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kunchu

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Hey everyone.. I was just thinking about Arjun... and something clicked my mind... wrote it down..
please go through it.. and please do comment..

MISS YOU…!!

 

"Life is so unpredictable.. Kuch din aise bhi ayega … ye tho kabhi socha hi nahi tha… kisine teekh hi kaha hai.. 'man proposes ..God disposes..' .." he smiled weakly at his own thoughts. "wow… mein ye kya soch raha hu.. Get a grip Rathod.. you are  the chief… you should handle the matters.. par.. mein kya karu..? mein bhi ek insaan hu.. mere bhi ek dil hai…" Sameer was disturbed.

It was a Sunday.. usually ETF ke koi off days nahi hota hai.. kahi na kahi, koi na koi case tho hotha hai.. patha nahi aaj sabko kya hua?? Sab ekdum shant hai.. but he knew well. Everything is only calm from the surface.. andar sabko suffocation horaha hai…

Rawte.. isse wapas team mein lena ..!! OMG .. that was one of the hardest days in my professional life.. its not that he was not good.. problem was 'he was too .. good' . jealousy track bhi nahi hai..  bas uska attitude.. its unbearable.. par mujhse acha usse kaun pehchanthe hai.. iss gusse ke peeche chupaye hue dard.. mein achi tharah samajthe hai.. par usse samjhana… ye tho namumkin hai.. he shoud move on…

Aaj.. phir se koi path breaking discovery ko dhund raha hai.. dekho kaise baita hai?? Haath mein pen ghumaye.. file mein aankh chipkaye.. Rathod smiled a bit.

"kya hua Rathod?? Akele hi smile kar rahe ho??" Shree, chotu and Rathod was surprised.  Arjun didn't even look up from his file.

Iska theesri aankh hai kya??     "kyu.. ab mein smile bhi nahi kar sakthe hai kya ??"  he stood and went out of the hall.

Ye Rawte bhi.. kuch bhi dektha hai…. Tho phir usne wo  kyu nahi notice kiya  jo hum sabne dekha tha?? Ya phir wo notice karna hi nahi chahtha tha…  he could see her dimple smile in front of his eyes.. he closed his eyes.. Capturing the memory forever..

Riya.. sometimes so irritating.. sometimes so understanding… sometimes so mature..the best research specialist I had in my professional life.. her smile was enough to lighten the day.. sometimes she was like a long lost sister.. a friend..

Usse tho Rawte ek mystery tha.. she wished to know more about him.. aur jab usse patha chala.. I could see her melting towards him.. Shree aur Chotu tho pure uske peeche the.. stupids.. unhe tho ye lag raha tha ke mujhe kuch nahi patha tha.. just stupids…

Par aise kuch tha jo unhe sachmuch nahi patha tha.. usse kabhi bhi Rawte ke dil ke baath nahi patha tha.. in fact Arjun ko khud nahi patha tha.. but I knew it.. wo Arjun…. jo baar baar chotte se chotte baath pe chilla rahe the.. he was melting.. aise lag raha tha ke wo fir se jeene laga hai… I saw it.. jab usne wo coin wapas rakha.. she took it.. she too had some feelings..

Aur jab.. Riya uss admi ke gun point pe the.. fir se meine Arjun ko haarthe hue dekha.. Riya ke mauth ke sabse bada jhatka ussi ko hua hai.. I saw it in his eyes.. waha dard tha..

Kyu chupa rahe ho Rawte?? Aur kithne din?? Roshni ab nahi ayegi… aur naahi Riya.. aur kab thak is dil ko ek bandh pinched mein band karoge….?? Usse azad karaado.. kabhi tho apne dil ko halka karo…

Patha nahi.. ek aisa din bhi ayega.. jab tum fir se mujhe wo purane dost ke tharah dekhenga?? Par I promise my friend.. I'm here… always…

He looked back at Arjun.. who was sipping his cutting chai.. the phone rang.. announcing a new case.. after all.. this is ETF.. yaha aaram karna keliye time kaha hai???  

 

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Clap nice... was different.. to hear it from rathod's POV... again remembered riya is dead n wont come back...Cry

nice one...


Edited by Queen.Bee - 24 November 2012 at 8:31am

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Nice

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
[I]beautiful concept..loved it very very much from Rathod's POV Thumbs Up

missing Riya again & again after this..sach me wo kabhi nehi aa sakti kya?? Cry

the theme was quite similar with your first ff "LIFE GOES ON...ETF KE PAAS TIME KAHAN???"[I]

Edited by -sree13- - 24 November 2012 at 10:57pm

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Great dear so emotional loved it mera dil bhi melt hogayaCry

Edited by saba-ramisa - 24 November 2012 at 10:27am

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Very gud 
Luved it

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Very nice...a very different and refreshing Os...Rathore's point of view of Arjun's pain...wow...really good
And loved that bit...Rathore akele hi smile kar rahe ho!! Arjun will be arjun...

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
nice

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