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Arshi SS-I Bet,I Love You Thread IV (Page 17)

..MorningStar.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:15pm | IP Logged

Everyone Please calm down.
Who spread the rumor  that I am ending the story?

Please Stop PM-ing Me about it...

I am seriously buried under My books and I can't reply to everyone.

And for the record...
There are exactly 8 more parts left to this story excluding Today's Update.

I promise I will come back with a Very interesting New concept...

So...Please co-operate with me...

Today's Update is for all those cheesy romantics who wanted Full Blast Moments between 'A & K'

Chapter 32- The Detention

Arnav's POV

"Now Everyone scoot from here...Party Over guys!" Aakash yelled over the noisy din created by the students after Mrs Manorama had gone back to the staff room.

There was a murmur of gossip and chatter across the room while all the students scattered to their respective classes.

"So...Newly Made Couple...How does it feel to be finally together?" Payal said wriggling her eyebrows and simultaneously smirking.

I turned to look at Khushi whose hand was tightly clasped in mine.

Her face had acquired a faint tinge of pink and She looked absolutely mesmerizing.

"Arnav, at least close your mouth.You are drooling,Dude." NK teased while physically snapping my mouth shut.

"Now...Your job is over.You may leave." I growled looking at the four of them.

"Excuse Me...That is my Sister.I have to take care of her." Aakash teased faking concern.

"I am there now.You can shift responsiblity." I confirmed looking at their smirking faces.

"Woohoo...Someone is being possessive." Lavanya squealed.

"Guys..Lets just leave them alone.The color of Khushi's face has turned red which indicates She is NOT blushing but is going to burst her volcano of anger soon." NK teased Khushi.

Khushi smacked hard on NK's arm.

"Guys...Should We escort You till the Detention room or will You go there Yourself hand-in -hand?" Aakash teased while Lavanya and Payal giggled.

"Aakash...Quit the cheesiness...Or else I will spill the beans on your secret..And trust me it wont be a pretty sight." Khushi said glaring at Aakash.

The effect was enormous.

Aakash looked stunned and NK looked like He was controlling his laughter.Payal looked like someone had deflated her and Lavanya was studying her nails.

What is this secret??

"Guys...We should definitely leave...Mrs. Manorama's lecture in 5 minutes." Payal said abruptly pulling Lavanya's hand.

My Sister is definitely acting weird.

"So...Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta...Ready for our first date?" I questioned when everyone were out of earshot.

"First Date?" Khushi asked cutely scrunching up her nose.

"Yeah...Our date in the Detention room." I said hlding her hand and guiding he out of the canteen.

"Arnav Singh Raizada...Dont You dare start with your cheesy flirting again...You got me landed in this detention." Khushi said while We kept walking through the  nearly empty corridors of the College.

"Seriously speaking, This was the only way I could think of getting Us together." I confessed.

"Really...Standing on a table and killing your reputation in front of your friends?" Khushi questioned halting in her tracks in the doorway of the Detention Room.

"Kookie...Killing my reputation was equivalent to killing my arrogance.And it was all worth it because the girl whom I Love is with me now." I explained.

"When did I say I Love You?" Khushi questioned narrowing her eyes.

This girl never fails to surprise Me.

"What do-.. ? " I questioned but stopped looking at her smirking lips.

I walked forward and She instinctively imitated my move by walking  back wards.

"Khushi Kumari Gupta...You are going to pay for this.." I said as her back hit the wall behind.

Khushi's POV

I am so Dead!

Why cant I keep my mouth Shut?

"So...Are You planning to confess right now...because I clearly can stand for my whole life in this position." Arnav said keeping his hands on either side of my waist blocking my escape.

"Arn-...Why did You fall in Love with Me..?"  I questioned scanning his face.

His face which was centimeters away from mine scrunched up in confusion.

"Kookie..Falling in Love with You was something I had not expected at all.But Loving You is something I cant stop even If I tried." Arnav confessed looking straight in my eyes.

I could see the caramel flecks in his eyes clash with the loads of love they held for me.

I took him by surprise when I flung my arms around him and pulled him in for a bear hug.

"What are You doing ,Kookie?" Arnav questioned while caressing my hair.

"Giving the Guy who gave up everything for Me a hug." I replied while holding him closer than possible.

"I Love You..Khushi." Arnav confessed pulling back from the hug.

"I Love You too..Arnav." I said and meant every word of it.

Arnav puts his lips on mine and it takes exactly two seconds for me to realise that We are kissing!!


Thank God! Arnav is holding me or else my wobbling knees are going to sway any minute.

"Khushi Kumari Gupta...I can Live without you." Arnav said after We broke apart and his gaze locked into mine, "But My life would not have the same meaning If You are not in it.Thank You for taking Me back in your life."

