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Arshi SS-I Bet,I Love You Thread IV (Page 39)

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Chapter 34- The Surprise

Khushi's POV

"What is Going On here?" Arnav growled.

I instantly caught his right hand in case He decides to punch my Brother.

Aakash turned around and his mouth fell open.

Payal looked liked someone had died.

"Dude..You came early??" Aakash questioned with wide eyes while getting up from the pool.

"Arnav...Khushi came back with You?" Payal said simultaneously with Aakash.

"Yeah...We came back? I thought You both will not
be here?" Arnav said with an edgy voice.

What is happening?

Did He actually not notice that they are 'TOGETHER'!

"Oh...Yeah right.We should not be here. Come On
Payal..." Aakash said clutching Payal's hand again.

"Hello..What is this?" Arnav said pointing towards their clasped hands.

"Ummm...Arnav.We were going to hang out together ?" I tried to just salvage the situation.

"No..Khushi don't distract him...Its now  or never...Arnav, I have to  tell You something." Aakash said nervously.

"Yeah..Tell me.What?" Arnav grunted.

"I am dating Payal...She is my girlfriend." Aakash confessed.

The whole atmosphere changed.Payal looked like She is going to faint any second & Aakash looked like a heavy burden has fallen off his shoulders.

I tightened my hold on Arnav's hand so that He does not pounce on Aakash.

Arnav is standing as if anticipating something.

"Okay..Go On..What else? Is that all?" Arnav said finally.


Definitely weird!!

"Is that all? You are not mad at Me?" Aakash asked optimistically.

"You are not angry?" Payal said smiling brightly.

"Why would I be?" Arnav asked squeezing my hand lightly.

"God! And We were scared for nothing.What is the point of the whole secrecy then?" Aakash
grumbled making Me giggle.

"Why would I be mad or angry? It is your fault that You assumed I would be furious.And anyway I always knew You liked each other." Arnav confessed.

"You knew? Then why did You not say anything ?" Aakash questioned incredulously.

"Because I wanted to speak up for My Sister the way I did for Your Sister." Arnav said shrugging his shoulders.

"Awww...You are such a good brother." Payal said hugging Arnav.

"And Also I can't possibly be standing in the way of Love.Even though we have just learnt a lesson from the past. Can we Khushi?" Arnav questioned looking deeply in my eyes.

I was so awe-struck by his statement that I forgot to blink while looking at his face.

Aakash coughed loudly and yelled, "Oh no...PDA ALERT!! They are doing it again."

"Shut Up..We are not doing anything!" I said smacking his arm hard.

"Are You complaining ?" Arnav smirked while Payal giggled.

"Arnav...Now You dont start!" I shrieked.

"Arnav..We are going from here...You please don't give My Sister any reason to complain." Aakash teased while the two of them walked towards the poolside connecting door.

"Did You just complain that We are not doing anything?" Arnav said when Payal and Aakash were out of earshot.

"Arnav...Please.I am very tired. Today has been one of the best days in my life.And I so want to sleep." I said blocking a yawn from my mouth.

"OK...Lets go and put You to sleep." Arnav said pulling my arm.

Arnav's POV

I had to put Khushi to sleep at any cost if I had to pursue my next plan of action.

"NO!! I meant that now You should go Home.It is already 11:00 P.M.And I am too tired to talk anyway." Khushi said blocking my way to her room.


My phoned blinked indicating an incoming message from..Aakash?!?

'Dude...Put Her to sleep already.She must not know When You leave the room.Ok?'

God! On one side the Sister is so stubborn and the Other side the Brother is pressurizing!

"Kookie..You are so tired today.You should have someone to take care of You...I will do the honors." I said while pulling her hand towards the room.

"Why do You call me Kookie?" Khushi questioned abruptly.

Taking a deep breath,I confessed."Everyone calls You-Khushi.If even I will call You Khushi,I will be in the same category.Calling You Kookie makes me feel closer to You.And I think You  are blushing now."

"Arnie...What did You and NK talk when we were having a movie-night that day.?" Khushi questioned while sitting on the edge of the bed.

I told her everything about the conversation I had with NK in the kitchen.

"NK is a good Brother.He really cares for Me." Khushi concluded after I stopped talking.

"Okay...Now is there any questions left in your rapid-fire round or are we going to sleep?"

"Haaawww...Only I am sleeping here..You are leaving this place now.!" Khushi said while walking towards the closet.

"Okay.Then You change.I will just be back.Have to tell Payal that We are leaving after 10 minutes." I said trying to keep my voice steady.

"Okay." Khushi said and proceeded towards the washroom.

"Uh..Uh..You are forgetting something?" I said raising my eyebrow.

"Am I? What?" Khushi asked innocently.

"My Good-Bye Kiss?" I said while walking towards her.

"Arnie...Payal will come barging in any second.You should go from here." Khushi said while her cheeks had turned red.

"Okay.But I just want You to know...I Love You." Arnav said.

"I Love You too...Arnav," Khushi said cupping my cheek.

