,well,I think Yash is blind and Mishti/Aarthi is an Orphan and she going to leave him for a reason.

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Thats just beautiful! Clapwaiting for the next part!Tongue

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Gosh...did it sound very mysterious? Hmmm...the comments indicate so. Well...I am happy I got you sleuthing there. Don't worry, I am not much of a Mystery writer (or a reader either...always ended up reading the end of an Agatha Christie or an E.S. Gardner book after the first few pages of readingEmbarrassed)...Let's all take this as it comes. Thanks for such a stupendous response so soon after I posted it...Hug



@Maha9: Thank you.Hug



@Ash: Thanks...You know most of the times the sparsh is the last sense to be felt deeply in matters of love. Yet, here it becomes the first...Smile

I loved what you say here...<<If you could just sense someone with Sparsh (touch) then they are sure to be someone who is not just part of your life but your life itself>>   That's so, so beautiful...and so, so true.Hug


@Morris:
Thank you. You have always been such a great supportHug...Oh, I wanted to do something for this all-important milestone of PV...and as you all know, the only way I can contribute in this forum is by writing. So here I am, trying to sprout an idea that struck some days back and stayed with me. And a Sunday is as a good a day as any...with loads of time to finally dwell on the idea.


@Angel: Aww...that's so sweet. I am touched, pal. Thanks.Hug


@Zet: Thanks, my friend...So you approve...great. That means I am fine with what I am doing...Hug



@AmeTz: Thank you. I will give this my best shot.Hug


@Sarah: Thanks, bud...You flatter me, really...Your words overwhelm me. Hug
<<Sparsh definitely surpasses all other human senses...for it not only recognizes but feels the unspoken & unseen love...just by a mere feel of Sparsh!!!>>  Aha...that is so beautiful. You just wrote the essence of this story in that one sentence. Thanks.Clap


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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:30am | IP Logged
@PuvZ: Thank you.Hug


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@Pearl: Thanks...Oops, sorry...Didn't mean to distract you.Embarrassed Just my way of appreciating the show we all love so much...Once again an unplanned move...Blame it on my husband's Sunday golf.Wink
Glad you liked the story idea. Ummm...your thought about Yash/Aartiis something to ponder over...Tongue Hug

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by InduG64



@Pearl: Thanks...Oops, sorry...Didn't mean to distract you.Embarrassed Just my way of appreciating the show we all love so much...Once again an unplanned move...Blame it on my husband's Sunday golf.Wink
Glad you liked the story idea. Ummm...your thought about Yash/Aartiis something to ponder over...Tongue Hug


No need to be sorry,I just finished it and your husband's Sunday golf becomes a treat for us,sometimes,it makes us laugh,sometimes cry,sometimes gives us goosebumps,and I loved the concept.Hug

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Great.. Loved the last dialogues.. Basically about a touch.. Awesome idea! 

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
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