"And I will be for there for You always." I said intertwining my fingers in his hand.

"That was a pretty sweet start to our date in the detention room." Arnav smirked while we started walking towards the seats in the room.

"Hawww...I forgot.We are in Detention..Arnav!!?!?"
I exclaimed while My eyes and mouth had opened wide.

"Yeah...SO...?" Arnav questioned.

"So...Why is there no supervising teacher in the Detention Room?" I enquired looking around the room for any surprised teacher.

"Do You really think that Your Brother, My Sister and Your cousins will let any teacher interrupt our first date?" Arnav said flicking the tip of my nose with his finger.

Is there a medicine for high-speed rise of blush??

Because evidently I need one,Right Now!

"I am grateful to their efforts and also to You." I said lightly comforting his hand.

"I will be grateful to You if You will accompany Me to my house today night" Arnav said clasping my hand in his hands.

"Why ? Your house? " I said as I realized what He was suggesting.

Me & Akshay Singh Raizada confrontation?!?

No Freaking Way..!

"Your Father-In-Law wants to apologize to his would-be Daughter-In-Law." Arnav teased.


Even that word makes my insides feel warm and my heart grow fonder.

"Arnav, Stop kidding me...I cant be talking to Your Dad...He will never want to see Me." I confessed while my heart was doing the somersault.

"My Dad has specifically told Me to bring You Home...And I will assure You that I will stay by your side the whole time."

"Aww..I know You will..Ok then...Evening in your house..Then what's the plan?" I confirmed.

"You will see." Arnav said shortly while his eyes glittered in amusement.

Precap- Father-In-Law & Daughter-In-Law...Reconciliation .

Next-Chapter 33- The Reconciliation

Edited by morning_star - 29 November 2012 at 12:13am

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Lil_Miss_Crazy Goldie

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged

I m here ... 

all geared up to read my detention wala rabba ve... 

jaldi jaldi update do di .. nahi toh i will flood u will jalebis... 

plus if u wala borrow some craziness for this one .. i am always at your service... 
u know my talking if enuf... 


haye.. hands tightly clamp.. 

shift responsibilities... hmm.. smart move arnie...

but does he know that payal and akash??????? 
do dont remember ? 

I loved NK teasing... 

hahahaha.. the effect khushi word had on AKASH... OMG I STILL CANT CONTROL MY FITS OF LAUGHTER... 

ARNAV dont listen to her .. continue with your cheesy flirty i love it... 

is he gonna pin her to the wall... OMG I CANT WAIT... 

""Kookie..Falling in Love with You was something I had not expected at all.But Loving You is something I cant stop even If I tried.""
haye.. i m totally in love with his line.. i gotta pen it down some where for future record ... 

yupiee my bear hug... 


SHE SAID I LOVE YOU... now arniee is gonna be in seventh heaven... 


THEY ARE KISSING ???? IN MEAN REALLY ????FINALLY???? or i m day dreaming again... 

ab mai kya bolo... 

haye.. koi toh rok loh... 
arnav is so sweet yaar .. and their cousins too... 
i wish i had cousin like them.. but i have a pack of jerks with me .. 

I m really sorry ... i guess my gutter mind has start to work now after reading HOUSE AND NIGHT in same sentence... 

crap i feel lyk a jerk now .. :P he wants to take her so that his father says sorry to her .. n look what was i thinking... 

yaya.. fir seh daughter-in-law.. i loved it ... n this time khushi knows about it ... oh lucky she ... 

IT was a lovely update di ... I LOVE IT ... 

NOTE :- for all those who read my comment .. i seriously want to say this guys... even if u think i m being rude.. coz I LOVE MY DI YAAR... u cant just push her to do something she isn't willing for and which is not in her hands... the FF IS ENDING.. we need to accept it.. v cant push her to exceed it... can we ? plus at this time when u people are hardly able to think properly coz as we are so into the gumm of arnav leaving and ipkknd ending .. how can u not be thankful to this lovely angel who is writing so awesome rabba ve's wala updates DAILY for us leaving behind her own sorrow... guys.. please dont make her feel guilty or sad ... she doesnt deserve it ... guys we need to see it as a happy ending approaching and then wait for a new era which will start after a short break when di will be back after her exams... 

p.s. I LOVE YOU DI ...  

Edited by arshioholic - 28 November 2012 at 9:45am

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vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 10:31pm | IP Logged in detention ...can not wait! 
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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Good one!! Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:43am | IP Logged
just came upon your work nd its awesome
plzz pm me wen u update next
tanvia IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 12:49am | IP Logged

It was great...awesome...waiting for more... to how this show gave us feeling feel love and now its leaving

Edited by tanvia - 28 November 2012 at 1:19am
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Edited by coolflora - 28 November 2012 at 1:26am

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