"And I just want to make everything right in your life.So trust Me with all Your heart.I will never let You down." I promised.

"I know You will make everything alright for Me." Khushi said.

I bent forward and pecked her cheek lightly which instantly colored up.

Khushi's POV

"Arnie..Thank You for taking care of Me." I said hugging him tightly.

The door banged open.

"Here We go again...You don't get tired confessing over and over again?? We already heard it for the 100th time." Aakash growled.

"Now,You don't become a roadblock.You remember that I have let My Sister be Your Girlfriend right?" Arnav said walking towards the door.

"Excuse Me...The same can be said about You also...!" Aakash said while pulling Arnav out of the room.


Arnav & Aakash fighting over Sisters and Girlfriends!!

After Arnav left I showered and changed into my night  dress.

I walked towards the pool like it was my habit to talk to 'Shyam' every night.

I sat by the pool reflecting on the things which happened in the course of the day.

The way Arnav apologized,The way they spent quality time in Detention,Their first kiss,The family reunion and the way Arnav cared for his Sister made Me feel very warm at heart.

"Shyam...I Miss You very much.I know You are looking down at Me and smiling.I feel blessed today." I whispered looking at the twinkling stars.

"I hope I chose the right person as My Love.If You were Here,You would absolutely Love Him...He has promised to make everything alr-..."

"KHUSHI!!!!" Arnav's shriek made me stop my train of thoughts.

What the Hell was that?

Why is Arnav screaming?

Oh No..Is He in some danger?

I quickly opened my door and walked outside towards the stairs.

It was pitch dark and there was absolutely No sound from anywhere.

"Arnav??" I yelled making him know that I have come to help.

No Answer.

'Khushi..Don't panic.' I instructed myself.

"Arnav...!!!" I screamed while a wave of panic had attacked my voice.

Total Silence.

"Aakash..Payal." I tried calling while I stepped down carefully from the stairs in the darkness.

Somewhere there was a click sound and the whole living room was illuminated with lights.


Precap- There can never be surprises in logic.

P.S- So...What is this surprise all about?

Start thinking out-of-the-box.

The one who comes up with the exact answer gets the next update in their name.Wink

Akanksha...Sweety,You are already disqualified because You will display your answer out and loud for Everyone + You already know it.

Chapter 35- The Party

Edited by morning_star - 01 December 2012 at 1:02am

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Angel13 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
awesome update
thanks for pm
continue soon
Lil_Miss_Crazy Goldie

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
res... Tongue

dekha.. mai apka peecha babhi nahi chorongi..:P 

ab i will edit after coming bak..:P 


nice move khushi... 

i m wonder the same khushi.. why didnt he notice they are together.. 

oh god.. akash is gonna tell him... ab kya? 

bachoo... ab toh akash gya... 

actually wierd..
dont tell he already knew..
di i will kill u esa hoa toh... 

Arnav is not angry.???? i m all losing it all.. 

oh... DI.. what was that.. ARNAV knew it .. OMG DEKHA MAINE KHA THA ... maine PHELE HI KHA THA... 

DI now that was  total RAMANCHI.. (i guess thats what khushi says :p) 
u totally misguided me...

han han.. haslo ab ache seh... i will get back to u... 

dekha khushi maine info nekal li thi but the mugambo misguided me... 

chalo ek baat to pkki ho gayi.. i knw u a lil too well...   

aw... arnav is such a darling... 

hehe..:P  "PDA ALEERT".. haha ...  they do it 24X7 with their rabba ve's... 

hehe.. cheesy arnav... 
lemme tell him... yup she is complaining.. toh ho jaye rabba ve arnie... 

next plan in action.. something still left... 

Akash is also involved... hmm.. fir seh daal mai kuch kala hai.. lgta hai .. this time i will have to myself get the info out of mugambo... 

aw... how will not blush when arnie is the one flirting.. 

see this time my gutter mind didn't work but it was khuhsi's... 

yup arnie.. khushi is right.. d moment you go 4 PDA koi nah koi ajata hai.. 

see told yah here u pecked n dere akash came.. 

aww... senti khushi... 
dont worry now u have arnie... 

y is arnav screaming... 


so that was what arnav was talking about..

OMG OMG ... i so totally know it... ok god... sachi mai... 

now that another ramanchi di... 

hawww ji.. y cant i take part... n thats so unfair di...

i wanna open my big fat mouth... like now now...

oh god..  thats y u have written there can never be surprises in logic...

 di please lemme also take part nah... 

Edited by arshioholic - 30 November 2012 at 8:20am
Take_That IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
What is d surprise?

Edited by Nexus_13 - 30 November 2012 at 3:28am
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:24pm | IP Logged

nice one...
waiting or next
Big smile

Edited by tanvia - 30 November 2012 at 1:13am
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waitin for t surpriseSmileSmile
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Superb update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
Loved it.
Glad Arnav didn't get mad at Akash and Payals relationship.
I happy that things are finaly looking up for Khushi.
Looking forward to your next update.
Thanks.Big smile
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!! Waiting fr d surprise...

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